Return to 1984: Northeastern Past

I don't know how you feel about it, but I don't like stories about suffering and hatred. Work hard at your career, can some insignificant people and things interrupt your life?

The story setting is pretty good but the flaws are obvious. The food standard for building a house was too high and did not fit the background of the time. The cost of food could be used to build another house. The author still needs to do more homework on hunting. If you carry a gun and wander around the mountains, you won't be able to hunt roe deer and deer. To hunt such things, you have to wear a harness or use a dog guard. In the 1980s and 1990s, my family would receive whole roe deer, pheasants, flying dragons, and half chickens as gifts every year. Most of the roe deer were harpooned or shot with shotgun shells. After people enter the mountains, they become the home of animals. Your hearing, smell, and mobility are not as good as those of wild animals. Without the assistance of hunting dogs, you can't even see the shadow of a roe deer when you wander around. As for hunting tigers, I just took it as a joke. Don't be fooled by the short videos of the past few years. Also, greenhouse vegetables were still a niche technology in the 1980s, with a very low penetration rate. Are you sure that the protagonist's identity as a ranger in his previous life would allow him to understand greenhouse technology? Therefore, the storyline should be as relaxed as possible, and don't think about doing everything at once.

Besides, the protagonist is crying at the beginning. It makes me feel embarrassed and regretful. It's impossible for the protagonist and his wife to have a deep relationship. At most, they regret or feel guilty. It can't be because one person can't go out for the rest of his life. Hehe, it's not that the relationship is deep. Goodbye garbage plot.

It would be better to write about the white-haired girl, which would lead to more resentment and hatred.

It's been a hundred chapters, 8 and he couldn't get along with a treasure. After more than 50 chapters, I told him, 8 he even said that he might not be able to stand up to the fight, he was really stubborn.

The story is okay, the dialogue also has local characteristics, and the sentences still need to be polished.