Raise Joan of Arc into a Queen and Then Throw It Away

666. Blessed are those who can continue to read this latest chapter. Does the author not understand the status of the saint? Your saint was arrested by the police, but you still... . . I don't have the heart to say it anymore, just the single one, the more, the more, no matter what, I will not give up, I don't think that the character will become fuller after adding it.

6. Click on it and you will see the big "Joan of Arc Darhk" on the outside of the character.

Joan of Arc regarded herself as the little daughter of God and dedicated her life to Jesus. How could she fall in love with a man?

Damn, I have nothing more to say, please do it quickly. The protagonist was originally from the Eight Kingdoms Fighting Chicken FMVP. After it was put on the shelves, he was directly transformed into a new recruit. It is not scary to lose his power. His knowledge, wisdom, courage, and even personality have been wiped out, and he has become a puppet. It is normal that few readers will buy it.

It seems that you have written in a single direction in the past, and even consciously used a dual-line narrative to make up for the weak emotional drama of the single female lead. But if you write the plot of the second female lead in this way, it will collapse later. It will be ambiguous, others will be tempted, and then you won't accept it. Then isn't it pure abuse later? Is this character created without fault and becomes a symbol to set off the relationship between the male and female protagonists? It shriveled up in a sudden way. This is a big taboo when writing a single heroine. Didn't you discuss it with the editor before writing? Even if you don't write a single heroine later on, try to shape this character. Even if you can get the character back, you will definitely not be able to control the dual-line structure. You wrote the dual-line because the single line is weak. Now how do you deal with it later?

This book is not purely historical, it contains some magic and the like. The author's writing style is good and the reading experience is very comfortable. But I do worry a little bit whether the author has dealt with the reasons why the protagonist left Joan of Arc. It is boring to have a simple happy-go-lucky mentality, which is not in line with the character of the protagonist. The reason why the protagonist is currently a supermodel is a mystery, and it may be related to leaving Joan of Arc. It is recommended that the author sort out the timeline again. It is a bit difficult to calculate the age of Joan of Arc as being older than Aaron.

I seriously doubt that this is something that would happen in this world where you couldn't even name it. The princess and queen were expelled from the palace, molested by gangsters, and made dirty jokes. The queen has no background to become a queen? The princess has no knights? There are no patriots in the city? Watching the former queen of your country being molested by gangsters? Is this a plot that humans can write? The author is completely to highlight their pain and prepare for the emergence of the female protagonist and the male protagonist later. You can quit the trap now

It's not about what the author wrote. Just write this when it's published? You used 100 pieces of text to pave the way for the protagonist's image. It was overturned after only two were put on the shelves. Do you want to read what you are writing? The male protagonist who has gone through so much is trembling and frightened when faced with a female spy. You could just write him to urinate. Outrageous

Premise: Regarding the age of the male protagonist, it is unclear how old he was in the timeline when he taught Joan of Arc. The author did not give a detailed introduction, but it is estimated that he is 4-6 years older than Joan of Arc. More than ten years after the beginning, it is clearly stated that Joan is 23 years old and Joan is 29 years old, but Joan is 6 years older than the male protagonist Let me tell you my opinion. I think the author may be writing a reality simulation flow, and the male protagonist who teaches Joan of Arc is just a projection of the 23-year-old male protagonist at the beginning. This genre is quite popular recently. Of course, many details currently do not match this statement, it is just speculation. Furthermore, the male protagonist probably died under the identity of teaching Joan of Arc, and then his soul passed into another teenage child in another country, and when he grew up, he became the 23-year-old male protagonist at the beginning. Secondly, it may be the second possible extension of the above. Due to certain events, the male protagonist has no choice but to fake his death and leave to other countries to remain anonymous. The author has set that the life span of extraordinary people will be extended and aging will be slowed down, so the 23-year-old age at the beginning is just a disguise for the male protagonist to remain anonymous. Finally, I think this book is well written. The biggest controversy at present is that more than ten years later, Joan of Arc is already 29 years old, while the male protagonist has become a 23-year-old young man from another country. I just hope everyone can ignore this point. The author obviously wants to dig a hole. There may be explosive points later, and of course it may be embarrassing if it is not written well.

It's too fragmented. After the new chapter starts, they are like two people. From their personalities to their behaviors and ways of thinking, they are completely different from the previous one. I used memories at the beginning, but now that it is released, I will also use memories to explain why it became like this after the war.

I can only say that it is a pity that this book has been spinning big question marks in my mind like a snail shell since the heroine was arrested and sent to prison. The heroine first chased the little girl inexplicably and then was arrested together. After being thrown into prison, the guards were killed by the Knights. She was asked to escape with the little girl who turned out to be an experimental subject. She and another cultist went to hold back the King of Knights who came to clean up. Then the abstract came. These two guys released experimental bodies that mutated into demons to attract the King of Knights. However, the heroine took the little girl and staged a temple escape in the city, and escaped until the hero came to the rescue. Then you told me that this was all done by the SB emperor, and that the male protagonist was responsible for the human experiment of self-destructing infantry, and that there were people rushing to be the experimental subjects? What are you talking about? Why can't I understand the Chinese characters. Jpg Who is this? From what crack in the stone did it pop out. Jpg The first few chapters were well written, so why did they suddenly expand? After that, it was fast-forwarding like an outline, which made me wonder if the author had given up on himself and compressed all the abstract plots and magic operations together and threw them out. You are so kind, and you know how to save me time. I have always felt that although my eyesight is not that good, this is indeed the first time that I feel that I have been wrong. I can only say to keep working hard and see you in the next book.

What was this written after the war?

🤔Where is the foundation for becoming an ordinary person? Is the male protagonist in these chapters the same as the one described previously? In the previous chapters, he was so awesome that he assassinated the Mad King and fought against the King of Knights. Now he is shocked and breaks out in a cold sweat when he meets a spy. I think his strength has grown after joining the Black Iron Knights for so many years. Don't say that he is an ordinary person now. A skinny camel is bigger than a horse. His confidence and vision can never be worn away by temporary circumstances.

Looking at the comment section, it seems that apart from the beginning, I have been writing about the timeline of teaching Joan of Arc. My suggestion is to return to the real timeline within 50 chapters, because the beginning is actually equivalent to a promise. After reading this beginning, the [reward] readers want to see is the real time. If the real-life timeline of the interaction between the protagonist and Joan of Arc is not written, it will be like being full of dopamine and endorphins - the sense of anticipation is not equal to the pleasure itself, not to mention that it is written from the perspective of Joan of Arc, so the interaction between Joan of Arc and the protagonist is basically locked in.

The protagonist feels like a different person

Can the author fill in some pitfalls? The first part is so good, I think it can be regarded as the best among the best. But I can't even stand the second part. I don't know what's going on.

The protagonist has no charm at all now

Being able to write 10,000 words is awesome, but when will the plot be revealed?

Unclear endings are not a good habit

Disappointed. The previous article was so good. I thought it would be a masterpiece.

He's not dead yet. What's the point of continuing like this? It's a fraud on the shelves, and it has changed from invincible flow directly to maggots. Everyone who reads the book is telling you to die if you don't become a dog in the market.

No, you are too watery.

A fake corpse? 😓

These days, any trash can write a book. Are the protagonist and heroine the same person?

I know the author is slowly filling in the holes, so don't be impatient