Fighting Breakthrough: Accepting Disciple Cao Ying at the Beginning

Are chapters 15, 16, and 17 about people? The protagonist is a 22-year-old one-star Dou Zun. Facing the attacks of three Dou Emperors, he can still make his apprentice feel the pressure emanating from the attacks from the opposite side? You are still a bunch of nonsense, and you haven't killed anyone after all, you are a Dou Zun, where is your majesty as a Dou Zun? Still asking for compensation? If you mess with them, don't their properties belong to you? The way of handling this is not like the mentality that one should have after being hunted by the Soul Palace for many years. I am really curious when the price paid by the three fighting emperors for fighting against each other was not their lives but their property?

Weeds, I can't understand them, I can't understand them. The way I write this messy description is also very stupid.

Another fan who has watched the anime but not the original work.

The writing style is quite satisfactory, but the writing style is eye-catching, giving people the feeling that they want to write this in a slightly dark style but can't write it. It's the same type as Gu Changge, who just makes fun of himself, and you are already a member of Danta, and you have mastered the clues to the strange fire, so why bother to go there yourself? You said you want to take Cao Ying to experience, it's absolutely okay, but... People who travel through the sexually repressed continent will also be sexually repressed, right? I just wrote the emotional route with Xuanyi, and it was written like Xiao Chunan. The dialogue is also extremely awkward. After looking at the table of contents at the end, I have no intention of reading any more. If you want to write more heroines, you should at least write some emotional scenes well. It's like Xuan Yi's emotional scenes and elementary school students' compositions. It's just 💩

Many children, many blessings

After collecting it for a while, I finally picked out some catalogs and clicked in to look at them. It was a mess.

The protagonist's heavenly soul + Dou Zun can only refine eighth-grade primary elixirs? ? byd Xiao Yanling Realm + Douzong have both refined five-color and eighth-grade elixirs. The story behind the snake clan is also poisonous