Naruto: Beginning as the Crown Prince of the Reincarnated Land of Ancestors

The name is not eye-catching enough. If it had been called "From the Wedding Night with Princess Kaguya", I would have read it long ago.

It's so outrageous, brother, Kaguya Otsutsuki was forced into a desperate situation by the natives. The reason was because she was pregnant and could not exert her full strength. Is there a possibility? Even if her strength is 1 out of 10, she can still kill all the humans on the surface. I don't know what the author is writing, and the plot of this book itself is wrong. There is no emperor of the ancestor country in the manga. Otsutsuki Hagoromo and Otsutsuki Hamura were born because Otsutsuki Kaguya could not digest the fruit of the sacred tree after eating it, and then coupled with the prayers of all living beings, these two children were born. They are so strong because they carry part of the power of the sacred tree fruit, and the Ōtsutsuki Ishiki should have reached the ninja world before the sacred tree fruit was fully formed, and even the members of the branch family and the main family came together, instead of being separated like your book. If they were separated, why did it say in the original book that Kaguya Ōtsutsuki ate the sacred tree fruit after he attacked the Ōtsutsuki Ishiki? It shows that the two of them came together, and then Otsutsuki Kaguya was greedy and wanted to eat the fruit of the sacred tree, so he attacked Otsutsuki Ishiki

Every heroine must not use a body so that your son has no blood relationship with you.

Zu Tianzi: Kaguya, become one with me! ! ! !

When the consciousness enters the dungeon, it's very strange if you adopt a girl who is not her original body. And eye surgery is eye surgery, what is it called? If you know how to name it, it would be better if you don't have it.

Just a person who traveled through Naruto. It would be nice if the author started by telling a story. The author intentionally said that the male protagonist does not know about the sacred tree. When Kaguya appears, the male protagonist remembers that it was in ancient times. Looking ahead, the first three chapters are full of water, and I thought the author wanted to dig a hole. Who knows that in the fourth chapter, he ran out to fill the hole. To make it clear in 1,000 words requires water. Don't like it, disgusting, cut it, don't disturb it.

The part with Kaguya is still pretty good

Although you have solved the problem of Naruto's rapid improvement in each world and did not have to write the final result, but after you finished writing each world, there is no half-cent relationship with the main world, and there is no connection at all except for the ending and an exchange. What did this book come from? The first time I read the title, and then I looked at your early stage, you were very impressed with the first world Kaguya wrote. After leaving the two worlds, there was no response at all. Do you want to find an opportunity to go back and take a look? Even if you can only go back for a month, you can make connections and deepen the drawing. You can also talk about the plan properly. Anyway, it is not the same world. What can I do? Now this book is like half-life. I haven't subscribed for a month. One chapter jumps to a different world, but I feel that it won't affect the plot anyway. It doesn't matter if the plot you wrote continues too many times.

I can't explain why, but it felt so boring and I felt like I had no motivation to continue reading. I feel like the author didn't handle the connection between simulation and "reality" well.

The idea is okay, but the writing is too drawn out