
Divine Eagle: I Raised Master Li Mochou
神雕:我把师父李莫愁养成了
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- Martial Arts
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- Male
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- Wuxia Fan Fiction
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- 7mo ago
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Chapter 8, I am speechless
The timeline in the book doesn't match up. When Li Mochou went to Lujiazhuang, how old was Yang Guo? How could he already have one arm? You must know that Yang Guo had already met the grown-up Lu Wushuang at that time, so the timeline doesn't match up.
Li Mochou's problem is not the kind of oppression and harm that turns black 1. She is indeed not "oppressed by survival", but has abilities and resources far beyond ordinary people She is a disciple of the Ancient Tomb Sect, with excellent light kung fu and martial arts, and masters high-level martial arts resources; >After being expelled from the master, she did not live on the streets. Instead, she traveled around the world under the name of "Red Fairy", killing people, stealing wealth, and becoming a powerful figure; In the original work, she was dressed luxuriously and moved freely. She could even support her apprentices and buy real estate for a long time, and her life was far better than that of ordinary people. She is not a weak person who is forced into a desperate situation, but a strong person with violent capital. Categorizing her as "blackened due to injury" is an over-interpretation. She is not like Qiao Feng, who is torn between life and loyalty, nor is she like Yang Guo, who suffered from poverty and suffering in his childhood - her starting point is not low. 2. The core of her blackening is "out of control possessiveness" and "extreme narcissism disillusionment", rather than an existential crisis. Her problem is not the "broken love" itself, but her expectation of absolute possession of this relationship: She believes: "I betrayed my master for you and deviated from the orthodoxy, so you must belong to me." When Lu Zhanyuan married He Yuanjun, what she felt was not sadness, but the humiliation of betrayal and the collapse of value. Her revenge is not because she can't live, but because: "You don't deserve happiness, and I can't accept losing." This has gone beyond the category of "psychological trauma" and entered the field of "pathological personality": She regards the whole world as an extension of love relationships. This is the jealous destruction of the happiness of others; it is the restoration of a sense of self-control by creating fear; This is not a "person destroyed by love", but an abuser who implements a reign of terror in the name of love. Not all pain can be upgraded to "oppression", and not all blackness is justified. What Li Mochou calls hurt is just a broken love. If this is also called "oppression", then how should ordinary people who are really struggling to survive on the line of food and clothing deal with themselves? Farmers have had their land expropriated, workers have lost their jobs, and refugees have become homeless... These are the real forms of oppression for survival. Li Mochou, on the other hand, took the initiative to choose the path of destruction under the premise of being rich in material and ability. So, her essence is not a "tragic woman", but a typical example of "high-functioning antisocial personality". Summary: - She is not a victim, but a perpetrator. She was not abolished in martial arts, but relied on her martial arts to dominate the world; She was not forced by life, but lived a good life but took the initiative to do evil; Her "emotional injury" cannot be an excuse for her to massacre innocent people; Her classification as a "tragic woman" is an injustice to the truly oppressed. She doesn't need to be pitied, she needs to be judged. The value of her story is not that it makes us cry for her, but that it reminds us: Some people have everything in their hands, but still choose to become devils.
One of the most disgusting people in Jin Yong's novels is Li Mochou. This person sounds very majestic and evil. He is nicknamed "Chilian Fairy". His persona has always been that of a domineering president. Anyone who stands in his way will die. He seems to dare to destroy the world at any time and be the enemy of the whole world. In fact this is a huge illusion. A She chased Lu Zhanyuan to the wedding, but was stopped by an old monk, who beat her up and forced her to promise not to do anything for ten years. Ten years later, she came back to kill the entire Lu family, including her ex-boyfriend's brother and his entire family, including the long-term worker, maid, and two underage children. He also said majestically: "Since I have printed nine bloody fingerprints on the wall of the Lu family, these two little girls must be killed!" Having said that, did you find anything wrong? Did Li Mochou forget something? What about the old monk who deserves to be killed the most? This thief ruined your great cause of revenge and even forced and humiliated you in public. Isn't it the so-called death of those who stand in my way? Why did they kill even the long-term workers but forget about this monk? The answer is very humorous. It turns out that this old monk is a senior monk from Tianlong Temple in Dali. Tianlong Temple has strong martial arts skills and a tough background. It is a meditation class exclusively for the Dali royal family. Li Mochou does not want to mess with it. Since I can't afford to offend him, I might as well forget about it selectively, kill only the poor and untouchables like long-term