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Write a broad world view and then start focusing on the love between children, right? I'm afraid that the love between children is the worst written one.

It's a female author, it's interesting but doesn't look comfortable

I came from Daily Guide. The name of the male character and the writing style are not very common in male videos. It feels like the author is a female. After reading ten chapters, I can't say it's ugly, and I don't dare to say anything about food, grass, and ambrosia. However, because the golden three chapters are not attractive enough, it definitely does not suit the appetite of male readers who usually only read cool articles on male channels; because there is no description of women's appearance, it does not suit the appetite of male readers who like to watch the interaction between men and women in the light novel section of male channels.

The subject matter is very good, but I feel like I can't keep up with it. It's tasteless and it's a pity to abandon it.

After reading a few chapters, I got the impression that the author should be a woman. To be honest, this book will have a very small audience among male readers. After reading two chapters, I lost the motivation to read it, so I gave up and said goodbye.

The author's foreshadowing is too long. This is how he builds the conceptual world in his mind, but he must express it in a way. The origin and process of the story should be as concise as possible, and the climax should be as slow and elongated as possible. No one cares how many times you went to the toilet while eating, how much makeup you spent on, how many people you talked to, and what you said. The beginning of the chapter should be a brief introduction to the story and then directly climax into the world and lay out the background However, it is better for the author to follow his own pace. I would like to make some suggestions.

After reading the first 4 chapters, my biggest feeling is that it is not exciting enough. The daily introduction is a bit complicated and not eye-catching enough, which can easily make people lose interest in reading. Few readers attracted by this introduction want to read your daily writing. In today's era of online writing, men's videos are more popular, cool writing prefers fast pace, and they need to be invincible. It is best not to be depressed. The beginning can be written as a supporting character struggling to survive on the train. Suddenly, a warm-looking program is broadcast on TV. After asking for help, the protagonist splits the carriage with a sword and makes a brilliant appearance. At least it can echo the introduction. When I read the previous daily, I kept thinking where is your introduction? There are also names of supporting characters. Two-character names are recommended, such as Yan Meng. You can also forcibly connect the name with his role in the plot. Uncommon characters and names that are too difficult to pronounce can easily make it difficult for people to remember what this person does. Generally speaking, this problem only occurs in literature with a Western background.

I like this way of writing very much. After reading so many books, this fresh way of writing is quite to my liking. Author, please work hard and persevere🥳

How long will it last this time? Can it be a million words?

Come on, I voted 4 monthly votes to support it. The world view is quite interesting.

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I am quite interested in the subject matter, but I was very dissuaded when I saw the name.