The Road to Lingxiao Begins with Bluffing and Cheating

Hello everyone, I am a turbulent youth. Today, I was invited by a friend to give a short review of a new book "Drunk on the Road to the Sky". Some of the opinions are personal opinions. You can just listen and believe them. Questions are welcome. The story begins with Taoist priest Xiaozui catching ghosts for the villagers. When Fairy Qinglian meets her, she mistakenly thinks that Taoist priest Xiaozui is a charlatan at first. Unexpectedly, Xiaozui actually cleans him up, which leads to a series of ridiculous stories. As usual. Let's talk about the advantages first. First, the writing style of the article is passable. Although the description of Xiaozui and Qinglian is not much, it still portrays the image of the two characters very well. The author should be a veteran. Second, he is very good at worldview design. Currently, this article has updated 7 chapters, but the sects involved have already appeared in the imperial court (prefect), the established Xiuxian sect (Huang Tianguan) that mutually supports the imperial court, the prince (Hindu force), the Buddhist heritage (Taoist Xiao Zui), the Qing Xiuxian sect (Cang Yunmen), internal warlord forces (Zhu Lengjun), and external hostile countries (Fusang). It can be seen from this that the author's ideas are very bold, his appetite is very big, and the design of the world view is very rich, which is difficult for many novice writers to achieve. Third, the pace of the story is very fast. It has been updated to Chapter 7, but there have been three fights, and it is expected that there will be another fight against bandits soon. It can be said that it is one wave after another. Readers who don't like slow pace should love this book more. However, since it is a short review, youth cannot be just praised. Frankly speaking, this article still has many shortcomings. First, the settings for the refreshing points are not obvious enough. For example, the battle between the female ghosts at the beginning should normally be the most attractive scene, and it should also be the most gripping part of the first three chapters yesterday. However, the author's writing skills are obviously inferior, and the description of the eerie atmosphere of the female ghosts is obviously not in place. As a result, the contrasting and refreshing feeling that he wanted to achieve was not captured. Fortunately, the author is good at action and makes up for this point better. I also hope that the author can design it well in the future. Secondly, the choice of words is still a little inappropriate. For example, the opening of the scene is about the ghost of a married woman. Hanay itself is a Japanese word, and its original meaning is a newlywed woman. The use of this word here is obviously a bit abrupt. At the same time, Qingchun still has reservations about some of the settings in the article. For example, the prince of Kyushu. Logically speaking, a character in this position is protected by the destiny of the country and is invulnerable to all ghosts. However, his mind was taken over by a generation of demons. The court still knows nothing about this. Qingchun is quite puzzled about this. Is it a deliberate clue or the author's carelessness? I hope the author can answer it in the following article. Today's short review is basically over here. Generally speaking, "Drunk on the Sky Road" has smooth writing, easy story, and is not obscure when reading. It should be worth reading for most readers. However, objectively speaking, the first few chapters of the article only attract readers. Whether it can capture the readers' desire to read probably depends on the first climax around chapter 30. Here, I also hope that the author can seize the time and step up the update.