Shenhao: After Falling Out of Love, Start a Perfect Life

At the age of 24, who can buy a car, a house and pay a bride price at the age of 24? Is this introduction meant to satirize the readers?

The male protagonist I wrote is a bit twisted. He either becomes a scumbag or a sea king. If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them. .

No, this introduction is a bit too much. In that country, 24-year-old young people can generally afford a house. They really think of a house as a small appliance. You can buy it if you want. 😥 The minimum wage for farmers is 270 per day.

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After reading it, it's not bad. It's the same genre as Charming. It's much better if you don't have the ability to pretend to write daily. The huge difference in data may be due to promotion. The first few books on the list are not as good as yours. Look at the additional routines. In theory, it should be a long article. It is best not to do it too fast, and if you hang too much, it will easily collapse in the mid-term. Nowadays, many great writers are like this. They gather data without thinking in the early stage, and then run out of tricks after finishing the three-stroke axe. After raising the reader threshold, they cannot go back and end it hastily. It is recommended to keep the rhythm and listen to it to understand. Don't rush the progress without thinking. Sudden changes in style are a taboo. Try to write in the middle and late stages first.

I'm particularly annoyed by a system that pops up a large attribute panel after a while. Are you playing a game?

Why do you feel like there's something wrong with this protagonist's brain? ?

What attracted me to this book was the details and the writing was not exaggerated. There is nothing I can do about the result. I hope the author can finish it as much as possible and give it a good ending. Especially Xiaolin, I really want to see her grow up. Come on

This feels very similar

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It feels good, I like this kind of delicate things, step by step

This writing style of urban writing is already two versions behind. Coyly, evasive

First of all, thank you for your support! I'd like to give you an ORZ! For newcomers and new books, the biggest fear is not enough reading. If you don't follow up, there will be no data and no recommendations... I hope that even if you are a book owner, you can help click on the last page of the latest chapter every day and give you the reading data! Xiaodao will do its best to bring you a good reading experience! Also, I feel that the pace is a little slow recently. I will speed up the story a little bit to make the book more enjoyable. After all, Xiaodao is a newcomer, and the plot, rhythm, and character descriptions are definitely a bit unsatisfactory. I hope everyone can be tolerant and provide opinions. In order to thank all the book friends for their support, Xiaodao's personal job is an angle plastic fitter. The professionalism is definitely not as good as that of a big shot, but after years of working in the industry, I understand a little bit... If it doesn't work, I can still help you, and ask a more professional boss. If you have any questions about myopia, you can leave a comment. If you need help, I will try my best to help you. Thank you again!

Thanks to book friend 20170821111717165 for your monthly reward support! Become the first deacon in this book! Thanks, ORZ. I was very happy when I saw it just after I finished my work, even happier than the 30,000 yuan order Xiaodao just opened! I haven't mentioned anything yet, tonight is a blast, save more manuscripts and work hard to write the follow-up plot! Thanks again, boss!

Look at this big brother. He is 180cm tall and weighs 90kg initially. After eating for a year, he is only 115cm. The protagonist will not be as thin as everyone thinks in the early stage 😥

First of all, thank you book friends for your support! And to the book friends who vote and follow the reading every day, thank you! ! ORZ, Your support is the greatest motivation for the author's creation! ! Thanks! Also, tell me about the book. First of all, Xiaodao is a pure newcomer and has never written a book. I just like to read Shenhaowen and urban-type books. Later, I found that many books were unbearable, so I wrote one myself. The original intention is to write about the life of an ordinary person after getting money. In order to enrich the character, there will be no mindless buying and selling. We deliberately let the protagonist stay at home for a month at the beginning, so that he will be less excited after being excited. As for the plot and rhythm, judging from the data, it belongs to the street level. In fact, Xiaodao personally knows what the problem is. The book is not enjoyable enough. As a growth-type novel, the protagonist's core motivation is insufficient in the early stage. In order to avoid a blunt show-off plot, many of the slap-in-the-face jokes that are common in powerful novels are basically omitted. Because it doesn't feel real. As far as Xiaodao is concerned, if you see luxury cars and mansions on the road, and people buy them casually, at most you will feel that you are really rich, and you won't lick them. Besides, the protagonist is not so rich now. Another point is that the pace is slow, and the character descriptions in the early stage are too much and not attractive enough. How should I put it, after reading books for so many years, I can actually do things like slaps in the face and fast-paced tracks. These will definitely be included in the settings of subsequent chapters. But to be honest, there will be very little space in the early stage. First, the protagonist is not rich enough and his social status is not that high. Secondly, the protagonist's mentality needs a process of transformation, from never being confident to being confident now, to being more ambitious, which needs to be paved the way. The cycle of evil is here. The writing power is insufficient, the setting is not interesting enough, and the early data is not good. Then I inevitably want to change the rhythm and settings. In the original outline, there were still two more fights with Wei Runqing before it would come to fruition... Although it has been changed to an accident now, it is still reasonable. But it's more or less stiff. Now I am afraid that I will use too much force, which will not suit the character, and the tone of the book will collapse directly. I say so much because I actually want to hear everyone's opinions and learn from them if they make sense. At present, we are still planning to maintain this rhythm and add some exciting plots in a limited amount. I hope you will support me a lot, thank you!

Su Ze

The writing is okay, I hope it will continue

After reading ten chapters, is this pure love? Godly article?

I'm starting to see it on the shelves. I think the author's writing skills are good, but the author's writing needs to be improved. The heroine is well portrayed but the inner drama is like a twisting stick. The protagonist's behavior is quite childish. I am looking forward to the author's next book. The author has 🔥 potential. I hope the pretense is smoother. The protagonist's emotions should not be so, or he should just be a scumbag. Don't have unnecessary inner dramas. I recommend you to read the book for law school freshmen to see how the protagonist in his novel becomes a scumbag.

This is entering the palace 🤔

The woman's writing is too utilitarian. Isn't she here just for the man's mane? The writing is too deliberate.

Are there any relatively peaceful stories about God?

After catching up with the latest chapter, the main line has obviously begun to pay attention to the people at the bottom. If this is really the way to go, I suggest changing the title of the book For example, Perfect Life: Starting from Becoming a People's Hero. Or, Shenhao: I will lead the rich. It feels like it will absorb a little more.

I'm not a person who likes to pay attention to details, so I won't bother to talk about the problems with many details. However, the author's writing style is indeed good, and his skills can be seen between the lines. The characterizations also have their own characteristics, allowing people to remember which name corresponds to who. The only point is that there are currently too many female characters. It is normal for a powerful writer to have a harem, but it should not be too many. Personally, I think it's appropriate to focus on three to five. It's the end of the month, and there aren't many tickets, so I'll give you 4 first. Hope there will be more updates