Far Planet: Starting from Picking up the Original Body

The first is the AI ​​chronicle, which is a hell of adjectives + stacked descriptions, wasting a lot of precious space to write about irrelevant things, and the part that needs to be described to arouse emotions is not interesting at all. This is the shortcoming of AI. The second is that Goldfinger's original character appeared too late, and he was still an unknown original character. Writing the original character as a pure superpower can be said to be a waste of readily available traffic. The third is that I like to write character dialogues. The battle plot is not bad. I usually just find something to say when I have nothing to say, and write dialogues in detail. The character image cannot be created by stacking dialogues. This should be included in the first point, but it is too prominent, so it is listed separately. It is normal for novices to make mistakes. It is difficult to correct after writing so much. Please pay attention to it in the next book.

Wonderfully written. 👍

The writing is very sci-fi and the technology is advanced. 👍👍

Interspersed with Iron Claw's daily brutal management and the current predicament of the Pickup.

Well written, keep up the good work 🙂

Can you provide some pictures?

Getting better👍

When will the author update?

Where to go next? Is the Primarch human?