
Naruto: There Is Absolutely No Problem with My Script
火影:我的剧本绝无问题
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- Ongoing
- Length
- 445k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Everyday Romance
- Updated
- 6mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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After reading three chapters, it seems to be fine on the surface, but when I think about the protagonist being 3 years old, I immediately lose control.
It's good, but it's a bit hard to think about the main character being three years old
There is a big problem with the pacing. The main character is only three years old when he is released, and his strength has increased very little... Although he may be a behind-the-scenes character, he is still too weak. It looks like Aizen, who has no strength to back it up, puts on a mouth and pretends to be cool... Tmd you still pretend to be cool when you don't have the strength, I will let you fly!
I'm going to post these few pictures. I've been in a stream of consciousness, and I feel like I'm suffering from literary youth syndrome. I actually want to see the writing style of the mastermind behind the scenes, but I can only wait and see. If I do this later, it won't suit my taste.
At the age of three, I really can't stand it anymore. Why don't you change it? I can accept it if you change it to about 7 years old. So, can a chicken-feathered three-year-old walk steadily?
Accepting Tsunade as a disciple at the age of three is really overwhelming!
The protagonist shouldn't make so many mistakes at this age. Does he know so much at the age of three? Having the strength to kill someone and a three-year-old talking about politics are two different things. And Sasuke, did I misunderstand that Sasuke knew ninjutsu at the age of three?
Like most reviews, the plot of this novel is quite good, but the fact that the protagonist is only three years old makes me feel quite awkward when he says a lot of truths that even adults may not be able to say.
Enter the main line as soon as possible. I want to have fun, but I don't want to see your daily life as a literary youth. It really blinds you to such a high starting point in front of you. Don't drive high and go low. You have to drive high and go high.
Suddenly the Holy Grail War happened, and I just happened to be stuck in the latest chapter, really. This novel is quite well written. The criticism is that I started at a too young age, and then jumped a few years later, which is unclear. Also, look at the rewards given by Hinata's simulator, how good they are, why not use them to improve your own strength? As a result, I still don't know what the protagonist does and what his strength is?
The biggest poisonous point is age
Because of the age issue, a series of plots collapsed. For example, the three-year-old Sasuke who plays Go Fireball thinks he is inferior to Itachi (difficult to stretch), the three-year-old shadow clone protagonist, the three-year-old Hinata who eats fourteen bowls of ramen, etc.
Why do I always feel uncomfortable and embarrassed when reading this book? I couldn't help but turn the pages faster, just because I wanted to see what fun things there were. 😒
Hinata split up? If there were no cheats, I would commit suicide directly. I don't have the hobby of being treated like a dog, worse than a slave!
Forgive me for being arrogant
As for the person who has an arrogant ID, let's continue the discussion. I don't know who deleted the original post. Is a bird in a cage considered a duck? He just doesn't like his son's life being controlled by others. You say people are greedy? Or does it mean that it is not a fool's errand to control relatives' lives? Then he also said that the Zong family protected the branch family and rolled his eyes. I admit this, but does all the credit go to the Zong family? But what if there were no caged birds in Konoha's Hinata clan? They just kidnapped the children and separated them without the clan, but they couldn't live without Konoha. What else could they say about the clan's assets? How could a group of people who rarely go to the battlefield get the assets?
Although when I watched Naruto, I already assumed that the age of the characters can be multiplied by two, just like six years old when entering a ninja school = twelve in modern times, but it was still a bit strange to see the various plots between the protagonist and a bunch of three-year-old children 🙂
My head is buzzing when I think of a group of three-year-olds in action. Are we going to play ninja again?
It's been six days. Are you going to see your ancestors?
The writing is good, but the protagonist is too young, 3 years old, and the suggestions he makes are too mature and far-sighted.
Very pretty
It's just that the female protagonists don't seem to be Tenten Sakura Temari.
What the hell are these two latest chapters? They suddenly add settings from other worlds. This is too dramatic 😅
Check-in building
A dozen a day
Didn't I say that if there is no royalties, I will starve to death? Are you dead?
I just received the news that the author has already said in the group that this book is too eunuch and he no longer wants to write it.
Are you looking for them and buying them together? 😠 🐶
Where did this change go?
The writing is quite good, why did it get cut off 😢