
The Original Force of Nature
原力自然之万物初始
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 547k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 5mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Fallen Feather's Life Seed
Common life species Dragon lychee - 3 trees - strengthen kidney function and nerve response Bald cypress - 2 trees - strengthen flight and wing muscles Fire paulownia - 2 trees - transform wood attribute force Putuo horn oak - 1 tree ——Strengthen the flexibility of the forefoot Golden Alder——1 tree——Strengthen joint flexibility Qiliu——2 trees——Comprehensive muscle strengthening Silver Fir——1 tree——Strengthen bone hardness Metasequoia——1 tree——Enhance underwater breathing ability
The new star realm given by the God of Nature, the Broken Star Giant Clan!
The Star-Broken Giant Clan, a new book of Star Realm fan fiction
Recommend a fan novel, brothers can go and invest in it
I will share it with you, the author, and I will share it with him later. Your book will help you two promote each other
The author is awesome, even before it is published, he still posts more benefits, like 🤭
Star world new book
You start as a worm, with no elders, no plug-ins, and constant development of new partners and forces on your own. Thank you for your support. Once it's on the shelves, make sure you're full!
I still feel like the protagonist is too indifferent
Not to mention ordinary insects that have no consciousness. I keep freezing them just to get an ice descendant (?) And I said that the seniors and descendants will change and integrate, but now I still feel that they have not changed at all, and even feel more indifferent. I compare the only descendant with the flame spider and think that the descendant is too stupid. No, I have not seen many plots where the protagonist has a descendant, and then you want it to be smarter? ? ? In addition, the protagonist feels like he doesn't know what he is rushing for, he is always very busy. After finishing this one, I started another one. I was writing a slow-paced article every day. Although in others I like the protagonist to be more indifferent, in this article I feel that daily life is also very important.
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The writing is pretty good, and Pig's Foot's feelings towards his fellow tribesmen also come up later on. However, the early descriptions make the elder Pig Foot feel a bit like a tool, and the tender description of the elders towards the younger generation is not so prominent. Later on, I feel that Pig's Foot can be an elder and take care of his fellow tribesmen. (Purely subjective feeling, the author can write according to his own ideas)
In addition to this novel world view and system, first-blood books are about elders guiding younger generations. As long as you, the author, can write well, we will immediately support you as the new first-blood book.
Not bad
But I feel that the protagonist's emotions are a bit weak (?). One of the reasons why I like this world view is the relationship between seniors and juniors, but I feel that it is not reflected in this. One is a senior who has no communication except giving money, and the other is a junior who feels treated very coldly. Secondly, why is there a being who is bigger than the protagonist? That one from the Holy Butterfly Kingdom, is it in this river? Then I felt that time passed quickly without writing down many details. However, I quite like daily life, but this daily life does not even feel as good as a running account (?)
Is there another leading writer? Come on, it's rare.
Just write if you have ever been a bug, it really is a matter of course.
It's too obvious to plagiarize the Astral Cockroach.
It's from the star realm, everyone, take a look
It was a bit uncomfortable to watch. I represented my personal point of view and gave the protagonist a hook, but this trick looked very awkward. To be honest, either open it a little louder or don't do it at all. This kind of hanging is very awkward to the senses. Then there is the point of directly pressing the level to evolve. There is absolutely no need. As long as you eat enough force plants, the evolution will be over. There is no need to lay a solid foundation, it may be the author's extra settings, but many fans, including the original work, evolve after eating enough energy. There are no other side effects, not to mention that the protagonist has elders who eat good food. Then there is the description of the supporting characters, which is too monotonous and has nothing outstanding. The more comfortable thing to watch is that the protagonist maximizes the interests. It is good to give the god-given seed to the mountain owner to cultivate and share the profits. But since there are so few fanfics and the author has a lot of words, they are still updating. Support it.
Looks good
Yes, support, support, support!
Everything else is fine. It's just that the spiders in this book are a bit speechless. In order to get a share of the output of God-given seeds, the protagonist is allowed to steal the seeds of other tribes' unique top plants, and they are only produced by high-level warriors.
A good author must learn how to draw pictures🤓
Star World's new book, please pay attention to the insect design, I hope you all like it.
It is not necessary for the descendants of the Zerg who have unlimited lifespan after dominating the realm, because there is no inheritance for these descendants to inherit, so there is no reason to spoil the descendants.
Haven't found a suitable job yet? What do you do? Post it and see if anyone in the industry can introduce it 🤓