Great Craftsman of Qin Dynasty

Reading the whole article, it seems that the author is probably a fan of Qin Dynasty and has great admiration for our charming ancestors. This resulted in the author's writing of the First Emperor in the book being a bit OOC and too approachable. In addition, there are several logical flaws that make it feel like a drama. First of all, Qin Shihuang is definitely not an emperor who would issue edicts to offend himself, even if he is not the emperor yet, but the King of Qin. Not only the King of Qin, but even the weakest King Yan and King Han among the Six Kingdoms, even if they made mistakes, they would only say a few words in a small group in private, and would never announce their mistakes in official documents to the whole country for envoys to hear about them. Doesn't that give other countries an excuse? Moreover, Qin was particularly weird in terms of admitting mistakes. Qin's historians never recorded their government's war failures in history books. The reason why the massacre Sui in the article is unknown in history is because he lost the battle and was erased from the history books. I saw that the writing here is also smooth, but the protagonist's personality is too flamboyant and I don't like it very much. Also, the capitalization of Shihuang is a bit ooc. No matter whether he is the King of Qin or the First Emperor, it is impossible for him to issue an imperial edict against himself. The Qin State has a military merit system, everyone knows this. In the Qin State, a person may have a title but not an official title, but it is impossible to have an official title but not a title. The people of Qin were the first group to enjoy this system. So, those foreign guests, in terms of number and speed of title promotion, must not exceed the people of Lao Qin, unless the king personally grants them a title (how many people can be promoted by the king himself?). Therefore, most of the officials at all levels of the Qin government must be Qin people and can never be guests from other countries (Under the same conditions, people do not use their own people but hire outsiders. Is this possible? The King of Qin is brain-dead, so he will let foreigners occupy most of his government departments. Even if he agrees, those Qin military nobles cannot agree.), So after the expulsion order, the government operation may be stagnant and slow, but it will never stop, because most Qin officials are Qin people. You can write novels as wildly and as wildly as you like, but at least they must comply with basic logic. The life of an ordinary civilian in the Qin State is to be registered as a citizen after adulthood, and then serve as regular service, regular service, and common service. At other times, he will farm, work, do business, or be temporarily recruited to fight when conquered. Most of their enlightenment education and survival education come from their parents and family elders. They only undergo military training and learn fighting skills when they are on regular service or on duty. So, most civilian children cannot enter the school. Furthermore, Qin's school is not a polytechnic as the protagonist mentioned, but an official institution for cultivating officials in Qin (equivalent to a modern political school). The main content taught is legal provisions and administrative skills, not craftsman skills. Most of the people who can enter the school are the children of middle and high-level officials in the Qin State, and they must be at the lowest level of Li Zheng. So, theoretically, the protagonist cannot enter the school based on his family background. And the Qin Dynasty's joint sitting system involves family members, neighbors and friends. I've never heard of anyone even sitting under a subordinate. Moreover, the academic system for disciples in the academy is three years, and they must graduate before they can hold a position. Therefore, it is impossible for a disciple of the Wen School to become a disciple of the master craftsman Zheng Guo. In the article, the Qin clan members massacred the disciples of the school. In fact, this is absolutely impossible. Because almost all the disciples in the school are the children of officials, killing people into a small mountain like in the article is simply turning against the entire Qin bureaucracy. Only rebels can't do such a thing. So, the author please understand the historical facts carefully before writing the article, and do not make up random things to fool readers. Otherwise, you should write about the Qin Dynasty instead of the Qin Dynasty. Your writing will give people the impression that you are a Qin fan, but you are actually a Qin blind person.

King Ha Qin's... Ha was so carried away. The first few chapters felt like they were over. As a result... Why don't you change the track and write the Danmei glass article. Don't feel sorry for your relationship with the King of Qin, who has changed in recent years. Anyway, you Mu Qiang faction likes to fear the beauty's twilight. When can historical literature stop doing things that mean good things but lead to bad things at the bottom?

Your book is useless!

He was beaten as soon as he passed through. Why don't you rebel? Are you waiting to tease someone? After you escape, directly make salt and sell it for money, recruit a group of people to make a bunker, and use sulfur, dinitrate, and charcoal to usurp the throne and bring society from the agricultural era to the industrial era. You will be a hundred times better than Ying Zheng in the same period in the history books!

How should I put it, this book is a bit embarrassing in this period. Now is no longer the time when ancient or semi-archaic style was popular three or four years ago, unless readers like this, like me. This book is a good book, but it is a pity that it was written at the wrong time.

It doesn't look good. More than 95% of the chapter content is about popular science history. It's better to just bring the historical materials here.

At the beginning, many people will be screened out.

It's the same as poisoning to death. We don't ask the protagonist to be a saint, at least he should look like a human being.

Why don't the author customize a life-size doll of Brother Zheng?

It's the most boring thing for you to write like this. To put it bluntly, writing history is to stir up troubles. Otherwise, why are you going to promote technological advancement? Do you think anyone likes to see this kind of thing? What everyone likes to see is the protagonist participating in historical events and becoming stronger step by step to change history, rather than letting nature take its course and letting you repeat history.

I have followed the previous book and have studied the Qin Dynasty very carefully. I hope to officially complete this book.

The book about Da Qin is very good. I like it, although I haven't read it yet.

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I followed from the previous book 🙂