At the End of Ming Dynasty: I Transformed into Taizu's Spiritual Throne!

How is this different from the time-traveling portrait of Taizu next door?

I think this book is okay. Why is no one watching? This gimmick is okay. Although, the content is reasonable and general. But why is no one watching? My personal opinion is just my personal taste. The intensity of the plot is not enough. In other words, it's not very pleasant. Not cool enough. There is a small problem with the architecture. What are the benefits of the protagonist? Can I eat and drink, or can I be worshiped? What is he working hard for? If the glory does not belong to the protagonist, it will be distorted. It is better to be the emperor yourself, because you can enjoy it yourself. Don't take the route of starting your own business. Then you can only take the show-off route. You can only pretend to be with Chongzhen, not other celebrities. Writing is OK. The content is reasonable and the writing is average. The coolness should be enhanced. It's too routine, nothing exciting. Don't write so flatly. Looking at the mountains, I don't like the flatness. Yes, yes. It's just one step away from being a top quality product, and it's not refreshing enough. It's just not cool. Written by supporting actors on a daily basis, ouch. Write about the interaction between Chongzhen and his son. . . Pay attention to the details and do exciting things. Don't be too routine. The last question is the sense of expectation. Reasonable and average, but the sense of expectation is very poor. It is difficult to write. Increase the coolness. It would be better if you could write with a sense of expectation. Just these two things. Others can be written. Let me help you think of a solution. To increase the level of enjoyment, the only two things that can be written about are making money and fighting. Clean the court and take control of Jinyi Weidong Factory. Searching the house to collect money. Let the queen suppress the rebellion, give priority to writing, capitalize and close-up. Care about what is reasonable. Improve the coolness. It's too slow. How could those people resist? There is a problem with the architecture. Again, what are the benefits of the protagonist? Can't bring in the protagonist, it won't be fun. This book may have been released eight to five years ago. It's not easy to write, if you keep writing this idea. Add crisis. The protagonist wants to make money. The civil servant group resisted and fell into the water. It's the intense kind, assassination, etc. Then, train troops and move the capital. I must fight against Li Zicheng and write a war. The intensity increased. Then, I wrote that the Qing side would still fight. Nanjing is not convinced by you. Keep killing. How the people were killed, Huo Huo. Pull emotions. Too bland. Reasonable, no passion. Change the settings so that the protagonist can get benefits and be able to show off. It won't work if we don't change it. There is something wrong with this structure. It is better to set it so that the protagonist can wake up in the ranking. Introducing other historical worlds. The Qin Dynasty, the Tang Dynasty, the Three Kingdoms, and the Song Dynasty. When the protagonist conquers a certain level, he can open other historical planes. Then, what are the benefits of the protagonist? No need to dissipate. Set it so that if no one worships the protagonist, he will die. If many people worship, you will have magical powers. Become the way of heaven. Conferred God. This is roughly the idea, and the structure is completed. As for the specifics, the author thinks about it himself. What can be changed and what cannot be changed. Take control yourself. Not everything I said is right. The author still thinks about it himself. But changes must be made If it continues to be dull, this book will be lost to everyone. The specific changes are up to the author himself. That's it for you.

As far as Chongzhen is concerned, it is possible to renew your life in the first 7 years and 11 years. It is difficult for you to survive in Nanjing in 17 years.

The labels for novels about the Ming Dynasty are really too detailed. In addition to the Ming Dynasty, there are also Hongwu and Chongzhen. I think the next step is Wanli and Jiajing.

The idea is relatively novel and the opening is well written. Come on author 👏

In the last year of Congzhen, no one could stop him. No matter how powerful the emperor was, what was the use? All the people were dead, all the loyal ones were dead. All the civil and military officials in the dynasty were thinking about how to welcome King Chuang.

Out of ink? Why don't you write anymore!