
Douluo: I, Dugu Bo, Slap Tang San in the Beginning
斗罗:我独孤博,开局扇唐三巴掌
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 54k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 7mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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47Fans
26Chapters
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Overall feeling is average
Finished reading it in one sitting. The plot was good, but it just felt rushed. Some characters feel a little neurotic, some feel impersonal (Dugu Yan,) and Yang Wudi's inner activities are too many and obviously redundant. I don't see anything special about the protagonist's personality at all. He is even always in a hurry, and the whole world is his enemy. Forced hatred, hatred with Wuhun Palace. To put it bluntly in the original work, he and Ju Douluo were in love and killed each other. This hatred with Tang San feels very stiff. Chun Chun wrote Tang San as an extremely crazy psychopath. Even Tang San would hide his grudges until he was strong enough before retaliating. He believes in hidden weapons and poisonous backlash, but he is not a fool. Tang San was never a gambler who would gamble his life. He cherishes his life. Tang San has completely become a lunatic. His forbearance was completely gone. Yu Xiaogang's cowardice is gone. Flanders' timidity was gone. Chunchun has become a bunch of extremists. The Titled Douluo noodles were gone. (Not to mention Dugu Bo. No force wants to be an enemy of Dugu Bo. He cannot defeat any Titled Douluo, but the only one who can beat a force is Titled Douluo.) The overall plot feels okay. But it feels very awkward when I read it. It's like my level is not good enough to write a good story. Author, did you sell your account? Or are you starting to switch to AI writing? Your Dragon King story is pretty good. I started following your book from that one. What the hell are you writing about in these next few books? Can this writing style be as low as the island? Isn't this an article written by a newbie? There are ideas, but no techniques.
Aren't you going to get the 100,000-year-old Blue Silver Emperor soul bone?
Author, why can't you invest?
I haven't watched it yet. Let's take a quick look
Titled Douluo starts at level 95 in chapter 20. There is not much to write about later, right?