As an Immortal, I Just Want to Practice Steadily

The protagonist went to a casino when he was just a teenager, and a woman framed him for being his father. The man at the casino actually believed him. He said he was afraid of trouble before, but after that, he couldn't walk when he saw the woman 🥵

It's really pretty in the front, but it turned out that I had a big problem with it right after I was discharged from the army. I went to a casino for no apparent reason, and was framed by a woman who was cheating on me. She lied to people that the protagonist was her father. The protagonist was almost beaten to death by an innate warrior. Afterwards, this woman was still righteous and confident. She kept annoying people and had a lot of scenes. The casino plot is so ugly, so far-fetched, so annoying. This is the second time I can't stand a book because of a female character. To be honest, the previous writing is really beautiful and the emotional rendering is quite good, but if you are not good at writing about women, why do you have to write about it? The result was a big mess. I'm really sorry, I've read more than ten chapters. You have always looked good. Do you know how uncomfortable it is for you to do this all of a sudden? If you can't write a heroine well, it's really better to write a novel without a heroine. It's better to make a vase than to cause trouble for the protagonist who is unrepentant and shameless.

It doesn't look good. Immortals should look like immortals. You can get into trouble even if you go to a gambling shop. Although the protagonist is a troublemaker, it can't be like this.

When the chief cook is always afraid of provoking karma After the gang breaks up, he just goes with the flow and flirts with women The main theme is an adaptive one, regardless of the contradictions in the character, everything is the set plot.

I've finished watching it, it's very good, flesh and blood

Well written👍👍👍

If you don't have the strength, just do it. If you have the strength, whether you should fight or kill depends on your mood.

Just look at the introduction and you'll know it's the same old routine again.

I also think the part where the protagonist sees Yinyu in the casino and takes her home and stays in the Hou Mansion is too ridiculous. Yinyu is not cute at all and he just feels disgusted. Has the author never been in love? It's not like licking a dog. He licks a girl when he sees her good-looking.

Not to mention that what Taoists emphasize is that Tao follows nature. The protagonist blindly uses cause and effect to suppress his thoughts. It is better to buy rice, flour, grain and oil and hide in the mountains and old forests. You didn't explain the origin of obtaining the Sutra of Death in the secular world. The practice of killing people was Qi and blood martial arts. Later, it was no problem to kill the wolf demon and convert it into spiritual energy. The problem is that the protagonist's realm has never been explained. It is initially estimated that before going to the world of cultivation, the protagonist was at most in the late stage of Qi training, and certainly not in the foundation building stage. How come you didn't starve to death after being on a small boat for 20 years? It is said to be the effect of the Taoist Fruit of Immortality. So why does the protagonist need others to share the pie with him at the beginning when he is starving to death in the army? In the realm of cultivation, can we use the Immortality Dao Fruit to counterattack the masters of the late Jindan period?

Isn't it Gou? What the hell are you writing about?