From Nightmare Liver to Immortal Lord

There are so many things about Guoshu that they are almost unsightly. When I saw the label of Guoshu, I immediately lost the desire to look at it.

I just finished reading the first chapter. The male protagonist's full body examination costs 400 yuan. Is this 400 yuan an ocean? Although it is a parallel world of the Republic of China with slightly higher technology, it still feels inconsistent, like the White Rabbit toffee! ? Is the standard of living in this world good?

Just like what other big guys said, perfect and perfect skill levels actually mean the same thing. If you have to add another level to perfect, it would be better to change it to limit breaking. Also, you actually set the background in the Republic of China, which is a little clever, because if it is set in modern times or the future, it would be more difficult to write, personally I think. But the author had better understand a little more about the historical details of various aspects of the Republic of China, and don't just watch the so-called talents and beauties of the Republic of China in TV dramas, otherwise the sense of dissonance will be really strong. Also, the author is writing about the Republic of China. Whether or not our party and various activities of our party appear, you'd better consider whether to write it. It's better to ask the editor, lest you step on a trap and the book explodes.

There is no need to divide attributes into four types. Body and soul or constitution and spirit are enough. Add a potential value that can be added directly. It's confusing to look at so many points. What's the difference between perfect and perfect skill levels? Why are there so many levels? It's really a confusing operation 😰 Water character and pressure battle are both cool, let alone occupying both, it's 100% cool

Generally speaking, the author should be a novice. It can only be said that he is pretty good, but he still needs to practice. Even if there are few people, you should be able to listen to the opinions of book friends, and progress can be made quickly.

In the new book issue, please read every chapter, and you can also post more comments. The author will write carefully and listen carefully to everyone's opinions, Crab~ In addition, I will give the protagonist a golden finger. Everyone knows what the protagonist will do in the future. I hope that we will continue to improve ourselves.

I hope you can teach me a lot

Looks good so far, keep it up, it's just a little lacking