Mystery: the Witch's Fate

I have read 12 chapters. Isn't there a golden three-chapter rule? Why do I feel like I haven't met you? Everyone who reads your book has seen Mystery; you just have to write about the setting. If you write too much, it will be verbose... Did you set the protagonist not to know the Lord of Mystery? But you also said that the protagonist also likes to read online novels. I don't believe that he hasn't read Secret?

Don't even think about writing about marriage, and then hesitating in the comment area. He thinks about the left and right, and wants to eat both sides. In this way, the traffic from both sides is usually not available.

Reported, single, hundred, married, you can write any one, do you have to write the label so vaguely? What does late stage not only mean? I can ignore any marriage novels that I can't accept. I'll report them every time I see them.

Forget it about changing marriage, at most don't read it, keep it at a distance. If you want to write about changing marriage but don't explain it, it's disgusting to the left and right. This kind of SB will be scolded.

The first ten chapters are almost entirely composed of sporadic soliloquies by the protagonist and large narrations. I know you want to write about the sense of growth of "the protagonist slowly explores the world". But readers don't need a fan novel to spend a lot of space on the "setting of the protagonist exploring the world". Not to mention the boring third-person narration and soliloquy.

What does it mean to be late? I wrote it directly in the introduction of Changing Marriage to Single to Hundred. I wanted to write about Changing Marriage but also knew that this subject matter was niche and wanted to eat both sides. The writing was vague and unclear. Isn't this tricking people into killing them?

If you want to marry, marry If you want to marry, marry for free Not just what it means Trivia. If you have the skills to write to the level of a good witch, you don't have to worry about no one reading it.

Then tell me, since it's not a hundred, what's the difference between the later stage and getting married? Is it so difficult to explain clearly? Saying so much makes you look more clownish

After reading the first few chapters, many paragraphs have too many sentences and are too tiring to read. Most of them have very little setting content and are like a running account. The most disgusting thing is that the author wrote about marrying the original male protagonist but did not explain it clearly. He wanted to get hundreds of marriage traffic at the same time, saying it was "not just"? Those who want to watch, please pay attention

These transsexuals finally stopped harming Klein.

Finally I found another copy of The Witch

I prefer Klein or Zhou Mingrui.

Unless you haven't read Mystery and are reading the fanfic directly, you can start reading directly from Chapter 45 to avoid the long narration that sets up the world view.

I have a dog named Chekov. Has anyone seen it?

You can just write a change order or change your marriage and then become single again. Someone has written this, as long as it is not a change. I can't accept a man changing into a woman and then looking for a woman. It's disgusting. Lily can still accept two pure women.

It's not bad, I just need to have less random thoughts 😁 Come on, author! I don't recommend changing to a hundred, I would rather change and get married. Changing to a hundred looks weird.

Marry? Who to marry? Klein, braised noodles, original?

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There is too much nonsense in front of bro. The first six chapters are directly about the world view setting or the protagonist's soliloquy, which gives a very poor impression.

I thought you were an eunuch. Can you still maintain full attendance after breaking the shift?

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