
Travels of Lao Liu in the Great Wilderness
洪荒老六游记
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 104k Words
- Genre
- Western Fantasy
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Historical Myth
- Updated
- 8mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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45Chapters
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Thoughts after reading
I finished reading the book this morning. Let me first say that I only read it briefly and did not read it in detail. If it is not good, please don't criticize it. First of all, the theme is time travel, and the background setting is the prehistoric times. However, the author himself said that he added the settings of the Classic of Mountains and Seas, but most people don't know much about the Classic of Mountains and Seas, so some of the backgrounds do not have a strong sense of substitution. The introduction and background story line were chosen by Mr. Lu Yadao. His combat power should be second only to the ceiling in the ancient world. He has good legs and a profound background. He has something to write about in the future, and can be upgraded and revenged. But if you take the story of the ancient times and add mountains and seas, it seems that there will also be the wild wilderness from the introduction. It's hard to say, it's too big and complicated. There are many books about the ancient times, and recently there are also many about primitive people, but the wild wilderness + Sou Shen are quite ancient, and the current audience is not strong. For example, the protagonist develops into the Mandrill tribe in the novice village. From the perspective of Xianxia, they are just mountain spirits and wild monsters. From the description of Shan Hai Jing, there is a country called Xiaoyang Kingdom. There seems to be no introduction to the journey to the ancient times. And to be honest, this thing is ugly. To accept them as my disciples is too low a starting point. After all, it's not Langlang Mountain. After reading the latest, I feel that the route is a bit like the upgrading and development stream of the primitive tribe, but your background setting is deep, so I can't see what you want to write yet. I'll check it out when there is an update later I was invited to just say it, don't comment if you don't like it.
I haven't been here for a few days, so I just had a quick look at it today.
After the last comment, I just have time to write about it today. To put it simply, the writing is easier to understand than last time. At least it is not as awkward as before when I couldn't understand the mountains and seas blindly. The plot is normal. Although I don't like the mandrill species, you can just treat him as a random tribe, Lord. If the timeline doesn't say whether the human race will come out, maybe the author's plan is a bit huge. Maybe he can wait until he comes out to participate in the great events of the prehistoric times. But after chapter 10, you are still an egg. Many people may not be able to hold on until that time. They need an opportunity to break out of the egg and come out. And what are you going to write about it after it comes out, whether it will be a bird or a direct transformation, this is not clear. According to Lu Ya's route, it will be the Golden Crow. This has the foot, but the cause and effect is relatively large. If other blessings are not enough, you may not be able to participate in the saint's big event. So it depends on the author.