The Cycle of Comprehensive Comics Begins with the Adventures of Jackie Chan

The logic is poor and there is too much nonsense. The second world is directly unpopular The combat effectiveness depends entirely on cheating You can watch it, but there is no sense of immersion at all. The reading experience is not good at all

The land is too unpopular, and you also put it in the second world, that is, before and after entering v. Aren't you afraid that all readers will run away?

I became a chi mage and turned around to become a demon hunter. There was no life or death crisis and I had to immediately improve my strength. I was diagnosed as a stupid dog.

The most effective threat to Tohru is his mother. Tru, you don't want your mother to know, right?

The protagonist is a character, and he created a big daddy for himself in the first copy

Didn't hell not diminish the wisdom of the Holy Lord? It shouldn't be magic anymore

666, The reincarnation paradise has appeared for thousands of years and has not destroyed the star level or above, so this reincarnation paradise is also a big hit.

Has the author's cerebellum suddenly awakened to self-awareness? Otherwise, how could it attack the brain like crazy?

Will it be a bit unpopular if the ground is wrong or something?

Because the god of Earth is the system, you can increase experience by killing monsters and practicing skills. When you have enough experience, you can ask the gods to upgrade you (provided that the gods care about you) The point is that if you become a dependent of the gods, the gods can see everything about you, from the time you were born to what you have done until now. What's more, the current systems that have wisdom are not popular anymore, let alone the whole person being stripped naked, which is not in line with the domestic routine of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. If you join a dependent god and see that you can time travel, then how can you write this? The only two things that went wrong were either becoming a dependent of the god and being a dog for the god, or finding a wife to start a harem, no more

I'm a bit confused. The later episodes of Jackie Chan's Adventures are really confusing. If you do this, you can't expect much popularity in the second volume.

In fact, I think that based on your starting point, it would be much better to write in order: Under One Man, Super Beast Arms, Armored Warrior, then Jackie Chan's Adventure, then Pleasant Goat and Big Big Wolf (new version), and then Death in the Sea of ​​Fire, or something else. Of course I am just giving my opinion, the pen is in your hand, this is just the opinion of the readers. For example, one person can let the protagonist understand the two qi of yin and yang, and then learn to refine weapons. Then rely on the weapon refining to go to the super beast weapon to refine the super power lock. Relying on the Super Beast Arms in the back, refining armor at the Armor Warrior. Wearing armor in the end, using super beast weapons to PK with the Holy Lord Imperial City, I think it is very interesting. The new version of Pleasant Goat and Big Big Wolf also has the concepts of black energy and righteous energy. I am too lazy to make it up later. But if you want to write about a dungeon, then you have to write about shock, rather than pretending to be a slap in the face, because it will be very embarrassing. The god in it only releases the divine power and wants to return to the divine world. For example, the protagonist upgraded quickly and the gods were shocked. For example, the protagonist's familiar is regarded as a unique magic, and the gods are shocked. Okay, that's all I'm saying. It's up to you to decide the specific idea, but I think the second copy is much worse than the first copy

The first three dungeons are too big to be cross-server, right? The location is wrong... According to your progress, fate will write the beginning, and the rest will be left to be written on the shelf? Invincible

If you want to make a showy operation, you should increase the number of updates. The next few pictures will completely kill the sense of expectation. I've been waiting for several days and it's still not over.

The subject matter is okay, but the writing style is too poor. Is it an external author?

The order of chapters is messed up, can it be adjusted? I owe you that little money?

The title starts from The Adventures of Jackie Chan, and then the last two worlds have never heard of it. There is a group of refutations in the comment section that is said to be unpopular in the world. They came in after the Adventures of Jackie Chan. Is there anything wrong with not knowing Japanese comics?

Author, what on earth are you doing? I can't stand it any longer. There's nothing wrong with the writing, but it's just making a lot of noise. It's quite an orthodox comprehensive comic.

The author's mistake in publishing this chapter is really a masterstroke. Please increase the reading threshold by 30%.

His name is Zhou Yi, a very familiar name.

Can the author go to a copy of Fairy Tale World?