The True God of All Sources Who Devours the Starry Sky

You can play. Very disgusting. If you were a star, cosmic level. Apprenticeship, I don't know. But you are already immortal. Say it again. You are a cheater. Apprentices must also be at the venerable level or the overlord level. The timeline can be set as you wish. I don't know what to say. Be a eunuch soon!

It's all nonsense. It's your turn to discover the inheritance of the gods. The master of the universe controls time and space. What can't be detected? The human race has been exterminated long ago with such a low resource utilization rate.

I couldn't stand it any longer, so I scribbled a few words about the initial universe cultivation time in the original book (30 years at the universe level, 300 years at the domain lord level, and 3000 years at the world lord level). I also wrote about making the king immortal and going to the primitive star. I was completely speechless. The primitive star is so unqualified?

I wanted to laugh when I saw it. Kunwu Universe Kingdom didn't even come out, but King Zhenyan came out.

The timeline is too messy. Since it is the early days of mankind in the universe, many people should not appear so dry again.

The author is Chun Yun, and most of the plot is fantasy.

The biggest problem with this book is common sense errors. Fans who like Swallowing Starry Sky are basically very familiar with the setting of Swallowing Starry Sky even if they don't explain everything about it. Moreover, the proficiency template has not been crowned the king for tens of millions of years. The cosmic-level Tongtian Mountain requires 12th level. Don't you think that others will come to congratulate you for reaching the 12th level of immortality? It's shameful. Insight is about perception, not combat power. For example, after Ke Di passed through the 20th floor, he would have reached the peak combat power of Feng Wang. Ke Di had only killed Feng Hou, and Lian Luo had also killed Feng Hou at peak level, but Lian Luo was already immortal. When Luo Feng passed through the 18th floor, he was still angry about how to kill Feng Hou because the immortal body was really hard to fight.

The author didn't even read the original text carefully, but he actually wrote that the protagonist Monarch Immortal went to the primitive star to grab treasures. I was really stunned 🙂

I felt relieved when I saw that everyone was criticizing the author. The beginning was disgusting. The average military leader's immortal net worth is 10,000 hun yuan, but the initial universe quota auction is worth 10,000 to 20,000 hun yuan. Ordinary immortals can't afford it. The average realm leader has a net worth of 10 hun yuan. The male protagonist can borrow 20,000 hun yuan in a galaxy. It's really nb. He is also a rubbish realm master who is not even recognized by the law. Other people in Luo are not as nb as you, and human Luo is recognized by the law of light.

It's too outrageous, okay? 1. The protagonist's basic understanding is 6,000 points, and he has only understood 25% of the Law of Fire for more than nine million years. As a result, he comprehended the Chaos Cup once, which increased his understanding by 86 points. After surviving for just three thousand years, he understood the Law of Fire to 100%, and the author set it up that the Law of Fire will only be recognized by the Law after he has understood it 100%. 2. The protagonist has practiced thousands of secret techniques, but for more than nine million years, he has not even practiced a single secret technique to perfection. This is barely satisfactory, after all, you are not the creator. However, after the protagonist obtained the proficiency panel, he did not immediately practice those secret techniques that had been practiced to a very deep level to quickly accumulate understanding. Instead, he went to find twelve secret techniques that he had never practiced before to practice. Isn't it funny? 3. The timeline is extremely confusing. King Zhenyan has appeared and set Lianluo to be a disciple of Zhenyan. However, the Ganwu Universe Kingdom does not exist, and Emperor Yan has not betrayed the human race. There are only 1,000 Universe Kingdoms in the human race. The above information appeared at one point in time. Are you confused?

How could the Lord of Chaos City meet with a mere feudal lord, Immortal? The price is too low, it must be a pain in the ass! Even the Venerable may not be able to meet the Lord of the Universe, let alone Chaos. I am really speechless.

That bullshit golden finger is speechless. With 6000 points of understanding, it has not been recognized by the law for millions of years. As a result, with 6030 points of understanding, plus 30 points of understanding, you have achieved immortality. 30 Points of understanding makes you so awesome. With 6000 points, your special code cannot even be recognized by the law. Also, the special code is the ninth level of the Realm Lord. He has lived for millions of years and knows thousands of secret techniques. Why the hell have you not even perfected one of them? Are you fooling the devil? With your understanding, how did you break through the Realm Lord? Which immortal inheritance did your special code get? Didn't you understand his thousands of secret techniques? ? Your special code is just that of an ordinary realm lord, but you have a profound and profound secret technique! As an ordinary Realm Master, it is impossible for you to know all those secrets that are immortal secrets, right? ? There are more than 5,000 kinds, so they can't all be immortal secrets! Do you have the capital for your special code? If there was, you wouldn't have to go to the original universe to have a special code and have to beg your grandpa and grandma to find connections and spend money. On the upper side, your special code cannot distinguish between five yin and six yang. On the other hand, your special code cannot see yourself clearly.

Alas, it is really poisonous. The Ganwu Universe Kingdom does not exist. How? King Zhenyan, has appeared? The timeline is really a big problem. Brother author? Awesome.

Did you, the author, intentionally make so many mistakes and omissions? It's just like thinking that black and red are also popular even if a star is not popular, and you are deliberately making readers angry. Did you pay for your monthly vote yourself?

I doubt if the author has read the original work

Po Yuhou is so awesome that he can be compared to the invincible king! Intervene in the battle between the lords! Is she the original protagonist? I remember wasn't Luo Feng the protagonist?

Author, if you haven't read Swallowed Starry Sky, don't write fanfics 😰

There are a bunch of setting errors. I really doubt the author has read the original work.

When I write a fanfic, I don't even read the novel. I just rely on the cloud. There aren't many people who are right about the setting and so on. I also have really tough words.

The writing is so bad, read more original works ~ read more original works ~ read more original works ~ don't make things up if you don't know! ! ! What you wrote is fan fiction, not originality! ! ! ! Respect the setting of the original work! ! !

Smiling! The genius universe level in the genius battle can penetrate the first three levels. You, the world lord level, are seeking to break through the immortal level. The first level cannot understand how you broke through to the world lord. The original work breaks through the world master, and there are hard and fast rules for understanding the rules! The original work doesn't matter what fanfic you write.

The author of the heaven-defying immortal seizes the star. The combination of the immortal soul and the body can no longer seize the body. If the body seizes the body at a high level but at a low level, the body will not be able to withstand the direct explosion of the soul energy.

Look at this piece of shit, my waist is no longer sore, my legs are no longer painful, and my heart is no longer beating...

The plot setting is so confusing. Has the author read the original work? If you write it like this, I guess no fan of the original work will read it. Well, I won't click away after reading the table of contents.

Now I know why I have so many orders as a disciple, because there are so many books like yours. Qiuxiang really comes out of comparison 😅

Can a king go directly to the Lord of Chaos City? The laws of water time are here! You didn't even read what the hell Emperor Yan was in the original work. . .

Writing blindly. He became the second disciple of King Zhenyan. In the first nine million years, I only learned 25% of the law. If I add 60 points of understanding, I will fully understand it. The Qianwu Universe Kingdom was not established, but Hu Yanbo, who only lived for 60 million years, that is, the 6000th era, appeared, leaving everyone speechless. It's okay to innovate, but you can't make the original work fly.

I just watched the beginning and can't stand it anymore

The Law of Feng Kong is awesome! The original work was about Feng Shi, who still understood Feng Kong without guidance. He was also a strange man who made it more difficult for himself.

The protagonists of the Devouring fanfic are all apprentices to others.