Super God Mechanic: the Path of Chaos

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The writing and plot are pretty good, the self-made planet settings are also good, and the various data names are also very original. However, there are some small problems. First, so far, the protagonist is too depressed. Compared with the original work, although Han Xiao was also controlled by Germination in the early stage, he has a strong heart, never loses or complains, actively makes plans and develops, and is very subjective, so readers will not feel abusive to the protagonist when watching this plot. But the protagonist of this book is unwilling and helpless. Although there is a panel, he can only rely on the idea of ​​quietly developing the panel. He has insufficient understanding of the sect and is very passive. No matter what angle the author writes it from, this style is definitely not as widely accepted in online articles as it is in the original work. Second, the skill names and abilities are not introduced in detail enough. The super god's skill introduction, data, etc. Are also one of its cool points. The original mechanical department mostly uses drawings to introduce skills, but there are also many introductions to abilities, magic, and martial arts. Currently, I have the impression that this book only introduces Fire Fist. There is no specific introduction to the protagonist's super-chaos path. It may be a foreshadowing, but the various uses of energy simulation are also skills. For example, in the early stage of the original force field, there are skills such as "force field·throw, force field·hammer, force field·cannon attack".

Don't be in a hurry and write slowly. I won't read in vain. I'll give you popcorn.

Come on, author, there are still very few fans of Super Mechanic.

The last few chapters feel so confusing when I read them. I am doing this task and suddenly insert another piece of content, and then repeat the process again, inserting another one It feels like I just write it wherever I think of it. There is no outstanding main line, but the author's writing style is not enough to support this kind of multi-tasking mix and match, which makes it very confusing. In addition, there are few updates and always disappear after reading half of it. Looking at the previous content, I have already forgotten part of it, and the plot seems particularly incoherent I guess the author wants to imitate the original work. Great Technician Han's approach of taking one step at a time and taking three steps to complete this task has laid the groundwork for the next plot, but now it just feels very confusing. The previous task has not been completed yet, and another content is suddenly interspersed. However, your own plot arrangement is not so smooth, which seems particularly abrupt. It is better to play slowly, take a break after finishing one, and then arrange the next one. This is like making a copy In fact, I personally feel that the main problem now is that there is a problem with the current update arrangement. Because of the slow update, readers will forget some previous content. Then if you look at the following content next, it will feel very abrupt and inconsistent. In addition, people these days are not very careful when reading novels. They basically pass it in a glance or three lines, and are too lazy to look back. As a result, I no longer know what the protagonist is doing here as I watch it. There is no outstanding main line to support it, and I feel that the protagonist's sense of existence is so low. He is just a calculated existence, being led by others from beginning to end without any highlight. It feels really frustrating to put it into perspective. It's hard to watch

Inexplicable hybrid, I don't know what the purpose of the setting is. Goodbye

It's best not to stick to the protagonist and write a parallel story with a star sea background. Because the impression of the protagonist of the original work has been fixed, no matter how you write it, some people will feel wrong and have side effects. Except for those major events that gather together in the known universe, it is best not to encounter them. It's best to pass each other by without disturbing each other.

I feel like I've been in the water recently. I thought I was going to upgrade on the spot and fight back after completing the trial mission, but I ran away. Although I fought back later, now I thought I was going to kill Mo Lin, but ended up running away again and exposing my identity. It feels really annoying.

Why are there so few Mechanic fans?

After reading thirty chapters, I can read it. I feel that the author's writing style is a bit immature, and there are always errors in logic and common sense. For example, why is the organization using addictive drugs to control the protagonist not directly added to the disguise potion? This is a logical problem, and it can be corrected with a patch to show the conflict between the disguise potion and addictive drugs. There is also a pursuit mission between the protagonist and the team. The protagonist is the only one who can sense his escape. How could the team members listen to the criminals' request and let the protagonist and the criminals be alone, and then the protagonist kills the person who cannot be taken down by the team without any doubt? However, the author listens to the advice and listens to the opinions of readers. There are too few super god fans. Generally speaking, the future is promising. When I saw it on the shelves, I wanted to remind the author to try not to write about boring political struggles. The author probably wanted to show the protagonist's intelligence by depicting the protagonist dealing with several forces, but the writing was not clever, and instead felt awkward and childish. Moreover, many people who read The Mechanic fandom come to see the political struggle, and the same goes for the original work. They quickly get rid of the control of the bud, and the Six Nations only use it to quickly increase their strength. Strength is the foundation, don't put the cart before the horse. Looking down again, it can be seen that the author wants to write something of his own, but for me, on the one hand, it is not to my taste, and on the other hand, the author's writing is not good enough for me to ignore the issue of taste, so I left.

