American Comics: I Become a Kamen Rider After Meeting Spider-Man

Your punishment mechanism is outrageous. You might as well say that because of the appearance of you as Kamen Rider, the Kamen Rider universe is attracted by you, so the Marvel universe you are in and the Kamen Rider universe are integrated with each other. This will lead to a "crossing" situation between the two universes, and then the decade will cross over to find out why chimera occurs.

And the writing is also very strange. You have so many inexplicable psychological descriptions, which are completely unnecessary. It seems a bit too weird, especially the abstract section.

So far it looks okay, but the punishment mechanism is a bit silly

Two Spiders in One World is a bad article.

To sum it up: Marvel is a cesspit. I wanted to see some external power to make the ending better, but the author insisted on bringing Shukara in to make the cesspool even more cesspit and want readers to eat it 😅

I have read several Kamen Rider Marvel movies. Let's talk about one failing: the punishment mechanism is too severe! First of all, there are indeed relatively few events in Marvel movies, but judging from what the author wrote, it is not a movie, it is a hodgepodge, so a pure knight versus hero is enough to write and watch. Secondly, the punishment mechanism is disgusting to readers. The system draws back the bad things, but they still appear out of thin air. The punishment mechanism is too serious. I personally think that your punishment mechanism should be adjusted smaller, such as randomly making Marvel characters gain certain aspects of memory, strengthening certain characters into monsters, and certain items.

I can accept you drawing the card repair organization memory and becoming a villain or something. The punishment mechanism of beating you is too disgusting. Top-level boosts just after you start developing?

1. The characters are Tony brothers. 2. Spider-Man is not the Dutch version. 3. A weirdo with a knight's worldview. These three elements are always inseparable, and there is always one of them.

Since you are going to write Kamen Rider, you must be prepared to become a hero.

The male protagonist's character is too childish. The Marvel plot is not well written and he insists on adding a villain in the world of Kamen Rider. However, it becomes nondescript. I suggest the author go to DC to understand what a hero and the darkness of the world are.