Because I Am a Witch

The author has been immersed in his own works and moved himself. . .

The look and feel of the book is very strange. There is no ups and downs in the first ten chapters. It is only after ten chapters that the protagonist starts to improve. The relationship and separation with the teacher cannot mobilize any emotions. I feel that I don't write about the things that should be described carefully, and I waste the pen and ink on the things that don't need to be written.

As I was reading, I came across the chapter "Crazy" in the Snow Mountain Chapter. I couldn't stand it anymore, so I read the summary at the end of the volume. I don't mind this kind of imitation. For example, "I'm Really Not the Evil God's Lackey" was discontinued a few years ago. I heard that this imitation of "I'm Really Not the Evil God" was released, and I finished it. Later, when the previous book was finished, I finished it again. Others said that the torturer was unhappy in the first ten chapters, but they didn't feel it. Maybe it was because they had watched "The Witch, Don't Give Up" before and were looking forward to it. But there are too many problems written elsewhere. First, there is too much sensationalism that is embarrassing. For example, when learning potions, you first write about the obstacles encountered everywhere and how the protagonist perseveres, and then go to the shop and start to stir up emotions. Someone in the commentary also mentioned that the contrast is too great. Why are everyone else so indifferent, and suddenly a kind-hearted grandpa appears? Without foreshadowing, sensationalism will only feel awkward, and such sensational novels can be seen everywhere. "The Witch" does not have these messy sensationalisms. A similar plot is in Chapter 3, and you won't be able to copy it. Two, the protagonist's action logic is inexplicable. For example, I completely don't understand why the protagonist refused the special invitation from the Royal Capital Academy. You said at the end of the paper that there is a problem with the person, but there are no details in the front; You said that the protagonist does not want to be bound to a mentor. First of all, you did not say that this special guest has a bound mentor. How does the protagonist know? Secondly, since you don't want to accept it, why do you need to show your strength in subsequent tests? In order to pretend to be x, there is no logic at all. Including the fireball in the snow mountain chapter, it is both sensational and unreasonable, pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger and becoming a real pig. Three, coincidence, stepping in to save people, etc. Just forget it once or twice, it feels a bit too much. Four, the combat power collapsed. This is also the chapter that I completely cannot accept. I have never seen a level 0 apprentice who can use his own initiative to turn his body into gray, let alone one who can reshape his body with a little soul power. By the way, the entire Snow Mountain chapter is just a piece of cake. At first I didn't understand why I went to the royal capital. Has Wangdu School started recruiting students? Is there a way to learn magic? Nothing was explained. Then I don't understand why the protagonist, a poor student, is willing to take 3 gold coins to ride in a luxury motorcade. What follows is completely incomprehensible. It is recommended that the author should not write those sensational plots first, especially the author's sensationalism is all forced sensationalism with no foreshadowing, huge contrast, and all psychological activities; Then think carefully about the logic of the protagonist's actions. The pen is in your hand. Who has problems and how to unfold it is up to you; Finally, don't write about super expansion of gods and men. The snow mountain chapter is all super expansion. I feel that the author has let himself go.

The progress on the snow mountain suddenly exceeded the expansion level. I don't know how much, and the characters are also blaming the protagonist.

How can He De, who is only at level 0, match such an awesome enemy? At level 5, even if he is damaged again, even if he loses 1 out of 10, or 1 out of 100, he still has the strength of level 4! Isn't beating the protagonist to death just a matter of blowing a breath and staring at him? It's so exciting and self-motivating that it's already over 80 chapters in. You haven't reached the first level yet. You want to write most of your life into it at the zero level, right?

The content idea is good, but others are eager to write more chapters. You are so anxious that the content is incomplete. If you expand it more, it will not be so fragmented.

The writing is so bad, even if her name is Monica, her personality wouldn't be the same. It's not like she really turned into Monica. This author is really weird

Why did the protagonist start to become a bastard? He was fine at the beginning, but became more and more emotional later on. He began to let his own emotions dominate things, and instead lost the most important calmness of a mage...

The author discovered a big problem: the recommended readers of this book may be many Western fantasy fans. But I must solemnly declare here that this article is definitely not an orthodox Western fantasy-themed work!!! Otherwise, submit it to the fantasy category!!! The main content of this book is "a fantasy adventure of swords and magic", rather than the common epic wars, kingdom disputes or rigorous racial settings that are common in Western fantasy... In fact, this should be regarded as a light novel "with supernatural elements". If you say it is a Japanese fantasy, it is barely accurate. Light novels pay more attention to the characters' inner emotions, personality charm and the "relationship" between people. The narrative perspective usually revolves around the protagonist and important supporting characters in the protagonist group. The description of the big picture often serves the character. This is significantly different from the more serious and realistic tone of Western Fantasy. Some readers always bluntly associate this book with Western Fantasy, which is really strange. After all, the two worldviews are completely different. The text may contain elements such as magic and non-human races. These are also common symbols in Western fantasy, which can easily lead to misjudgment at first glance. The author is very sorry if this has caused unnecessary misunderstanding. Sorry, but this is not a Western fantasy, it is a light novel similar to Japanese fantasy.

I really believed the author's evil deeds. I just said before that I should study hard after defeating the dragon, and then I turn around and a big boss comes to do some kind of trial. Isn't it disgusting? There are almost over 100 photos. Is it any fun? Not even a little bit. Reading your book is not just for happiness, but specifically for sadness?