Full-Time Master: Unparalleled Sword God, Girlfriend Su Mucheng

The biggest highlight of your book is the combination of the protagonist and Su Mucheng. After Su Mucheng joins the protagonist, he can become a comrade and help the protagonist to understand human nature. But you let Su Mucheng go to Xingxin? I would like to ask if there is any highlight in what you write like this? Let me tell you honestly that your writing style is very average and many things are not explained clearly. Your setting is even worse. According to your setting, the protagonist team is not attractive at all. You have many attractive foreshadowings in the early stage (I don't know if you know it). There's a reason why you couldn't survive before. Practice more. You won't become popular just by changing the theme.

Double opening? I like this one better

I feel like your writing is quite good, but when it comes to some details, it always feels like it's AI-like. It's not good, but it's a little weird.