
Bonfire on Top of Mountain
山顶的篝火
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 17k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Other Fan Works
- Updated
- 9mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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11Chapters
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Masterpiece
This novel is literature's "reverse magic" - it doesn't pull a rabbit out of a hat, but folds the entire universe into a tear in the corner of your eye. While others are building walls with words, this author is digging tunnels with punctuation marks. When you react, you have fallen into the gentle trap he weaves with verbs. The activity in your mind when reading it is comparable to a late-night party among philosophers: Kant is dancing, Nietzsche is spilling juice, and you are curled up on the sofa with your mobile phone in hand, and suddenly understand why the protagonist regards the dinging of the microwave oven as the nightingale singing in the twenty-first century. Some people say it is like playing on a trampoline in a dictionary, with each word jumping out of an unexpected arc. While the novel next door was still planting roses in an orderly manner, the author had already made the entire garden tap dance in the moonlight - and used metaphorical scissors to trim a dinosaur-shaped hedge by the way. It perfectly realizes the quantum entanglement reading experience: while your left brain is analyzing the narrative structure, your right brain is riding a rainbow unicorn through the thunderstorm zone of rhetoric. No wonder some readers complained that after reading the book, looking at their refrigerator crisper felt like looking at an existential installation art. Recommended equipment for reading: a self-deprecating soul, a three-point sense of fullness, and the awareness to turn the last page into a bookmark at any time - because a truly good story is like a dandelion sneaking into the cracks of your mind, suddenly causing daily reality to sneeze cutely on an ordinary Tuesday morning
I don't do it. The teacher said he would give me credits, so I came here.
What a masterpiece!
The book shows a very high level of narrative and creative ingenuity at the very beginning. In just two chapters, it draws readers firmly into a fantasy world full of tension and suspense. It can be called a dazzling work on the time-travel theme! In terms of world construction, the author uses subtle contrasting techniques to create two memorable time and spaces: in the future world, the settings of "December is abnormally cold", "high-rise buildings collapse all night", and "dense fog locks the city without day and night", combined with the cold prompts of the intelligent AI to remind the museum, instantly outline the alienation and weirdness of the technological era; and the original part after time travel Falling, "the smell of earth mixed with rotten leaves", "the light beam penetrating through the forest", "the fangs of the black-brown giant beast", "the dim light in the cave", every sensory detail is vivid and three-dimensional, making the mystery and danger of the primitive world come to you. The collision of two extremes of time and space is both shocking and graphic. The reader seems to be able to follow the protagonist in person to experience this unexpected time and space jump. The rhythm of the plot is so tight that it takes your breath away. From the faint golden light flashing from the tortoise shell in the museum, to the golden flame that suddenly engulfs the protagonist, to facing the beast attack after time travel and being tied up by the tribe members, every plot twist accurately captures the heart; and when the protagonist learns that he has He was mistaken as the "smart man who saved the tribe". When the secret of the tribe's ten-year search and the prediction of the "doomsday in twenty years" by the gods was revealed, the three core suspenses of "travel truth", "doomsday crisis" and "protagonist's mission" were instantly thrown out, making readers eager to explore the follow-up. The portrayal of the protagonist is also full of realism, from the initial perfunctory response to homework and curiosity attracted by the tortoise shell, to the panic when encountering danger after traveling through time, to the flattery to save his life when facing tribe members, to the collapse and despair when he learned that he would stay in the primitive tribe, the psychological changes are progressive, making the image of this ordinary student who unexpectedly shoulders the "rescue of the world" vivid and three-dimensional, which can easily resonate with readers. With stunning scene descriptions, tight plot rhythm, and full suspense setting, it lays the perfect foundation for a wonderful original adventure. After reading it, people can't help but look forward to the protagonist's growth in the tribe, and the revelation of more secrets about time, space, and prophecies. It can be called a masterpiece that grabs people's hearts at the beginning!