workers and maids, and continue to act like a domineering president. Jin Yong revealed a truth: all domineering presidents are selective domineering. Two If you look through the book, you will find that Li Mochou loves to do this kind of thing, bullying the weak and fearing the strong all day long. Her love rival is called "He Yuanjun", so others cannot use the character Yuan. "I once destroyed sixty-three warehouses and shipping companies on the Yuan River, just because they had this bad word on their signboards!" Even the surname He is a capital offense. She killed a passerby, Mr. He, and his family, more than 20 men, women and children, just because his surname was He. When the family was wiped out, the poor He family didn't know why they died. On weekdays, anyone who offends Li Mochou will be "immediately killed under the palm of Chi Lian Shen", which is awesome. However, if you read the book, you will know that these rules of hers only apply to warehouse owners, low-level old boxers, passers-by, children, and migrant workers. In Jiaxing, a lot of people offended her. Ke Zhen'e offended her, and Wu Sanniang offended her. They beat her with sticks and swords to prevent her from taking revenge. Li Mochou didn't kill anyone. Towards Ke Zhen E, she "just let him go today", "always be merciful" and "meaning to give in". She didn't dare to hurt Ke Zhen E even after beating him for a long time because his apprentice was Guo Jing and she couldn't afford to offend him. The same goes for Wu Sanniang. During the melee, Li Mochou only picked ordinary people to kill, and did not dare to attack Wu Sanniang. She said, "I have no holiday with Master Taohua Island and Yideng, so please leave." She can't mess with the Quanzhen Sect either. The Quanzhen brothers went to encircle and suppress Li Mochou, but Sun Buer was hit by a poisonous needle. Li Mochou also took the initiative to deliver the antidote to eliminate the misunderstanding. The Quanzhen sect all lamented that they came as soon as they came without bringing anything else. Later, Guo Fu led a group of friends to besiege Li Mochou, trying their best to deal damage. Li Mochou was afraid of his parents and did not dare to take action. She is the one who knows best when it comes to watching people eat and drink. She doesn't dare to mess with those who have a background and bullies amateurs to death. Three The people who offended Li Mochou the most were Huang Yaoshi and his family. Huang Yaoshi asked Xiao Cheng Ying to slap her in the face. It was a real slap, very crisp: "There was a loud slap, a clear and crisp slap in the face. Li Mochou had never been so humiliated in her life." Li Mochou quickly forgot about it. After that, she never mentioned a word about revenge for many years, completely forgetting this biggest shame in her life. To the weak, it is wrong to change their surname; to the strong, it is okay to smack their lips. When a weak person touches her red line, the weak person disappears; when a strong person touches her red line, the red line disappears. Li Mochou once stipulated that as long as someone mentions the name of his love rival in person, he will die or I will die. What would happen if Huang Yaoshi said "He Yuanjun" a hundred times in front of her? Who would die? I guess Li Mochou would only say that she has been having tinnitus recently and her hearing is not good, so don't make a fuss. She also complained that Master was partial to her, but she never dared to cause trouble when Master was around. When the master dies, he will immediately come back to bully his junior sister Xiao Longnu. Professionals choose soft persimmons. Four Because I had seen Jin Yong and met Li Mochou a long time ago, I have long been disenchanted with this so-called "domineering strongman". The so-called "strong man" is nothing more than less conscience and more shamelessness. He is nothing more than being very solemn and playing background music when trampling on the weak. Their essence is to transfer all insults to the weak by the strong and retaliate against the weak; they are just ordinary killers and common people's hammers, posing as if they are detonating Huashan, beating the weak, and grabbing the easy ones to bully them to death. Even if anyone makes me unhappy, I will beat my wife, children and apprentices, such as bullying Hong Lingbo and Lu Wushuang. It's like not killing any of the Dongxie Sect members who bullied Li Mochou the most, but in the end he only killed his own young apprentice, Hong Lingbo. The most ironic plot is that Li Mochou claims not to be offended, and anyone who looks at her one more time will die. As a result, Feng Mofeng, an abandoned disciple of Huang Yaoshi, got into a fight with her, burned all her clothes, and died in the street. It stands to reason that it is time to detonate Huashan on the spot and fight against the Dongxie clan. But Li Mochou just started to forget again. The enemy on the opposite side, Yang Guo, couldn't stand it anymore and threw some clothes over. Li Mochou actually nodded: Thank you. Looking at someone accidentally means death; burning all your clothes in public and giving them a piece of cloth means thank you. Then maybe some people still admire him: Mr. Li is such a domineering CEO!
300,000 Words and five comments...
What a masterpiece! The imagination is delicious, the logic is strict, and the characters are consistent with the original work, but Li Mochou is a bit distorted, a bit like the iceberg female bodyguard
If there are more details about the life between master and apprentice, it will definitely impress readers more and the work will definitely reach a higher level.