Why Are My Baishishu Different?

I came here to comment after reading Chapter 30. The writing style in the first few chapters is humorous, concise and not verbose. However, when you get to the second level of Qi training and become a jailer, it feels a bit superficial. Many places that need to create conflicts and create interesting plots are skipped directly. If the author is not the kind of person who has been sharpening his sword for ten years and polished the first few chapters too carefully because he is indeed new to the industry and is a little inexperienced in writing the main plot, I hope the author will pay attention to it. Ps2: The Golden Finger Book of Eternals feels too buggy. Although it was patched later, it can only go back for 12 hours. It is impossible to deduce the secret of heaven and then the author applied some red dust patch. However, the underlying logic of the Golden Finger is still messed up. It seems that no matter how many patches are applied to the Shishan Code, it cannot change its essence. Would it be more reasonable if it were changed to randomly copy the enemy's things after being killed? The book is random, but it is not the author who has the final say on what opportunities can be obtained. This will also make it easier to arrange various opportunities reasonably in order to develop the plot.

There is no need for the protagonist to practice slowly. In the early stage, he seeks death from high-level casual cultivators, completes the early accumulation, then joins the sect, then finds more senior elders, or accepts dangerous missions to seek death to upgrade. Don't stress your combat power by opening such a big trap.

Cultivation of Immortality is too depressing, so I won't watch it. Bureaucratic rule and cultivating immortals have given me hope.

I can't stand it any longer Wuji Dao Seed The third level of Qi training is 10 times that of an ordinary monk, and then it rises once✖️10 If it is 9 levels as the top, it is 10 million times If it is 12 levels, it is 10 billion times

On the surface, this guy looks invincible, as long as he keeps looking for someone with a higher level of cultivation than himself to die, but the shortcomings are too big and the flaws are too obvious. There are several kinds of books of generations, one is to go back to the origin of everything, and even multiple archives can be made later; one is to reincarnate in one's own descendants, as long as the seed is broadcast, it is difficult for anything to happen; the other is to reincarnate with talents, and automatically replace the person with the right person. These have a common feature, which is that they are safe and secretive, making it extremely difficult for others to target them. But the Book of Death can only go back one day, as long as it is discovered by others: "All those who are planning to kill the protagonist will lose their abilities the day before they do it, and the protagonist will progress by leaps and bounds." That's a very easy solution. As long as you use a trapping-type magic circle to trap the protagonist, you'll basically be dead. You can't get out, and there's no benefit from committing suicide. The key point is that this protagonist also likes to cause trouble and die, for fear that others will not notice his abnormality. Comments also think that this is the correct use of hanging. This should not be publicized, it should be stirred up secretly, and used as cannon fodder in the fight between the two parties and killed. No one would have thought that it was because you, a completely unrelated onlooker, lost your ability.

This kind of hanging is too unexplainable and too big. The protagonist is not strong enough to fight, and the author has nothing to write about. If the protagonist overwhelms his fighting ability, it will only disgust the readers.

When I read the introduction, I was reminded of this book that impressed me deeply. At that time, both the writing and the plot were very good.

But plausibility and setting are the cornerstones of the work. As an author, you need to think deeply about your works. The beginning may not be as devastating as many people think, but it is indeed a necessary condition for subsequent promotion and rise. And there are not many chapters to build the protagonist's situation. It is more about the protagonist growing up wildly and gradually understanding the world, and then determined to reach high with practical actions. Only then can he have the right to speak and change. Some people may wonder why they don't just ask Gao Xiu to kill the protagonist. First of all, when there is no Wan Zhang Hong Chen Qi, it is easy to figure it out (such as Zhuge Sheng). Even if Wan Zhang Hong Chen Qi can shield the secrets of heaven, whether there is a chance to see high cultivation is second. It is easier to become suspicious if you die for no reason, and the world of high cultivation is unpredictable (the protagonist is completely unfamiliar with this world at the beginning) You don't even know what is needed for the first level of qi training), you take away other people's cultivation magic weapons, how come others can't find you through family power, study and deduce your secrets. If it is really discovered, okay, you go back to twelve hours ago, I will tie you for twelve hours, and then you wait and do whatever I want. I will find a dog. I have no cultivation, no magic weapon, and no special skills. I will simply bite your neck and kill you. Twelve hours ago, you were tied up by me, very good, continue to bite you to death. . . The protagonist is a person who seeks stability. Seeking stability but being bold, being good at balancing, testing the world first, and not dying unless necessary, this is the setting of the protagonist.

