One Piece: Beginning with the Execution of Pirate King Roger

I personally hate Roger very much. How many people were killed by a man who started the pirate era for his own selfish desires? Millions or tens of millions.

Moria's identity was completed, and an adopted foreigner went to fight with Kaido to liberate the country of Wano. This Oden is getting more and more disgusting.

Author, your details are a bit poor, and your combat power is a bit weak. In addition, O'Hara can save scholars, so why don't you save the civilians on the asylum ship? I don't know whether the scholars are innocent or not, but those civilians are the ones who are really affected, right? The research carried out by scholars has affected the civilians on the island. Civilians: Who will speak for me?

O'Hara's demon-slaying order is a joke. Most of the scholars and books have been transferred to the giant kingdom and hidden. The demon-slaying order really only kills civilians. The most embarrassing thing is that he didn't contact Robin after the transfer, allowing an 8-year-old girl to think that she was really the only survivor on the island and wander alone.

I almost gave up on it at the beginning. The opening chapter has a lot of bad points. Geniuses don't need to explain how strong they are. Strength itself is proof. Especially in the Navy headquarters, there is no need to hide your clumsiness. It's really unnecessary to expose your clumsiness in just a few pictures when you were hiding it earlier.

So far, overall, not bad despite its flaws. The main flaw is The first one, the combat power increases very quickly, but it must be forcibly suppressed The second one, if you want to survive, but you expose so much, as long as there is a middle-level and high-level person, it will be exposed after careful inspection But even so, the writing is actually good Personal suggestion The first one, the current navy is of no use to the protagonist, in fact, even It is to learn the Sixth Form of the Navy. It is actually useless to enter the Navy Headquarters. When you get to the Grand Line, there are many channels to obtain the Sixth Form of the Navy, so the protagonist is leaving the Navy now The second one, the current plot direction can actually create a good opportunity. The first one is to protect his companion (golden retriever), he has to expose his strength, shock the Navy and the world, and then leave. The second one is what I just thought of, in order to prevent Stop Akainu from massacring civilians, then confront Akainu, draw a battle or win a battle, shock the navy and the world, and then leave The third one is not recommended to eat Devil Fruits, add plug-ins based on the protagonist's strength, a proper path to invincibility. Eating or not eating Devil Fruits has little effect, and if you eat them, there is a high probability that you will eliminate the bug that is not afraid of sea water, and there is a small chance of going astray (don't get too many fruits, you can't be sure) The 4th one, if you really don't leave the navy, your next position will either be to lead the navy independently to kill pirates, or to go to Impel Down City, and then you will definitely leave the navy. It's really not necessary, you should leave if you can, you can still make arrangements at this time. Or just follow the revolutionary army line layout. The above are my feelings and suggestions after reading it. I hope I can continue to pursue it.

It's just that he's too stubborn, not interesting, and he's strong enough. He inherited so many abilities from Roger, but I just don't understand why he's still weak. It makes me nervous when I read it. It's like a tomato article, and it kind of feels like an early general or a mid-level general.

Big back stab, Imu is a man, the condition for turning black is not that the person is in his hometown, but whether he has eaten a devil fruit 🤔

O'Hara's handling was too rough. I originally thought that because O'Hara turned against Guy Haijun, the entire island would be saved, but in the end, only the group of scholars who knew the law and broke the law were saved. Who is innocent? Are they civilians? The protagonist, a time-traveler, knows the plot, but in the end, he only cares about the scholars and ignores the civilians. He bombards the asylum ship and still criticizes Qingpheas. If you see it and rush to block the shells in advance, I will look down on you.

The author is not very good at writing emotional scenes, so I suggest you cover it in two or three strokes, or not write it at all. This is your weakness.