Wudang Zhenjun: Starting from Being Chased by Yue Lingshan

The previous chapters were well written, but the last few chapters have been too slow. The Lin family's high self-esteem has been fully demonstrated, but they still refuse to advance the plot.

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This style of writing is not written from the protagonist's perspective. It's like a group portrait, which I don't like very much.

A large part of the people who read your book come here for the fan fiction rather than the original martial arts. You need to figure out your audience. Overall there are too many original plots. At least from my perspective, I don't like fanfics with too many original plots. What I want to see more is the chain reaction of various plots in the original work after the protagonist joins. From a creative perspective, the author is much better than those who only follow the original story completely, but from a fanfic perspective, I personally think this is not good, at least I felt it was too bland after reading the free chapters.

Readers, if you have a secondary character you want to leave the country, please leave a message here. The format is: Male\Female+Name+Weapon used [For the sake of visual experience, if the name is too modern, it will be modified as appropriate, and the character's camp, sect affiliation, and strength cannot be controlled] The adopted character will appear in the plot at the appropriate time.

It has a strong sense of déjà vu with traditional martial arts. It's a 4-chapter monthly pass that I like. I'll save more and watch it again. Don't stop updating it.

There are too many original plots. You can focus on the chain reaction after the addition of pig's feet. For example, you can imagine what the characters in the original work did when the plot in the original work was not advanced. But it's best not to have an original plot, as the original characters will easily make you miss the point. Yue Lingshan writes very well, come on💪I'll give you the monthly ticket

It feels pretty good. Although some of the plots are a bit blunt. Why are there so few people?

So far, I feel pretty good, but I can also see some bad tendencies. Mainly because similar works have a strong sense of déjà vu and can feel a bit stiff. I suggest you try to avoid new characters surrounding the protagonist in the future.

I love reading books. The original plot must follow the original work properly.

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