Patrolling on Behalf of Heaven, I Am the First Immortal in the World

Just by looking at Jian Shao, you can guess a problem. The plug-in gives you too much power and status, and it is difficult to control the increase in combat power.

Hey, it's been so long since I watched The Eunuch without realizing it.

It's been a day without updates😅

What's going on? A new book has been opened?

There are a bunch of typos, and irrelevant characters appear frequently. It feels like it has been polished by AI. The use of examples of heroes and criminals in the killing scene in the Demon Suppressing Palace gave me a strong sense of nausea. Do you have incorrect views? Or an angry young man? The difference between heroes and criminals is their killing skills? There is also this messy plot. Personally, I feel that it is completely embarrassing for me. The thought of Li Xiaoyao being a joke with a Hu Ge head on my head is simply unbearable. Also, the part about why Bai Suzhen came down the mountain was like the Six Classics to me. It was so different from the character of the original work that it didn't feel immersive at all. Whenever you change the character's name, even if it's a surname, I pinch my nose and admit that you have considered it for readers like us. There's a lot to be said about this plot. Have you asked Lao Huang if he agrees with this matter of asking the sword? How about creating conflicts and coming up with new ideas🥺!

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~