Dragon Clan: Loan Lu Mingfei, Why Kill the Dragon If You Don't Have Money?

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🤮 Extremely poisonous. He got into a fight with Huang Mao and was imprisoned. Then Boss Su was blackmailed and was not fished out. After being imprisoned, he turned into a black man. After turning into a black man, he did not touch the heroine's Huang Mao. Instead, he said dirty words to Su Xiaoqiang and Xiami. The author also has some kind of disease.

Author, are you okay? The way Lu Mingfei is written is even more useless than the original work, it will never be able to help him, right? The ultimate in the dignified world was messed up like this by a group of gangsters. It's funny to me.

Good news, the protagonist does not have OOC Bad news, the protagonist does not have OOC

After Chapter 50, the story ends. It feels like it was written when the literary youth broke out. The family owner was threatened by a few gangsters. Lu Mingfei was still a mess. The family members were also an afterthought. They finally exploded, but they were castrated all of a sudden.

It is said to give courage, but in the end, the system is full of courage points, and then it can continue to scare other people. What the hell!

Does the author have any common sense? Xiao Tiannv's family is written like this. Long Yimingfei was in the third year of high school in 2009, and this book was in the first year of high school in 2007. Xiao Tiannv's family is a mining company. There is no one who has not been involved in mining in the past few years. He is a rich man. In the end, he can't do anything about a few gangsters. One thing to say is to hire a gold medal lawyer, stuff money, bribe witnesses, and fabricate evidence. In the early 2000s, if you had money and background, you couldn't deal with a few gangsters. You have to be thinking about your protagonist, your teammates are all useless and are holding you back, your opponents are strong and united and have nothing to do all day long to provoke the protagonist, in order to highlight the protagonist, right? The writing method from 20 years ago is original and disgusting to readers. No, please revise and rewrite it. The free part will start to feed readers.

. . . I wrote it recently, and the character is so disgusting. It's a pity that the subject matter is so poor. I could barely read it at the beginning. After the system took over, it was so bad. At the end, I was taught by the Zhou family to be timid and uncomfortable to watch. . .

Damn, the writing is so useless. Which one of us who comes to read Dragon Clan fan fiction is not here to see changes and transformations? You can still be so cowardly later. So why do you need someone like you who writes online articles? Then I might as well just watch the original version. This loan is like useless. Withdrawal, withdrawal, poisonous

A big one, the system directly controls the body

Author, you should compensate me for reading the content after chapter 42. My evaluation is that the writing is not as good as Douluo Dalu.

Don't discriminate against the author. He may have Down syndrome. If he can write such words that lack common sense and are harmful to the human body, just treat him as someone kicked, spit, and cursed on the side of the road.

It's a big poop. Jiangnan's memetic pollution is still too powerful. I shouldn't have high hopes.

A big lump, fw has always been fw, Lu Mingfei👎🏻

When I came to write online articles, I still thought about the literary youth, so I wrote a lot of them, right? Originally full of potential, the fight in Chapter 45 started to change. Either please yourself and write for yourself, regardless of whether anyone reads it, or start it again and don't let go of the 10 or so days of chapters.

Pure waste. Leash a dog, you are being bullied, he still knows how to bite people, this thing is worse than a dog.

Most of the supporting characters are OOC, and only the protagonist is a God of Gods restored from waste.

Author, please delete the forty chapters and rewrite them. The subject matter is quite good. It can be saved by rewriting it. Don't be reluctant to part with the chapters for more than ten days. The more you continue, the greater the cost will be.

No wonder everyone is scolding, go read Chapter 48, it's really hard to explain

No, I was really shocked by the first few pictures. They were so well written. It's no exaggeration to say that they have huge potential, but what the hell is going on after chapter 40? A lump! If you plan to make money, don't write this kind of thing💩. If you just want to please yourself and have no intention of making money, then write it again.

Wenqing disease is more serious than Jiangnan, pure💩

A complete history, this is history. It makes people angry after reading it. It is so cowardly after more than 80 chapters, which makes people die from the poison. This is even more fucking weak than the original work, and more licking than a dog. This is a complete history.

You can read it before Chapter 40, but it is not recommended to read it after Chapter 40

A book with Wanjun qualifications, rising and falling, falling, falling, falling, falling Direct GG

I didn't read the comment section, it grossed me out

The original work and a certain fan talk about the biggest monster in the world every day, the ultimate, the cornerstone, power and strength. After looking at the plot, the result is that he can't get past the little gangsters. The original work Long San's family dinner was groveling in front of a director. Lu Mingfei was bossed around by his uncle, a researcher, and he felt that his actual power was not as good as that of a county director of a prefecture-level city 🤭

As for this book, I have followed it from the beginning to the present. Now let me evaluate it in one sentence, it is that the author is making crazy complaints about the old way. It has become more and more subversive and brainless.

I read Chapter 48 directly and felt like my computer had been strengthened.

The plot of the gangster in your middle is really difficult. I suggest you change it in the middle. At least it won't be too intellectual.

A new way of writing, Lu Mingfei is still the same Lu Mingfei. The function of the system is only to provide Lu Mingfei with force, to go online to fight for Lu Mingfei after pulling up his emotions, and to slowly train Lu Mingfei. In short, the writing is not bad. The only problem is that there are too few updates