
One Punch Man: Starting Sacrifice System
一拳超人:开局献祭系统
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 24k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 10mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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10Chapters
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Do you have any suggestions?
As a bookworm for more than ten years, I personally feel that the problem lies in the fact that the cheats are used too hard. Just one protagonist practicing unlimited cheats is already extremely buggy. Later, he also adds the ability to travel through the world. The more you use the cheats, the less content the story will have. This is a common problem. You must know that the upper limit of the power of the world is already very high with just one punch. There are many heroes on the list who can smash buildings with one punch. Another point is, what is the central will of the protagonist to cultivate and grow? When you write a story, you have to focus on a central point. This is what novels are most afraid of. The protagonist travels around the world and fights and grabs things to become stronger. What urges him and for what purpose? Don't set too many vague goals, otherwise it will become a mess. The plot before and after will be easy for the left and right brains to compete with each other, and it will also be easy to end. No matter how good your writing is, it will be useless. Personal suggestion: The biggest attraction of the One Punch Man comic, apart from Saitama himself, is the hero. My personal suggestion can be written around this aspect. As for the final BOSS, he is naturally a god.