Becoming a Martial Saint After Studying Under the Last Martial Champion

The content is okay, but it's procrastinating. The writing is sophisticated, but it's procrastinating. It should be about an old eunuch leaving the palace.

There is a book directly from the last martial arts champion.

Was my subscription in vain? After leaving Hong Kong City, the more I write, the more boring I become.

This is what this book says! 12 noon, the protagonist thinks that he must have a meal in the afternoon! 12:01, the protagonist thinks that he must have a meal in the afternoon! 12:02, the protagonist is thinking about having dinner in the afternoon! 12:03, the protagonist is thinking about having dinner in the afternoon! Just write like this... Also: B: Do you know how to cook? Protagonist: Put the oil first B looked shocked and asked: How did you know? Then the protagonist laughs and says nothing... The fight is like this: The opponent keeps fighting, and the protagonist doesn't move, just stares at the opponent. The opponent uses all the methods and talks about it for hundreds of words, and then the protagonist goes up to fight... This is the plot...

You can kill some time before subscribing. There is no need to read the subscription chapter. It is very confusing and completely illogical!

Leaving Hong Kong Island, there is no need to watch it after it is released. It is delayed, there are no hangups, and the realm is not displayed. It is a mess and a waste of subscriptions.

Feeling since departure. There is no preparation for the subsequent plot, and there is a sense of confusion about where to write. The cheating element is also much smaller. As one reader said, it feels like a different author is writing the work. It is a pity. . . . .

Lu Changan = Lu Li? , Liu Bai = Liu Bai Yuan? Green Dragon Stake = Dragon Fist?

The writing and plot are pretty good, keep it up!

Three consecutive chapters. Amazing enough... Look at my Yangtze River Three Layers💪💪💪