The Fourth Hokage, Uchiha Kagami, Meets Tobirama Openly

The most prominent problem at present is that the development ideas are very different from those in Konoha Spring and there is no new idea. In addition, the character of the old F4 is directly placed on the young F4. It only considers the impact of the current situation and does not consider the change of a person by various events and experiences In essence, it is just the Konoha Spring. Just change the cover and write it again The comfort zone is the comfort zone, but you can't make no progress at all. Being stuck in one's stead is fatal for an author. If you can only write fan fiction + steamed beans and go back and forth with a few sets and the production capacity is not high enough, you will be kicked out of the track

I feel like the plot of this book is weird. First of all, there is the character issue of f4. They are all young at this time. No matter what the three generations say, when they are young, they will not be like the power monsters who cling to power and refuse to let go when they are old. After all, he was once known as a hero of endurance. How could anyone be so lifeless when he first came to power? At least it took until Minato Namikaze's time for him to gradually become corrupted. By the time I came back to power, I had completely turned into a political creature. I feel that the author did not control this point well at all. In short, I am very unfavorable about this book.

What is going on? Author, are you directly assigning the characters that Konoha F4 developed after decades of ups and downs to their youth?

It looks a bit tiring. Can the conversation be more relaxed and natural? It's always a long conversation.

Yes, I think the author can become an internet celebrity.

The characters of the old F4 are imposed on the young F4, and so far, almost all the characters lack shaping. They follow the plot for the sake of plot. The political struggle also lacks depth and is completely routine. Many characters are given a halo of reducing intelligence. In the end, even the integration of jokes failed. It feels like making jokes for the sake of making jokes, which is very unnatural (this shortcoming already existed in the later period of Dou Guang's book, but it is not obvious)

When to fast forward to "Uzumaki Mito, listen" "I listen"

The title of the book needs to be changed from Fourth Generation to Third Generation. Sarutobi Hiruzen being the Third Hokage is a wrong collective memory. The Four are an anti-Konoha group. Isn't the one who succeeds Tobirama the protagonist? 🤫

Senju Tobirama: Mirror! How dare you come to see me

Only Master Qi can go see the teacher in an upright manner

Senju Tobirama: Rebellious disciple 😡! ! ! Is Naruto something that your inherently evil Uchiha can get your hands on? I order you: let Tsunade succeed the Hokage, and for the sake of Konoha, you lead the Uchiha clan to destroy the four major ninja villages😡😡

Looking at the outline of your history, it seems full of literary youth. Do you have that ability? You don't?

Now I don't even have the heart to read the book, I'm just waiting to scroll through the comments section

It feels very strange, and I like the subject matter very much. But I feel like my writing skills are very poor. The author has also followed more than half of the last book, and I have always enjoyed reading it, especially in the early stage when I was battling wits with f4. This book feels weird when I read it. To be honest, it doesn't look like it was written by the same person...

To be honest, I feel like this book will cut it. 1. It was too laborious to write. The plot of the original Hokage was not used, which meant that most things had to be original. Not to mention the original plot, just thinking of the names and personalities of the supporting characters required a lot of effort. 2. The protagonist's reason for keeping the kaleidoscope secret in Chapter 2 is also speechless. In the current timeline, Konoha F4 can only support 4 jounin. If the third generation has the strength of the late Kage level, will the second generation be used to cut off the queen? The protagonist turned on the kaleidoscope, but he didn't dare to go up and fight a few jounin. At least he could maintain his balance even if he didn't win. In the end, he just found an excuse to be a coward. 3. The problem of Konoha F4. I thought that there would be surprises when I saw the young F4, but I was disappointed. It was still the same old routine, which was to exclude and suspect Uchiha and to be a power monster. It was the same as the plot decades later. I thought, then I might as well write the timeline of the original work, or write a sequel after the previous one. Why bother to do this? According to the plot of the original work, the protagonist is currently in an era where Konoha has only been founded for more than ten years, Ban has only defected for a few years, and has lost the first and second generations. The major families within it do not fully trust it. It is an era of ups and downs. This era background, the first volume The content, shouldn't it be that brothers are of the same mind? The protagonist and Konoha F4 work together to maintain the fragile Konoha, convince the families and other ninja villages, and help Konoha reach the top. You must know that in the original work, the old Konoha F4 will miss Uchiha mirror, and the relationship is definitely not bad when they are young. The content of the second volume is that the brothers turned against each other, the power was divided, and the external world was stabilized. Danzo wanted to make progress and assassinated the third generation, and then the protagonist and Konoha F4 began to fight internally. The third volume is the end of the internal fighting and the beginning of the world competition.

