Traveling Through the World of Dragons, I Hold Twelve Talismans

It's a bit like a teacher assigning elementary school students to write a short essay on the title of the most impressive scene, and then wrote an abstract essay about turning off the lights, hiding behind the door and waiting for the family to come back to surprise them, and getting sick and being carried by the family out of the 9981 crisis.

Do you have Aki and Princess Rei as heroines? Don't let Lu Mingfei accept a daughter. I've read a book about the protagonist of Holy Lord before, but later on Lu Mingfei accepted a bunch of harem girls. I'm really speechless.

Uh-huh, the protagonist is a demon sorcerer, can't he make items to find magic? Both Daolong and Holy Lord can do it

No wonder the data is so bad, the writing is procrastinating and boring, and it is full of subtle poisonous points. For example, the nine talismans lost at the beginning can only be found by contacting the original staff, and there is also the classic gambling scene. Why do I say subtle, because it is okay to say it is poisonous, but it is uncomfortable to look at if it is not poisonous. I don't know how many times the mafia has used it together in the original work. It's a disguised form of combat power. The protagonist's personality is very strange, and the author seems to have a wrong understanding. You wrote the protagonist for a long time, so you can slowly find the charm, but the reader's time is limited, and everyone's acceptance threshold is different. The protagonist should find the charm quickly. In addition, it is a classic CP. Le Zhongyu collects CP for the original party. Why do you think you have nothing to write about? If you don't want to accept it, it's marginalized and you have to give me a CP.

Click the midpoint and throw the spell at the beginning.

It's ridiculous to force the match between Little Goddess and Lu Mingfei. Little Goddess was initially attracted to the protagonist, but later she had to forcefully push her to Lu Mingfei.

Why does the protagonist have an inexplicable liking for Lu Mingfei? When I saw chapters 18 and 19, I thought I was watching Danmei. It's just a personal feeling 🙂

I feel bad when I see this kind of introduction that doesn't match the title. Why don't you change the title of the book from Holding 12 Talisman to Losing 12 Talisman?

Finally, it's not Lu Mingfei, the protagonist on the side of the road. It's just that piece of shit. I don't know why it's all written about him as the protagonist. And when xxx comes back, it's just that piece of mud. No matter where he goes in the world, he's just a mailbox.

Generally speaking, the protagonist is just like Chu Zihang's father. He is obviously very strong and wants to pretend to be classy, ​​but underneath he is just a country bumpkin who loves to eat street food and braised vegetables.

As soon as I read the synopsis, I knew it was a novel that was going to hit the streets.

Anyone who has watched Jackie Chan's Adventures will not regard her as the heroine. It's like your naughty daughter has become your wife. It's hard to accept.

The start is a bit too strong, completely different from the one shown in the anime. Since we are on the path of invincibility, there is no need to set the spells to scatter in all directions, right? If it's just to advance the plot, it's not very convincing.

Xiaoyu, forget it, it feels weirder than going to Rikona in the world of maids.

Are you too fond of Lu Mingfei? 😅

The introduction first states that he is the ninth devil in the world of Jackie Chan's Adventures, and then writes a lot of nanny titles, such as emotional mentor and sole lecturer. What do these things have to do with the devil? 😓

Also the ninth demon, the eight demons represent the eight hexagrams of the world, corresponding to the eight immortals. What the hell is your ninth demon? Which one does it correspond to? Just write it if you don't understand the settings?

Now that I have read Chapter 18, I feel like the character of the protagonist is not established. It feels like except that the author sets the protagonist to live for decades and has the title and ability of a demon and a mage, the others are not like people/demon who have lived for decades.

Both the characterization and the progression of emotions are very well described! It's a bit cool and has enough content. People who haven't read Dragon Clan and Jackie Chan's Adventures can also read it. The most important thing is that this book is a harem story, and the emotional scenes are not bad. I like this one. Just looking at it from the author's perspective now, is the plot advancing a little too fast? (Although as a reader, I enjoyed reading it!) I feel that the subsequent plot is not very easy to write. I don't know if the author has an outline. I hope that the subsequent content can maintain the current level. Come on, author!

According to the official comics and novels of Jackie Chan's Adventures, the Tiger Talisman also has the ability to split into two positive and negative universes. Although it may be combined with a magic mirror, I don't think an ordinary magic mirror has such an ability, so it should be that when the Tiger Talisman hit the magic mirror, it accidentally opened the Tiger Talisman's ability

The writing is inexplicable. . You can write a million words just like this, what a profound skill. .

What's the point of applying Chu Zihang's character and Zhao Menghua's plot to Lu Mingfei? Giving away a daughter? Nanny?

Why do I feel like the devil is getting lower and lower in the last 50 chapters?

My evaluation is that it is one of the worst dragon fanfics I have ever read. I have a high resistance to dragon fanfics. But a milder assessment of this book is that it is tasteless to eat, and it is not a pity to throw it away. The ugly review is that it is filled with all kinds of low-life and private goods. The protagonist's character can be said to be a replica of Chu Zihang's father. There is no argument for it. There is no argument for giving away a girl to force a match. It is procrastinating and boring with many poisonous points. At present, it seems that there is nothing worth looking forward to.

Why does he have to lose a few at the beginning every time he wants to read a spell? 😅

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The noble magician is always there. The noble magician is so annoying to watch. Why are you so noble all the time?

I don't even need to read the introduction to know that the finale is about to gather 12 spells! No need to look anymore

Polite self-recommendation, Dragon Clan fan "Dragon Clan: Lu Mingfei's Restarting Life". If you are interested in reading it, welcome critical comments🙏🙏🙏 Friends who like Dragon Clan can come to criticize and give advice, and communicate more

Who are the heroines? It looks like it's for a woman. If there are multiple female protagonists, it's best to accept them all, otherwise many people's favorite female characters will be sent to other people's beds. It's very annoying to watch like this. It looks like a novel about a female protagonist. I really want to know who the female protagonist is.