Dragon Clan: Starting from Special Training Lu Mingfei to Become a God Through Alchemy

In my opinion, Dragon Clan fandom belongs to the same writing category as cyberpunk that relies heavily on the author's characterization and worldview completion capabilities. After reading these dozen chapters, you can feel that the author has some skills and brains. Monthly votes and investments are given to you. However, the lack of three-dimensional portrayal of the protagonist in the early stage can be used to deal with the problem of getting rid of the life-span crisis. When the plot and massive character creation after becoming a mixed-blood king are the real skills, come on!

Entering the new volume, I still can't find the motivation to read it. I almost fell asleep reading the chapters I've been saving for more than half a month. The protagonist is a dragon king who knows the plot. He is powerful enough to crush everything at this point in time. There are no more than five people in the world who can fight against him, and they can all be restrained by intelligence. As a result, the protagonist chooses to play house, find eggs with a useless brother, and copy eggs with useless words and spirits. To me, a reader who also knows the plot and knows what the protagonist's strength can do at this stage, it seems that he is just sleepwalking. Dude, did you fall in love with the tapir dream just after you landed in the country? Can these grooved emperors and ghosts combined be able to withstand your slap? Why do you have to play house with them? Is the Black King resurrected and immortal, or can you defeat the Black King and there will be no more threats in the world? If you don't catch the White King quickly, why are you dreaming? Who can stop you at this time? In the final analysis, it was a huge failure for the author to make the protagonist become a dragon king. It was too early, so that all the bosses from Dragon 1 to Dragon 4 have no threat to the protagonist at all, so that now the various layouts of the protagonist seem to be deceiving readers and watering the plot. Isn't it good to be able to protect yourself against the Dragon King in the beginning and bite off a piece of meat with all your strength? To level up, you have to wait for the BOSS to evolve and level up again. The result is like this. Because once the protagonist takes action, the whole drama will end immediately, so I can only write a long paragraph about Lu Mingfei, which makes the plot like plain water and tasteless. It is a pity to abandon it. When I think that the author has written so many ups and downs of the plot, all the decent villains, except for a few backgrounds that dare not end, can't defeat the protagonist. As a result, the protagonist still has to fight wits and courage, which makes me want to laugh.

Insulting me Kai again, he is really changing, everyone must change, change is right, must change. 😏

The writing is okay, but what about the people? Are they all deadpools?

Since your protagonists are so invincible, it is impossible for you to weaken them. So, just put it on the bright side. Just leave out those popular female characters, develop them while playing, and sneak away to show off these few. From time to time, you can give some guidance, have fun from time to time, and come to the rescue at critical moments to pretend to be cool. This will make you want to watch. This is also one of the directions I can think of that will make you not cut off the book.

Really, this is the author's advice from the heart. I have really read this book and don't want to bury it here. It is definitely the most sincere advice Write some interesting plots. Your Seattle plot has consumed most of the enthusiasm of the few readers. Now that it is back to the main line, then try to write some interesting plots so that everyone can return to their enthusiasm and at least be able to follow it. , Even if it doesn't have much to do with the main plot, the most important thing is to be interesting and have interesting things happening around the protagonist, so that you can stop the loss as much as possible

This book makes people have no desire to follow up. The main character does not appear in more than ten chapters in a row, which makes it difficult to read. Now I am waiting for the main character to come out.

The surname of the protagonist is usually refreshed in Changshu, Jiangsu and Xiangtan, Zhuzhou, Hunan. Hope everyone knows

A very good Dragon Clan fanfic. This book is very different from others. The protagonist has no obvious cheats, and he is not the same age as Lu Mingfei. It feels more refreshing based on age, and watching the protagonist grow step by step, the logic is also good.

Support the downstairs, what we want to see is the protagonist's pretentiousness, Lu Mingfei has just grown up enough, I really think I like watching him perform tasks.

Please ask, who are the heroines in this book? Thank you author.

What's going on? Wasn't it updated two days ago? Why are you so silent now and haven't updated in almost a week?

To be honest, I really don't have any desire to continue reading. I've exhausted all my enthusiasm for reading in Seattle. Now the chapter has a protagonist. Either he is causing trouble or on the way to make trouble. Is there no role for the heroine?

As you wrote, a real man should drink the strongest wine, slay the most ferocious dragons, and pick up the most beautiful girls. How can he have the nerve to say that he is a dragon-slaying hero with only a few confidantes? 🙂

Polite self-recommendation, Dragon Clan fan "Dragon Clan: Lu Mingfei's Restarting Life". If you are interested in reading it, welcome critical comments🙏🙏🙏 Friends who like Dragon Clan can come to criticize and give advice, and communicate more

The author is writing well now. If you are not good at writing, it is still recommended not to write about women, otherwise it will easily fall apart.

There are so many eunuchs in the Dragon clan 😭

When it's over, the upper limit is waived 😭

Hey, why don't you look like you😭😭😭

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If it's not much, I'll take a look.

I didn't raise it either. Why is it gone?

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