Liver Properties at Hogwarts

Goldfinger is something that can be redeemed in the LOL Soul Fighting Arena after the emotional system obtains gold coins. However, it seems that the author has a strong suppression mentality, and there are obvious symptoms of insufficient enjoyment after reading this book. There are also some small bugs. The protagonist and Harry are Muggle buddies. Harry was sorted to Slytherin first, and then according to the original With Harry's character, there is a high probability that he will accompany the protagonist to Slytherin. However, this is a small problem. The bigger problem is that after the protagonist actively chooses Slytherin, the frequency of gold coins is not as high as expected, and he does not reveal the corresponding plan. He works hard and passively responds. So what is the purpose of going to Slytherin? ? We set up an octagonal cage with someone in the lounge, and then used the force of a normal adult. They didn't even send them to the school hospital. They were in a state of being bullied. This was written very realistically. This slight sense of frustration has always been around. However, for those who like to watch non-genius nannies fuck, it should be considered a bonus.

What's the point of going to Hogwarts? If you're not in your own circle, don't force yourself to squeeze in.

It's a fucking magical school for Muggles to attend.

The feeling of this book is that the author has a lot of ideas in his mind, but his writing skills are not enough to connect these ideas reasonably. In addition, many details are not handled well, which makes the whole book very confusing.

What's cool is that it's a genius magic flow, so don't write like a strong man with 0 magic! ! It will prevent you from opening this book! I didn't click it several times. It actually looks good after you click it.

The protagonist's golden finger is the same emotional system as in King, Spare Your Life, but what is exchanged in it is the equipment in the golden shovel. It was very funny, especially that panel which was really speechless.

If my personal expectation is 100, the good comments in the comment area have raised my expectation for this book to 80. Your "squib level" in the first chapter has directly reached 30 😅 for me. I hope that the subsequent content will be more exciting.

Use public opinion or create a ritual magic to add a theory of pure blood rarity to the collective subconscious, tempting dark wizards to kidnap and buy the organs of pure blood wizards and use them to refine potions, which can enhance talents and even life span. Let pure-blood wizards turn into the flesh of Tang monks and arouse greed in people's hearts. This is the best way to deal with some self-righteous minority classes. After all, they are born noble. Without affecting the secrecy law, it would be absolutely interesting to have a blood hunting activity within the wizard.

The protagonist is a type of person who has a lot of energy. It's not that he doesn't have magic power, but his magic power is low at first and then gradually increases. I suggest the author change the title of the book. I missed this title three times and never read it. I clicked on it when I ran out of books and found that the content is better than I imagined.

Come on, author, Jiangjiang is here, stick your little head out here

It's well written, but it's a pity that it's a eunuch

Sorry, the overall development is a bit lackluster. The protagonist doesn't have many outstanding highlights. The magic is not very strong. There's nothing great about physical training. The book is called The Body Forging Wizard. But you basically have nothing to show for it It feels like if you can use magic. Alchemy and the like can create something from the fantasy world of the protagonist's previous life. It doesn't have to be weapons, toys and the like can also be used. When practicing, for example, wizard chess can be transformed into an elf battle, get a belt that can be used for disguise, or other things. You can get it and sell it for money, but it doesn't seem like the protagonist is very short of money.

I have been reading the Hogwarts fanfic for a long time. The writing, plot, and rhythm of this novel are all relatively stable. The author's writing is really good. My personal rating is 7-8, especially the early plot, which is very distinctive. The Slytherin Muggles are isolated and bullied. There is nothing wrong with it. What a talent, Krypton becomes a boss. The plot and rhythm of this episode are really good and very distinctive. Others simply don't write this kind of hard work and counterattack feeling. The black humor of some sentences and dialogues also makes people smile. The author steadily goes to work and writes according to his own outline ideas. Legacy of Hogwarts is a gift from Epic. I don't know if the author has played it. I personally hope that the author will dig deeper and combine this part of the content. This game is an expansion of the world of Hogwarts. When I personally played it, I always paid attention to the mission characters, ancient magic, and map structure in the game, which greatly enriched HP novels. Currently, there are not many people in the fandom who combine these. This is just a waste, because This is an uncontroversial expansion. If you are struggling to come up with a unique plot, you might as well use the content that others have expanded. For example, the things left by the protagonist in the game, the books on the protagonist's body, and the protagonist's use of the Room of Requirement. Magical animals can be raised in it. The furs of magical animals can be used to make reinforced armors. The secret rooms and treasures of Hogwarts in the game are all materials that can be used and combined.

It would be a pity not to continue writing this book. I hope the author's family is safe and he can come back and continue writing.

Cut it again⋯ Please recommend similar hp articles

There is a problem with the rhythm. It is too weak in the early stage. It will look better in the second half of the first grade. Looking forward to the next one

Please speed up the pace, the front is too bland, I gave you a first decision, I hope you won't be killed by me

The book titles have been changed again. Each one is more unpleasant than the last. If I saw this title now, I would definitely not click it. Please think of a good title. What advice did that unreliable person give you?

It was interesting to read Lao A's comments on Harry Pott today.

? What the hell is this name, how did it get into my bookshelf?

If you don't click into the book, you will think it is a mindless white text. The content of the book requires patience to savor it carefully. The introduction is so impatient that you want to finish Quirrell after ten chapters. The introduction cannot be too far away from the content. The content is focused on daily life and character description, so it cannot be such an impatient introduction. I wish I could finish it. The settings are all given to the readers. Readers who like daily writing and emotional descriptions will most likely not click in to read the introduction. Those who like to read mindless white texts will leave quickly when they click in the introduction and the content does not match the introduction PS: I saw another book about Hogwarts with LOL plug-ins, and wanted to compare the level before clicking in. That one was also slow to get started, or even slower? Surprisingly, both books are well written, but they are on different routes The one lives alone, grew up in an orphanage, is well versed in the ways of the world, and focuses on tasks This one has a happy family, grew up surrounded by happiness, and earns gold coins by causing emotional fluctuations. I will read both books.

Introduction The introduction of Goldfinger is too cumbersome. You can read the main text even if you don't know what Goldfinger is. The plot introduction at the bottom should be moved up, and the plot introduction should be completed first before writing Goldfinger. It is best to introduce the golden finger in one line, or you can put it at the bottom of the introduction. Those who are interested can read it in detail. And the title. I came in based on the words Hogwarts. No features, too vague. The word "gou" will mislead readers. The protagonist needs to arouse other people's emotions to earn gold coins. He is taking the initiative to cause trouble and cannot be regarded as Gou. Moreover, the title is both silly and silly, which somewhat destroys the magical atmosphere and lacks room for imagination. You can even choose a few permutations and combinations of these five words: Hogwarts, Hex, emotional system, prank, and daily life. Hogwarts' Emotion Forging System/Hogwarts Daily Pranks/..., Use whichever type of title you want to attract.

Now that I know about eunuchs, I couldn't help but read it 😭. It's really well written.

Original title (-40 points), current title (-7 points) Title Sorry for your beautiful content!