Boringヽ(ー_ー)ノ Maureen is not dead

Isn't there a closed beta 130 days before the open beta? Will there be players who randomly choose the planet to come and shock the school of alien bones for a whole year?

I'm here in Bengbu, and after reading around the Super Mechanic fandom, yours is actually the best one.

I have an idea, can Ability God's "Super Silence" be advanced to "Super Silence" by directly forcibly interrupting other people's skills, attacks, etc.

I don't understand why some people troll the author because of his race? Really don't understand

Not to mention the original work, Qi Peijia's writing is really good, and the supporting characters are all very good. I remember very clearly the original protagonist, Lao Han, who is super powerful. There are only two pieces of content. The image of a lonely seeker came out immediately. He left his hometown to seek the truth alone and never returned until his death. That image was full at once, and I was very impressed.

The author wrote that telekinesis masters are too strong. The strongest ones in the early stage are martial arts masters. The latest four telekinesis masters not only have strong battery life, but also have strong control and defense. Is this right? Hurry up and take out your reference materials.

Are there any faceless protagonists in Super Mechanic fanfics now?

Energy Control ➕ Black Star Body ➕ Ten Thousand Souls Source I feel that based on the three main abilities and specialties, it is very powerful. I feel that it will be stronger than Lao Han in the later stage. Energy control is very restrained by mechanics and magicians. This kind of profession that focuses on energy output, Ten Thousand Souls Source is a direct kill against telekinesis. Finally, the Black Star Body is added to make up for the shortcomings of the physical body. Coupled with more advanced space abilities, it is best to skip the ability of space anchors. I feel that this is not a super god in the end. It will definitely be strong and have no friends.

Why was this book cut off so quickly? It was originally agreed to be 500,000 words long, but it ended up being cut with 490,000 words 🙂

The writing is very good as a fanfic, 3 monthly votes have been cast, I hope it will not be finished too hastily, and the duration of each map will be more balanced in the future ps; I personally hope to see a magic-oriented base mechanic fanfic, after all, it is more common in the original work to have a b-square + superpower-oriented fanfic with the mechanic :), but it is still possible. If the author wants to write a base mechanic fanfic in the next book, he can try the magic-oriented fanfic😋

It looks okay, why did it get cut?

Take your time and get better.

On the first day of the new year, vote and punch in your monthly vote

I can see that the back part looks a bit like the original work. I feel that the previous writing is very messy. The protagonist doesn't know what to do and there is no information. It's not that it's a cheating kind of foresight, but there is some information that the author may have assumed that the protagonist knew, but didn't mention it when writing. I just watched the protagonist do what he did in Nakuku. He didn't know what he was doing, and he was confused. Also, the front is elegant, and the inexplicable word "white gloves" keeps appearing, which makes it look numb, but the back feels slightly better. The two things I'm most worried about right now are the emotional line. If you can't write it well, don't mess with it. Just write it off in one stroke or don't write it at all. Seeing that there are still misunderstandings in the past, it's best not to write this kind of thing if there is no emotional line. It will be honest if you are enclosed (although it's not that popular) The second one is the eunuch. If you are all eunuchs, what else do you need to watch.

Come on, come on, come on

Good looking, love to read, more updates will be added 🙂

Just resurrect I originally had a meal replacement book that I could check out, but I was banned when I asked if I could get some new bds besides the blood-blue conversion. I guess I won't be able to create anything new You still have to come up with the idea for this star sea.

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