Tokyo Rebirth: the Love Interest Is the Victim of the Previous Life

Generally speaking, the structure of the novel is okay, but the plot is completely unclear. While saying that uploading photos to the system is the same as selling them to the dark web, it cannot pass the inner test, while secretly taking photos of the elder sister's head and uploading them, is the left and right brains fighting each other? Or are you saying that you didn't take it yourself and don't pass it on? 😒 Either be decisive and pragmatic, or be a virgin and follow the path of a sunny and righteous big boy. However, it is neither. The protagonist only gives me one kind. He secretly wants to do it but dare not, and finally convinces himself that he is a wretched man who has no choice╮(╯_╰)╭ The protagonist is given a "social death" at the beginning that is basically a dead end. It would be fine if the protagonist is a very powerful person with very logical behavior, but I only saw crazy self-inflicted internal friction and intracranial false orgasm, and even felt that the protagonist himself was abnormal Also, I can understand that the author wanted to write a sense of tension, but combined with the plot, there is no sense at all, and it makes people feel inexplicable 😵‍💫 Hence, two stars 🌟🌟

Can secretly taken photos be used as lock screen wallpaper? It's a bit interesting. Apparently the photos in the computer are hidden. If you like to see the soul piercing the body and wiping the butt of the predecessor, you can check it out.

It feels like the protagonist's brain is very messed up. He is just wiping his predecessor's butt, as if he really did it himself, and is constantly struggling to atone for his sins.

The character is a social beast but worse than a child. Any adult who encounters this kind of thing will only deal with what has been exposed. What is not exposed does not exist and the law does not prohibit it. You can do it. Others who don't understand and are not exposed don't know the logic behind the orgasm and self-movation in their skulls. This alone is unrealistic and cannot be substituted for pure self-movation.

The writing is too complicated and makes me feel very uncomfortable. I don't think much of this book.

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There are too many flaws. Someone in the comment section has already pointed them out. I can only say that as a reader, the content is baffling. I hope the author will not write such a 🐢 protagonist.

The author Wen Qing is seriously ill, and the protagonist in the book is inexplicable

Have skills and brains, don't think about how to make money, worry about what your predecessor did every day, and it doesn't matter if there is no leakage in the candid photos, it will be black. Just get rid of the physical objects (nothing will be left after a fire). In addition to the people in the school who know what you are, who in society cares about what you have done before?

The protagonist is a bit forcefully strengthened. Everyone thinks he is right no matter what he does. The opponent will kneel down at the first touch.

Literary youth, average

，，！ With some luck, Lao Shou Dao wrote his own book "Swallowing Everything: I Created a New World in the Cold Land".

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Great support from the author, Jiangjiang is here, I have read it, and I can't sleep!

Come on, author, you can go to Tieba to recommend it. Many people like to see this kind of twisted stuff.

Isn't this already over 300,000 words? Are you planning to put it on the shelves next month?

I was poisoned as soon as I opened the door. Why can't I sell it to the system? Will the system announce it after the sale or will there be any adverse consequences for others? I really can't understand it.