When Your Wish Is Seen

It's more comfortable to watch now. The biggest advantage is that the male protagonist is a normal person rather than an idiot or a pure scumbag. I hope it can continue to be the same.

This novel is so comfortable to read. It's amazing. It's on par with some of the novels serialized by Kissing Pig and Burnable Ice, but it's just not good enough. I think if the author can persevere, his work will be as high as theirs in my heart. 😅 What's sad is that the actual results of the works require too much luck. Several good daily youth novels I follow are all because of poor results. I hope the author can persevere.

It did get a bit boring in the later period, as bland as water, without the passion of love at the beginning, no development of the story, and no rustling, alas 😐

Shen's portrayal and role are too much compared to those of the other two. So far, I feel that the male protagonist has no reason to choose to open a harem instead of going solo. Xia also has a miserable buff blessing, and Xu Zhen has no reason to do so.

The writing is quite good, but I don't quite understand Xu's thoughts. First of all, there is nothing more profound between her and the protagonist besides chatting and playing games to support her liking it so much. She even thought about letting the protagonist like two people at the same time (in her cognition, she only has her best friend and her). I think it is impossible for normal people to not care.            Hide your thoughts until something happens later and you can't help but reveal your thoughts, and even take the initiative to stay away from the protagonist. Moreover, Xu's expression in the article is generous and enthusiastic for her, but her character is gentle, and the idiot Yu Jie who likes to take care of others and forgets about herself is very beautiful, which is a bit disconnected, especially the interaction during the movie, asking him not to dislike herself, which I found a bit embarrassing. Finally, I hope the author will keep writing it. I think there are basically no chapter reviews, so I don't know how the book will fare. Anyway, come on, stay away from the palace.

First of all, the author believes like me that the heroines should have a certain bond, so there is no Shura field in the work, only some vinegar acts as a seasoning, which I personally find very comfortable. Secondly, although the protagonist has super powers, he has very little sense of existence. He is basically for the college entrance examination and daily services. It is not the kind of story that I am exclusive to, and it suits my taste. Furthermore, the protagonist is calm and motivated, considerate and charming, unlike some works that are criticized just because the protagonist is handsome. The heroine is well portrayed and not a template. So this book is really good, but it's too picky

I hope the author will finish the book and it will be so well written. It will be as plain as a trickle, but with strong emotions surging undercurrent. I love reading it!!!

Let's talk about whether it's time to promote cheats. Although the recent updates are very ambiguous, they don't look exciting enough. The beautiful girls do have emotional foundations, but they have reached the parent stage. It's time for cheats to have a more prominent presence. Don't be like July, who wrote a cheat and almost forgot about it.

All 21 monthly passes are given to you, the author just code hard.

Take it, author, this is my last monthly ticket!