I Just Fell Out of Love, and My Wife Came Back from the Future.

I've never understood whether this counts as green. The future heroine got married and found the past hero, and she fell in love with the past hero. Is it the past male protagonist who has an affair with the future male protagonist or the future female protagonist who has an affair with the future male protagonist?

The author's level is online and the writing is pretty good, but the plot of Qingmei is really outdated. I don't think it is suitable for today's male videos. However, it is only tens of thousands of words now. I hope the author can write new ideas in the future.

Emm, what do you say? The follow-up is to firmly choose one person, which is not bad. If the protagonist is always ambiguous... Just like a rental girlfriend, then... It feels like it will collapse. And the male protagonist's family is considered ordinary. Our deer heroine... Hiss! And Qingmei also... Has the feeling of a rich woman (every time the heroine Deer appears is described in detail, I believe it will be a single recommendation, if not, don't blast me)

Is this a male channel or a female channel? Am I in the wrong place?

Originally, wasn't all this done by Li Zhiyi? After the car accident, he traveled to a parallel world where he had no memory of the male protagonist, and there was no such thing as recovering his memory. If you do something wrong, you can correct it. If it's someone else, you might as well just write her off. The sense of fragmentation is too strong 😄

1. The senior is reborn at the age of 35, and the male protagonist should be 34 years old. In this line, he breaks up with Qingmei, wastes a few years, meets the senior, and starts his career as an independent game producer, which is the senior's timeline. Assuming line b 2, since there is talk of rebirth, is there a possibility that Qingmei's amnesia is caused by another line (line a) crossing back, or that line b regrets and wants to recover from her death. 3. In my personal opinion, it is more likely that the A-line is back-crossed. Qingmei was indeed raised by the male protagonist's parents. The only difference may be that she held the wrong child? (One chapter mentions that the two birthdays are only a dozen days apart) This possibility is hard to say.

One is the story of a seductive wife who failed to chase her husband into the crematorium and was reborn as a little puppy husband. . . The other one is Xiao Qingmei, the adopted daughter's time-travelling drama, who opens the script of "Weak Green Tea". . .

Anyway, the author had better focus on the key points. Qingmei is somewhat related and can be used as a branch plot. Don't make readers disgusted by the vulgar plot of getting back together with Qingmei 🙂. Otherwise, there is only one sentence: What a death!

The contract has been signed. If you want to invest, feel free to do so. The new book issue attaches great importance to follow-up reading. I hope readers will come over and turn this book to the last page after reading other masterpieces. Don't keep books, it's really easy to get sucked to death. (You don't want me to enter the palace either~)

I also like Hou, but I think this single deer is pretty good

Brother, doesn't what you write like this mean that the original Li Zhiyi is dead? What's the point of pursuing her husband's crematorium?

How should I put it? Chen Zhiyi in the parallel world traveled through time and became Li Zhiyi. What should Chen Zhiyi's parents in the parallel world do, and they just abandoned them? The original Li Zhiyi went there again. Did he become Chen Zhiyi or died? If he died, or even if he didn't die, he became Chen Zhiyi. Isn't that too cheap? The Li Zhiyi before the car accident was just like that, and he couldn't bear any cause and effect.

After reading it, I feel good. Don't let the deer lose. Thank you.

I just read Chapter 30. My evaluation is that it is very suitable for film and television adaptation. It has the logical thinking of male channels and the emotional expression of female channels. Although the writing style is still very immature, the flaws are not hidden. I saw someone in the comment area saying that the plot will be more complicated later. Although I haven't seen it yet, I think it is very likely to happen, because this For authors who are not so good at writing, novels are not suitable for long-form or daily updates, because they require time to polish. Therefore, if the author wants to write a novel, he must grasp the rhythm of the plot and preferably the length of short and medium stories, whether from the perspective of telling the story well or pursuing future film and television adaptations.

Isn't it a little too delayed? Can it come back to its full potential in the end?

It looks good, but it's too stretched!

"You don't want to write your novel anymore?" "Eunuch, I have recently started to think about a new theme for my next novel. "Hahaha, okay, let's sign up! From Chapter 68

I voted for the wrong book. There should be 10 votes next month. If I can persist, all the votes next month will be for this book.