The Mythical Strong Man of the Prehistoric Jie Sect

The setting theme is good but some settings have loopholes.

I always feel that the introduction of a character with hundreds of thousands of bad jokes is too dramatic. I feel like the author wants to write a high-end prehistoric story, but also introduces funny characters.

The essence of Xiantian Zuyan is higher than that of the prehistoric/Hongjun/innate treasure, and it is a treasure above the Chaos Qinglian. Can create the world, copy the laws, and copy all things in spiritual treasures. . Quasi-sacred instantly. . As a result, another river god appeared. The long river of time/destiny is a branch of the main river of the river god. Then another hand came out and played with the River God, but he had no brains to help the protagonist. . I can't watch it anymore

I don't know why the teachings of Chan, who can at least allow ordinary people to survive, are written as villains, and the teachings of Jie, who don't treat ordinary people as human beings, are written as decent! What I mean is that if you really traveled to the Conferred Gods and met the so-called Jiejiao Immortal, they would probably kill you and refine you. But when you meet the Immortal Chanjiao, you can at least live happily! So! One cannot forget one's roots! Be firm in your stance! Those who give you a way to survive must support you! We must firmly oppose and knock down those who torture and kill you!

Just borrow spiritual treasures from others to practice, and just give some benefits. You have to tell all about your brother. He claims to know that Zhi'er is holding gold through the market, but in fact, all he does is to show off. It's quite poisonous.

I couldn't stand the Honghuangliu novel before, it was too troubling. According to the original meaning of those words from Taoism and Buddhism. The original meaning of the word Daluo Taiyi is strong and invincible. Now I suddenly understand that these low-end prehistoric beings are probably just one Milky Way, one sun, one moon, plus Jiuyao Star, and the other satellites are like stars in the sky. Then wait for the proportion to enlarge, or the character to shrink.

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The writing is immature and the mission creation is poor. If you can finish the first ten chapters, you should read the rest. If you can't finish the first ten chapters, there is no need to read it. The idea is very good, but I feel that the system introduced in the Journey to the West is the best. Either the internal evolution of the world, or the practice of refining the essence to transform the gas into the spirit, and then cultivate the golden elixir into the abdomen, and then become a great magical power, and finally become a Hunyuan Yiqi Immortal. In my opinion, if the prehistoric power level is high, there must be many systems and strong mechanisms. Aren't they all going to the top of the cultivation world and relying on the aura of the prehistoric world. They all understand the rules and control the avenue. Daluo time and space is unique. They can't make something out of nothing. No matter how powerful you brag, it will make people write this prehistoric book low. According to the prehistoric system, true immortals either break and see the true self, or they practice falsehoods and become true. If you can't do it, there is no need to brag about how high-end the prehistoric book is.

Do you think there is any way to reincarnate the characters in Pili into the ancient world? The reincarnation of true spirits requires unique ideological paths and strong styles. For example, the three major sources of Buddhism faced off against Western religion. The relics of the Butian Black Turtle turned into a demon world and gave birth to twin bodies. The drunken Huanglong transformed from the Yellow Dragon and faced the Yellow Dragon.

😰😰😰Shi Leng River God

Okay, I have thought about similar ideas before, but I have never written a novel.