This book is probably about: After awakening the Kaleidoscope, I climbed up to the position of Hokage (with astonishing wisdom and a little bit of stone) using an amazing story line (dialogue), frustration and darkness.

Another funny article about being involved in politics and not having a wife?

Author, most readers of your book have read Naruto, so the original characters are very important. The characters of the novel you wrote deviate too much from the original work. I feel that you are not sure about a very important point. This is the world of ninjas, where strength is the most important thing. You are now focusing on describing tactics, but you still focus on tactics from the perspective of ordinary people. You ignore the destructive power of the ninja profession, so it seems that F4 is very clever in the book. Ordinary people may follow the direction of your book, but ninjas will definitely not. For ninjas, they must bring the situation to the way they are familiar with, that is, intelligence stations and annihilation battles. This is the so-called ninja thinking. Take the plot of the protagonist holding a business meeting in the book as an example. I think according to the logic of the original book, when encountering such a thing, f4 may arrest the main character to check the memory and plant spies. In fact, it is impossible to set up a chamber of commerce at all. Konoha's original interests have long been divided up. The protagonist's establishment of a chamber of commerce is robbing the interests that originally belonged to other clans. Even if the Chamber of Commerce is established, can you leave the village? However, the clause that ninjas are not allowed to go out without any reason is stuck. It is useless for ordinary people to run out. It is useless for ninjas to go out without the Hokage's consent! It's not certain whether he can come back alive if he really goes out, because the Hokage and his roots can go out at will. What ninjas are best at is finding problems and solving people with problems. Another point is Uzumaki Mito, you wrote her too powerfully. In fact, she doesn't have much combat experience at all, and her experience is very shallow. The only point is that she is the partner of Uzumaki's marriage to Konoha, she is the Jinchuriki of the Nine-Tails, and she knows the sealing technique.

As you know, the author's wife is pregnant, and there are many things going on. The novel may be updated intermittently.

You can't stop writing books in the early stage of Qidian. After the interruption, the traffic will basically disappear. In addition, I have seen many people questioning the character of this book. The author is involved in personal affairs, and there is a high probability that he will not be in the mood to write it. I was still thinking of putting it on the shelves with my favorite author, but it seems I have no chance. Did the author's wife go to the hospital because of hyperemesis gravidarum? I have experience with this. My wife had the same problem last year when she gave birth. During the severe weeks, she couldn't even eat or drink water, let alone eat. She had to stay in the hospital for two weeks to receive normal saline and potassium and other fluids. I hang around all day long and am in a very bad mood. My wife would still vomit a month or two before the final delivery. Hyperemesis gravidarum is really difficult to deal with. I hope the author can stay with me more.

Let's start with a long title, but it's a pity that it doesn't even count as a fun article.

This book should be published on the Tomato platform. It smells like AI from tomatoes! Can't even wash it off! It is estimated that after the AI ​​was generated, the author did not make any modifications before releasing it.

Come on, author, Jiangjiang is here

The starting point cannot be found at all, and even the web link cannot jump to the book. I jumped in through comments and likes. Stop doing beheadings, author

Well, I understand why the author doesn't update due to family reasons, but can the author give an approximate time?

It's too early to start with Danzo. At least the Senju Nawa tree is killed. Let's talk about the foreshadowing of the disintegration of the Sannin. From now on, Sarutobi Hiruzen will take over directly without caring about the tail. Author 😁

Are you sick? If you are so powerful, why don't you just become the leader of the clan?

This book is very weird. It feels a bit contrary to logic.

I invested, I hope it won't go more than seven days without updating.