The Final Odyssey: A Catboy's Fantastic Voyage

You'd better kick the author who used Word to make the cover page

To be honest, it looks just average. If it was written by a newbie, I would give up on the first chapter. I know that Suo Lao has a good temper, so I will write a long review. (To be honest, I haven't read the few books on the external website.) Paragraphization: Most readers read on mobile phones. Two lines on a computer means one large paragraph on a mobile phone. Even if this comment only has a few words, it needs to be filled with blank lines to facilitate reading on mobile phones. In addition, the amount of writing on the Internet is relatively high, and I glanced at it and read three chapters. I don't know how many people are in the exploration team ( Style: Since I am submitting to the science fiction area, I have to mention the telephoto. Now the latest book "Hostel" is mature enough to use a template. The Word cover of the starting point science fiction area It has not been changed in ten years, and it can be said that it is the best book to grasp the commercial and literary aspects. A big mountain of otaku science fiction (Fog) The previous ones were too stereotyped, and even the old Moe could not stand it. Even though Huang Yan is really too AI-like, with oddly specific numbers, trivial and not very meaningful descriptions of the environment, and a tone so stereotyped that I almost got pregnant when I read the complete corpus of cute and poisonous characters, and inappropriate jokes. I suspect it was generated by gemini and deepseek. Although I complain a lot, I can't offer any useful advice, otherwise I wouldn't be a street writer. Anyway, I hope Mr. Suohefu can prove his teachings like Yuan Tong, which can reach platinum and span the ages.

At present, I think there is a problem. There are too many long paragraphs. People who usually like online articles will find it very tiring to read. I feel that they can be divided into more paragraphs.

In fact, compared to the online science fiction novels I usually read, it is already above average. This is based on the premise that Suo Lao does not often write online novels. But it's really uncomfortable to look at. It is still recommended to divide it into more paragraphs, after all, you are reading on a mobile phone. The three golden chapters are very important. This is the most important means to attract readers, and the setting of the three golden chapters of this book is not particularly good. The content is okay, but the segments have not been adjusted particularly well. I saw that the segments have been adjusted later, but it still doesn't feel right. Segmentation is actually very simple and not that troublesome. If you think it is broken somewhere, you can divide it into the next section. In fact, there are many novels with few paragraphs in Qidian, which have also become classics. However, in order to attract more readers, it is better for novices to divide their novels into more paragraphs when writing their first novel. In addition, the most important thing about online novels is interaction. You can initiate a vote here, like this.

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