Rebirth, on the Wedding Night of the Factory Director, I Was Left to Talk About Technology.

The foreshadowing was so long, but the wedding night was just a snap. It ends in an anticlimax, and readers are looking forward to the climax, but end up getting through it without even boiling water. The review is not that strict now.

After seeing the introduction, I stayed curious.

Have you ever slept with the factory owner's wife? Just write, take it for granted, 🙂

Did you win the prize once? If not, do you have to come back several times until you win?

It's short, small, long-winded, too watery, rambles here and there, and makes no real progress.

It's clear to everyone who came in based on this title introduction what they want to see, but even if the scene about the director's wife is removed from the content of the work, it can be said to have no impact. Is this a thief? Such as Cao. If the emotional line of this selling point is not advanced or written well, it can only be said to be just food to pass the time.

This introduction makes wolf friends excited.

The gimmick was not written well, and there was a lot of golden chapters in front of it, all of which are characters. Look at the pictures and write the words, just like the script of a short play. You can't write abstract people of the era, and then write them as concrete characters. Then there are too many psychological descriptions of the director, and the whole plot is complicated. After watching the street play in one piece, I will remember the colorful things. Grasp the details and the character will stand up in just a few strokes. The advantage of words as a carrier is that your words and sentences are well grasped, and the readers will think vividly, and the most critical night is completely skipped, which makes the whole stunt end in an anticlimactic manner. Unless you only plan a gimmick and then go straight into the routine, then pretend that I didn't say it, otherwise you have to write about the temperament of the sister-in-law. It can be small actions, it can be emotional changes. It is better not to write explicit ones. A hazy shadow can make people daydream more. A shadow can be thrown into anyone, and it will immediately establish the sense of the times, but there is nothing, just a silent statue, just like the previous picture and write words, then there is nothing, stiff plaster

It's so long-winded. So many chapters don't advance the plot at all. It's just a waste of words.

The protagonist I saw was calm, calm, and very reborn.

On the wedding night of the factory director, he left me as the groom

Stop making such a cumbersome plot and kick the mistress away.

A lot of people died from this kind of thing, killing with passion

The update is too slow, please update quickly!

Is this Factory Director Zhang so stupid? Such an obvious idiot?

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