At the Somme, What the Hell Is Hogwarts?

Part 1: Harry Potter and the Mobilization Order Part 2: Harry Potter and the Secret Passage of the Trenches Part 3: Harry Potter and the Prisoner of War Camp Part 4: Harry Potter and the Signal Fireworks Part 5: Harry Potter and the Guerrillas Behind Enemy Lines Part 6: Harry Potter and the Frontline Battle Map Part 7: Harry Potter and the Armistice

It is understandable that I feel that it is outrageous to join the army at the age of 11. After all, this is a peaceful era, so let us briefly understand the life of Mr. Momchilo Gavric: Born in 1906, after the outbreak of World War I (because of some well-known human tragedies), he joined the army at the age of 7, became a corporal at the age of 8, and an artillery lieutenant at the age of 11. He experienced many battles, and finally Died in 1993 at the age of 87 Many people do not understand what war is, or how the so-called rules came into being. In peacetime (this is a good thing), it is understandable that people cannot imagine what their mental state and daily experiences are like during war, but to deny it and shout that it is impossible is a bit... 😃

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Since I don't know if the author appears in the comment section, and I don't know what specific aspects the author needs (but judging from the more than 20 chapters so far, the author's plot tendency should be more towards the magical world), so this book is aimed at the audience who are curious about World War I but don't know what book to read. The books mentioned in the book list have electronic versions on Anna's file, and most of them are in English. You need to bring your own machine to translate, and it is recommended to use deepl or Oulu dictionary. There are many personal subjective recommendations, and the level is half-baked. Trench Warfare Eye-deep in hell: trench warfare in World War I Eye-deep in hell: trench warfare in World War I Author: John Eills This is an introductory book that is worth reading if you don't have any concerns about English. It describes the construction and shape of trenches, and also describes the differences in trenches caused by different environments and landforms. There are many schematic diagrams and maps in it. If you are interested in trench warfare itself and its extended tactics, you can go directly to the first two parts. The last two parts, Part 3 and Part 4, talk about soldiers' vacations and their attitude towards war. World War I Trench Warfare (1): 1914-16 World War I Trench Warfare (1): 1914-1916 Author: Stephen Bull This is a World War I pamphlet published by Osprey, a famous British military history publisher. Although it is not as long as the mammoth book devoted to it, it is easier to read as a starting point. At the same time, because it is a pamphlet, I would recommend the first book on this subject if you want to learn more about it, and for a deeper understanding, I would recommend the military publications of the time (the original version). Technical Manual An officer's manual of the Western Front, 1914-1918 1914-1918 Officer's Manual of the Western Front Author: Stephen Bull Contents 1. "Infantry Training, 1914" Chapter 10: Infantry Offensive Tactics (page 12) 2. "Field Engineering Manual, 1914 Reprinted Edition" Civil Engineering Chapter (pages 4-5, 22) 3. "Frontline Minutes, Part One, 1914" Tactical Notes (page 46) 4. "Frontline Minutes, Part Two" Combat Instructions (page 53) 5. "Trench Code 1915-16" Defense Deployment (page 67) 6. "Night Operation Precautions" Raid Tactics (page 84) 7. "Guide to the Use of Machine Gun Tactics" New Machine Gun Operations (page 90) 8. "Physical Training Matching Game Collection" Collaborative Training Project (page 108) 9. "Enemy Information Compilation, 1915-17" (page 116) 10. "Platoon Level Offensive Operations Training Guide, February 1917" Offensive Tactics (page 117) 11. "Chemical Warfare Monthly Intelligence Summary, September 1916" Gas War Report (page 139) Training for the trenches; a practical handbook based upon personal experience during the first two years of the war in France Trench Warfare Training Guide: A manual based on personal experience in France two years before the war Author: Leslie Vickers Similarly, it is also very dry information, I will just post the table of contents. Contents Chapter 1 Civilians and soldiers...15 Chapter 2 Health...21 Chapter 3 Diseases...33 Chapter 4 Pests...46 Chapter 5 Health and officers...50 Chapter 6 Concealment and trenches...62 Chapter 7 Trench protection...80 Chapter 8 Artillery firing...90 Chapter 9 Poison gas and liquid incendiary bombs...97 Chapter 10 Offense and Defense...101 Chapter 11 Offensive Operations...104 Chapter 12 Field Equipment...116 Chapter 13 Techniques in the Trenches...124 Battle Type Recommended in the comment area, let me think about it for a while

The idea is good, but the writing still feels a bit rough 🙂. The main body is a war story, and there are wizards on both sides. These people are all from Hogwarts. Will Hogwarts be revoked as a school? Get some from the school next door. The Imperius Curse controls mortals. I have no idea what a wizard's motive is for doing this. If you say that he cooperates with the villain, this is acceptable, but why do you let him show up? The main body of the war text is too obvious. If you treat pure magic as a plug-in, don't write about the values ​​of Hogwarts. If you want to write about the values ​​of Hogwarts, write more carefully. It's so unmagical that two Oros can meet and talk while they are at war, accusing each other of breaking the law. Just tell the person opposite you not to speak, and you can just exchange passion with each other.

The writing is indeed very novel and the writing style is also good. But is this protagonist a native? Why do so many descriptions make me feel like I don't know the details of Harry Potter?

After reading about ten chapters, I'll venture to express my personal opinion. If you disagree, please post it yourself, don't leave it @ below. The writing style is good and the writing is smooth. There is no literary problem, but there are a few problems. First, I made a big taboo. I wanted to take care of both sides but failed to please both sides. Those who are interested in war don't like magic mixed in. They prefer group-style heroes and military hedging. Looking at Harry Potter, Harry's stuff came out very late until Chapter 2, and it didn't touch on most of the hot characters. Two, the paragraph is too big, you need to cut it into shorter sentences and paragraphs. Most people read on mobile phones. Your long paragraphs of text are difficult for readers who are accustomed to fast food literature. What's even worse is that you are a newcomer. Three, the creativity is very good and the characterization is okay. The problem is that the combination of your innovation and magic is too slow, causing the brilliance to become the culprit of procrastination. Although it can be seen that you want to create a great world view, the most taboo thing about writing in the short video era is this. Most people are very busy. If it were 2018, everyone would still be willing to give you time to lay the groundwork. But now, with a new account, everyone's patience is limited to the first three lines. If the three lines are wrong, it can only be one chapter at most. Your update frequency can prove that you no longer want to invest too much effort because of poor results. Finally, although I may have a bad mouth, I still hope you can continue. After all, this subject is indeed rare, come on 🙂

When I heard about the Somme, I just thought, Deng Deng Deng Deng Deng Deng

It is said that Jacob participated in World War I in France as an American expeditionary force and even went to Verdun. I wonder if it will be written here.

The author has an inexplicable arrogance. He doesn't even want to change the cover. He doesn't reply or read the comment section. He thinks he is really a writer who only focuses on writing books and doesn't pay attention to traffic or results. However, the result is still unavoidable.