Douluo: Huo Yuhao, the Immortal Lord of Great Love

The author of Born Evil. Not even the Tang Shenwang can limit it. How could a mere mortal like the Son of Destiny defeat him? Buddha's lackadaisical role in Douluo Star is enough for the protagonist to play with. And deus ex machina. How to play this. We can't hope to destroy this incompetent person who can't even pull his pigtails. It's better to pull Ji Dong out to fight with Buddha. After all, how could such an extraterrestrial demon from Blue Star be willing to serve as a tool for the evil and kind-hearted old man? Hold the throne of God. There are no super artifacts. It just so happens that Buddha has such a big gift package. This so-called astonishing wisdom will definitely not be able to defeat Ji Dong. Ji Dong can not only throw the throne to Xiao Huo. You can also gain a descendant of the God King who has a grudge against Buddha. At that time, all they have to do is find a way to join forces to trick the Buddha to death. The center of the divine world. Super artifact. Poseidon. Shura God. Can eat enough. It is true that Buddha fell. Everyone is full. After that, even if evil and good people return, there is nothing they can do to Master Ji Dong. And if the author wants to be more angry. Directly fused with the evil and good deities. Give Xiao Huo a combination of good and evil. Then learn from Eli Amen how to use your hands to rub the super magic weapon. Xiao Huo doesn't say he is as good as the Dragon God. At least there is the power of the Third Buddha 😏

The Immortal Lord doesn't believe in love. It's almost enough to use lovers to refine Gu. This book only covers the skin of the Immortal Lord. If you want me to say that everyone is a great lover of the Immortal Lord, it is better to go directly to the Holy Spirit Sect to spread the gospel. The Immortal Lord does not care about good and evil. Compared with the Immortal Lord, the methods of the Holy Spirit Sect seem a bit immature. Of course, there is no problem in betraying humans by taking refuge in a soul beast. After all, the Immortal Lord has no morals. If you only wear a skin but don't inherit the inside, then please don't touch the Great Love Immortal in the porcelain Gu world.

Basically there is nothing wrong with it, but there are a lot of typos. I don't want to say anything else. You should take a good look at what you wrote. I know there is nothing the author wants to see in my comment, but I still want to say it. Can you correct your typos?

I haven't read it yet, but I think since I'm writing about the Great Love Immortal, it's better to write about the defective mutated White Tiger Spirit, which is evil and spiritual, but not completely mutated. It's also inherently deficient, with only two or three levels. Then I met Tianmeng at the beginning, but it didn't attract Electrolux, but There is a part of the evil god's inheritance, and then you don't need the spiritual eyes at all, and directly rely on the evil god's inheritance to sacrifice the White Tiger clan. You can start to sacrifice slowly, and when you reach level 50 or 60, the whole family sacrifices, and then you can copy the centipede Huo Yuhao, and hit a wall in the far north. Don't let Huo Tai exceed the standard.

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It feels like there is still no innovation, and the plot is still the same as the original. It is basically impossible to see the later stages of this kind of book.

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The idea is terrible. Writing about the Immortal Lord must have the ultimate collapse of the beginning and the possibility of suffering along the way (betting on dogs). It also needs to get rid of some low-level interests. In fact, the beginning does not need to be changed. The cause and effect logic still needs to be clarified. In fact, it is better to learn from the source of Gu world below. It's a story about three hundred years of wandering in the beginning. It would be better if the characters and plots were written more normally. In the original novel, Lao Huo and a group of people are stupid. They don't look like they come from the forces of the Duke's Palace. Huo's own bloodline is the blood of the evil god, and his personality and psychological problems are too twisted (Duke's Palace) It's evil, but it's not as harmful as Huo's mother 23 out of 10) The possibility of going black directly and going crazy is very high. What Shrek did on the day of Da Tao's terrorist attack is normal. Normally, Lao Huo should give up filters and some beautiful illusions about the world. He can choose to run away directly and be killed. Shrek seized and destroyed the Star Dou Forest to fend for himself, Qiu Zai Huo saved Lao Huo from near death (she disliked Lao Huo's deathly manner and curiosity), and wrote it as a white moonlight like Xie Hanmo, directly paying tribute to Fang Yuan and Xie Hanmo's first meeting

Let me give the author some suggestions and personal understanding. Lao Huo's psychological problem is too big. He can't put it down, but he can't pick it up. How self-deceiving it is to be caught between good and bad people. On the day of Ma Xiaotao's attack, Lao Huo, who originally had beautiful and innocent illusions about the world, should die slowly and understand that the world is just a world. The grassroots team has really begun to grow, instead of acting like a fool. The shackles on the love brain will only increase the burden and live less freely. Why should Lao Huo fight to live or die for others or even a dead person? Why can't he live or die for himself and the cause he watches? Just ask why, although this is not in line with mainstream values, it is also the source of Lao Huo's real pain and inner conflict. The Duke's Palace is evil, but its harm is not equal to 20/10 of Huo's mother's harm. Open your eyes to see the world, be confused, understand and understand. Completely reconcile with yourself in the past, truly become yourself, fuck your fucking destiny, fuck the fucking injustice, go crazier than this morbid world, kill the god-king who made peace, fuck this fucking world, Fang Yuan Wu After a hundred years of wandering and rebirth, I completely let go of my obsessions and fantasies on the afternoon after my younger brother chose to live forever. However, Lao Huo is not an immortal. It is fundamental to let go of some of my obsessions, make friends, meet a good match, and work hard for a new goal. The change of mentality is fundamental. Huo Huo It doesn't matter whether the mother is resurrected or not. The living can still be suffocated to death by the dead. Life is painful and death is painful. Resurrection is also painful. In the end, both parties are still sad. Just asking for a clear conscience and letting them completely forget that there is a good afterlife is the greatest relief for both parties.

In my opinion, it's just that my soul is haunted by dreams.

Love the Immortal Lord? Multiple heroines? Is this possible?

All evil gods have inherited it, the evil god of the sky. Your heroine should not be less, she should be more than him.

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