
My Earth Ol Can't Be a Love Game
我的地球ol不可能是恋爱游戏
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 170k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Everyday Romance
- Updated
- 9mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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77Chapters
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As title. Then let's talk about the three heroines. First of all, there is Zhong Luxi. She is a typical tsundere lolita with two ponytails. She is dull, not very smart, has a lot of inner drama, and can have fun with herself. Then there is Zhu Nazhi, who is now based on Qing Ye Shen and Jiang Manyue, and is evenly matched with the male protagonist, which is quite bad taste (it was originally set to be a cold senior sister, but it didn't look good and was not easy to write, so I made major changes, but because it was already published Chapter, so it can only be changed within the chapter. The most obvious one is the first time the protagonist invites the senior sister to dinner. According to Jiang Manyue's character here, she should be quarreling with the protagonist instead of silently accepting it.) At the suggestion of a friend, she was changed to what she is now. Finally, there is Wen Qingqing. I used three very abrupt chapters to describe her background, which you can quickly skip (mainly because I want to pay tribute to Kissing Pig, and some readers may notice that I have artificially described the scenery in some places. In fact, I am imitating Kissing Pig. Drawing tigers is not anti-canine), and some of her characteristics are also reflected here. In some places, she is similar to the protagonist of Kissing Pig. After these two chapters today, I will speed up the pace and focus more on the interaction between the characters, so that everyone can watch it more exciting. Just because this is my first time writing a book, I may not have enough control over all aspects. Readers (if there are any) have plots you want to see and comments you want to make. Please try your best to put them forward and I will do my best to improve them. You can't grow by working behind closed doors. I'm not a good author, but I am a good waiter. I hope I can serve you better and make everyone happier. And this book will definitely be finished. This is my first step. Finally, as the title states, if you like reading and are willing to continue reading, you can try your best to read to the last page in your spare time. This is very important for new books. Thank you! All I can do is try my best to write this story as a reward. I would like to thank all readers! (Kowtow~)
Following the reading~The soul returns~
Keep reading~make a lot of money~the soul is back! The soul is back! The soul is back! The soul is back! (How to do it) (Dance the God) (Twirl around the stove) (Place incense) (How to do it) (Chant a spell) (Rotate) (Ring a bell) (Dance the God) (Chant quietly) (Ring a bell) (Fling a flag) (Light a fire) (How to) (Ring a bell) (Recite a mantra)
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At present, it seems that it is easy and smooth, and the character interaction is relatively natural. The disadvantage is that it is not enough to read. It is recommended that the author quickly updates 10 chapters a day 😁
I remember your book was paired with honey chicken, right?
Didn't you change your profile? Don't plan to change it? 🤔
It's ok to write
Does the author have any other works before?
Jiangjiang——Arrived!
The sauce is here, bubbling + tasting!
Multiple female protagonists 🤓, I'm excited Come here to learn
Hay. The first part of the 99 confessions is quite attractive, but then it gradually becomes boring. First of all, where is the agreed-upon interaction between the male and female protagonists? Does putting them in the same space count as interacting? Secondly, none of the characters are particularly likable, and even Fang Zheng is much more interesting than the three female protagonists. The introduction of Wen Qingqing's origins is very suspended. It took three chapters to write, but the connection with the main plot is not close. From the reader's perspective, it is water. I can understand the idea of paying tribute, but can it be lighter.
Chapter forty?
Let's wait until chapter 400 to explore again.