Simultaneous Time Travel: Starting from the Bloodline of the Dragon Clan

The world is moving too fast and it's very chaotic

Does Dragon Bloodline still have an e rating? If I remember correctly, Kassel's student levels e and f are the new lower limit ratings created by Fengoliu's third grade. The original work has a bunch of ratings above A, including super A, S, emperor level, and deadpool. Normal hybrids should all have C-level blood, and B-level is already the best. Even Chu Zihang, whose mother is an ordinary person but his father is S-level, was only of B-level blood before the bloodshed, and after the bloodshed, he was S-level.

The author of this book has probably never read Dragon Clan. Where did the dragon clan come from? Fingel is an E-level student who was saved from repeating a grade. It's actually the A bloodline. Repeating a grade for four years becomes E.

Logically speaking, the self in the Saint Seiya world should have awakened the small universe, and let other selves in the small universe system cheat and show off in the original world and then climb to the top of the original world system, and then feed back to the Saint Seiya self. The result is that using the blood skills of the small world such as one person, one punch, etc., It is used as a Saint Seiya plug-in? ? In this river?

First of all, there is no transfer station in this shared cheat. The protagonists communicate directly in their heads and monitor them in real time, so the confusion of perspectives is very confusing. Then because there is no transfer station, the plot jumping is very confusing. The plots of three worlds are advanced simultaneously in one chapter. The homogeneity of the plots is too serious. It seems that the worlds are actually the same story line at the core. In the end, the author paid too much attention to the description of women, showing a kind of diaosi aura. For example, the protagonist always treats beautiful women like this, and the widow bows to expose the ravine. This kind of writing became outdated ten years ago, and most of the current writing methods are closer to reality. You either have the capital to attract the opposite sex, or you don't have the ability to stay away from the opposite sex. It is rare to deliberately arrange the plot to get the right one, and it is neither fish nor fowl. The writing is so poor that I can't bear to look at it.

There are many typos, the narration is weird, the soliloquy can only be understood by the author himself, a lot of communication is omitted, the sharing is cumbersome, there is no cheat space description, it is as abstract as multiple personalities, and the harm of sharing is even more roadside.

The bloodline is not high, and then the spirit of words is released in the commandments...

The world of one person is the most disgusting person. He said that he was firmly on the side of the party and the people, but what he did was to directly throw an experimental product of uncertain harmfulness into the society. It was called a test of spiritual recovery.

Ikki's girlfriend is being bullied. It has nothing to do with your protagonist. She's not familiar with him, so he's like a tortoise trying to help others.

It's all typos and you didn't check it 😆

If you don't check the settings carefully before writing a fanfic, and you just make it up randomly, it will also be uncomfortable for the readers who come to read the fanfic.

The beef is so delicious. I'll accept all the beef you saved.

To be honest, I don't know why everyone likes to write about Dragon Clan. Maybe I'm not old. I really don't think Dragon Clan is good-looking 🙂🙂 If you don't like it, don't comment.

The author seems to have never watched Dragon Clan. He only talked about the plot, and then kept writing about the world of Dragon Clan. The look and feel is terrible. If you are not familiar with it, don't write it.

. . . . King is a little sick, a little force-fed ④,,, those who take the credit deserve to die, they know that they are not good but they still don't explain. . .

What is written is messy, without beginning and end, and the expression is rubbish. There is a reason why there are so few people.

There are a lot of typos, and the views are cut too quickly, and the shared space is just like a chat group.

The humans in the Saint Seiya world are a special type of human, just like the humans in the Azeroth world are special, and so are the people in the Dragon world, so no one except the protagonist can practice Microcosm at all.

The common problem of Tongchuanliu is too confusing It is recommended that you write one world at a time and it is best to divide it into separate volumes

It would be boring to write about one less person. Although the number is not that small, the plot is grinding.

I was so confused when I read this book that I couldn't understand what the hell it was about 🤫

Starting from Chapter 428, it was either written by someone else or by Ai.

It's awesome. The first chapter is like walking through Daogui. It gives people a feeling of insanity.

It's quite confusing, the words don't speak the same words as the horse's mouth, and the writing is rude and confusing.

Polite self-recommendation, Dragon Clan fan "Dragon Clan: Lu Mingfei's Restarting Life". If you are interested in reading it, welcome critical comments🙏🙏🙏 Friends who like Dragon Clan can come to criticize and give advice, and communicate more

Could the author write more about Inuyasha? I want to see the protagonist Duoduo snatch the witch

At the same time, for time-travel novels, you should choose beautiful women to collect them all, which will easily attract the interest of reading the novel.

Simultaneous Travel: Inherit the Copy of Ten Thousand Realms