The state of complete kindness and absolute honesty mentioned by someone in the comment area is the kind of protagonist I once imagined, a protagonist who is absolutely powerful and invincible. The protagonist and other people exist in two ecological niches. The kindness or even brainlessness of the protagonist will not have a bad impact on the protagonist. Those who oppose the protagonist in this or that way are essentially worried that the protagonist will fail or be let down because of his own behavioral choices. . But this worry does not apply to the protagonist who cannot fail or has unlimited error tolerance. . .

On October 14, 2025, the contract was successfully signed. Number of words: 12,000. Collections: 8. To remember.

In this kind of setting, either the world is not big, the spiritual energy is limited, and the setting of the way of heaven has been modified by a large sect in the upper world, or the way of heaven is controlled by others, modified, and practiced by the disciples. When they ascend, they will be directly refined by others to improve their cultivation.

There are so many ways to do this during the Qi refining period 🙂

Just like every world has its own rules. Some books include foundation-building elixirs, which is fine. Correspondingly, they will have other promotion channels and promotion modes. Getting started here is difficult, and practicing Qi is even more difficult layer by layer. It's okay, but accordingly, the overall foundation building is now less. The key is to make the whole game reasonable, the comparison of combat power cannot collapse, and the setting must be maintained from the beginning.

The number of saved manuscripts exceeds 34 chapters. I have talked with the editor and the results are average now. I plan to publish 300,000 words in the middle of next month. The plot is getting better and better, and the writing feels smoother and smoother. It is expected that at least 100 chapters will be saved when it is released.

When was Tianzun killed? Your setting is too depressing. I can't stand it.

But it usually doesn't happen after slaying the dragon. In the process of wanting to slay a dragon, it is already difficult to be kind if you want to have the ability to slay a dragon. But good and evil also need to be viewed dialectically. Electric rail toilet pushers are always personal opinions.

Writing articles is like cultivating immortality. Continuously writing, the number of words is increasing, and the ability is increasing, but the feedback of the work is often lagging behind. In other words, hard work does not necessarily lead to results. There are also issues of direction, timing, and so on. If you want to maintain a good attitude, you can't compare yourself too much with others or care too much about data. You can only work hard and God will pay off. As long as you do it, regardless of whether it is right or wrong, you will gain something no matter what. It's just that this gain is not necessarily fame and fortune in the world, nor can others see it. Cultivation in the human world is to read, study, and live, then understand the Tao, do things according to your own Tao, and then correct your own Tao in the process of doing things. I admire people who make their own living, everyone does. The mind that is shaken by life is constantly stabilized for various purposes: survival, happiness, one's own way... This is human beings, they seem small, but they are as beautiful as gods. ——Watching someone write a book

If there are readers who like this book, please let me know! Don't be silent and raise your hands, okay?

I don't know what the protagonist is trying to do. Anyway, he can't die even if he is killed. He can still level up if he is killed.

The promised 200,000-word update is here to stay!

I went to the Endless Sea to find the [Xing] Taoist tradition. There was no peeing in the whole process, and I was very happy all the way.

The author of this book has been working hard at home recently. On the day it was released, the 200,000-word chapter has been saved. Woohoo! It is expected to be released on the 15th and 16th Readers who like this work are welcome to subscribe.

More than 50 chapters have been released, so what else can I say? I'll give it to you

What's going on? It looks pretty good. Why are there so few monthly tickets?

WCwcwc, I will raise you for a few days, Chapter 66, NB

There is no heroine but a harem, every woman is a harem (it's just that the plot is not particularly rich and they are not the main focus)

Qi training, foundation building, golden elixir, and purple mansion. The system is not working. Cultivating immortality is a fantasy, but fantasy can be divided into high and low levels. The reasonable point is that "Fu" can accommodate "Golden Elixir" The inappropriate point is that "Purple Gold" is more expensive than "Purple". Some say that in ancient times, purple pigment was more difficult to obtain than gold pigment. However, the emperor wears gold, and there are also Western emperors who wear purple. However, in Chinese culture, purple is the most popular one, while gold is exclusive to the emperor. My suggestion is that Zifu should be changed to "Yuanfu", or something else. Or the golden elixir may be changed to "Jie Dan" The author's idea may be that practitioners are not emperors, and "purple" is more valuable than gold, which is reasonable and reasonable. Hmm... This is still a subjective feeling. Personally, I still think "gold" is better than purple.

At this turning point, it's time to raise books again

Did you come back and take a look to get out of trouble? Oops, unhappy

Why do I feel like I'm progressing very quickly? I'm writing an outline?