Ultraman: Beginning Transformed into a Pirate Zero

What attracts me the most about this book is not only the Ultra spirit, but also the little by little growth of the protagonist, and the captain's description of the saint's feelings, which is the protagonist, which makes me particularly eager to pursue it. However, after the protagonist regains his memory, the writing and ink are less and no more. I don't know who the author is. The outline is like this. Some readers still think that the Tiga film is too long and the author has compressed the article. I think it is a pity. I hope the author will not be disrupted by some one-sided readers. There is no other meaning. I like your writing style very much. I will read whatever you write, so I give you a monthly ticket.

Everything is good, but the main character is too disgusting. Whether it's time travel or a parallel world, if one inexplicably has multiple mothers, wives and children, or one inexplicably becomes a successor, no matter how you deal with it, you may lose a number of readers.

It's just that the protagonist is weak and has no obvious strengthening line. The miserable style is not pleasing to the eye now.

Can you write a book? I haven't seen the protagonist poop until now, so why doesn't the protagonist need to poop?

It's really a weird setting that the protagonist and the indigenous people have the same DNA.

The protagonist, Dark Lops, is a good soldier. He is good at fighting some monsters in the early stage. Elite Lops can fight with the Ultra Brothers. If you are a good soldier, you should be better than Leo in the early stage.

The plot is okay, but let's mention the protagonist's fighting ability. According to the plot, both the protagonist and the monsters are related to the alien beasts. The monsters have become stronger. The protagonist cannot only have the strength of a miscellaneous soldier. Now it is difficult for the protagonist and Tiga to fight two against one.

Can the author reveal a little bit about whether the protagonist becomes Dark Lops or something else? In fact, it is better to write it more simply. I'm worried that I won't be able to write well when my job is too big. It's easy to write a painful and heavy plot 😏. It's better to imitate the idea of ​​​​the prisoner next door. The black hand and the monster with higher strength are familiar characters to everyone, and they are much stronger than the ones you make up yourself.

This world view is not something that Tiga and One-Eye can defeat. The monster's attack is bigger than that of One-Eye. This general is even harder to defeat. It takes so many hours of hell every day.

The writing is very good. It is considered the best among the Ultra stories I have read. It is not brainless and has positive energy. However, the writing of time travel is too bad. The riddles in the early stage were okay. The new chapters of memory recovery are as written as S. I am not exaggerating. There is also the relationship with the captain. If the captain's identity is not confirmed in the early stage, the captain will die or live. In the latest chapters, the protagonist shows off and the captain behaves like a passerby. In short, the quality of the front is very high, starting from the Triangle Space Station

Fortunately, the protagonist seems to be miserable, but the author's balance of positive and negative feedback is very good. Although the miscellaneous mechanical arcana is very weak, there is a panel with alien beasts, and there is a lot of room for growth. Although the protagonist is tortured to death by the consciousness of alien beasts, he has the old man in the pocket, and he feels full of security. In this way, the plot reaches a climax until the protagonist sacrifices and does sit-ups. Coupled with the light-hearted and funny writing style, although the "abuse of the master" is still very attractive to read. 👍 But, I was really dumbfounded until Chapter 89. How long did it take for the protagonist to get new skills from Lao Deng? The protagonist has not even used it twice in a huge battle, but the opponent comes to beat the protagonist with a new skill? The protection period is not as fast as the speed of light. Author, are you serious? 😅 Everyone likes high-pressure dungeons not because they really like to watch pressure games, but because they like to watch the protagonist grow rapidly while resisting pressure. You can't let people experience the real feeling of the protagonist becoming stronger. How about playing two more smooth games? 😯

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It's not just Dagu and Masaki Keigo, it's not just the ending of Tiga (the child and Lina turned into light because of hope) and the ending of Dana (the light of hope from everyone summoned Tiga). Diga is a worldview that implements idealism from beginning to end. As long as there is light in the heart, everyone can become light is the main purpose of Diga. It doesn't matter if you have super ancient genes or not. Just like the episode of Zilda Center's Attack and Defense, in the end, a ball of light flew out of the doctor and merged into Sheila. Then Sheila turned into a golden phoenix, and the three astronauts of Jeep Ta-3, after competing for energy with unknown life forms, also turned into light life forms and went to the universe. Takumo, the plasma ghost, is similar (with so many people killed, he became the plasma ghost), although it can only appear with the Lightning Man. People in the Tiga world really can cause miracles and become light as long as their hearts are bright and they have hope.

😏 In recent chapters, the protagonist feels a little bit led by the nose. If the overall tone of the book is that of miserable enlightenment, then that's fine. If it's not a depressive tone, it needs to be adjusted. (Also, I think the subsequent plot of evacuating the area around the volcano may have some disgusting plot points. Personally, I hate plots where the protagonist team faces resistance from various human beings after something goes wrong. I have experienced enough)

It's not bad at all. It's not a brainless novel. The protagonist is also an Ultra Light. It has a very obvious foreshadowing of time travel, plus Noah's strange plug-in, which is not friendly to me. Time travel can easily lead to things I don't like, such as revisionism, the uncle paradox, etc. Noah's plug-in always feels superior. What about the boss watching the protagonist fight to the death and play like a monkey? Of course, the emphasis here is on the look and feel, not the narrative (for example, there is no way to restrict it). Apart from the settings that most other people like, the description of the protagonist's light is great! I think this is the most important thing about Owen, so I give it 7.9/10 Points.

Dark Lops Zero's Unit Zero is more powerful, but it feels like Dark Ultra Killer uses Zero's light combined with killer ions, so if it was created, Dark Zero would be cooler.

Does it matter from a human standpoint? But for some humans, I suggest stick education. If stick education is not successful, just optimize it! Some of the humans who cause trouble in Ultraman are not human at all, such as Nexusri and Showa Imp.

Advantages: The protagonist wants to be Ultraman even if he faces the influence of parasitic beasts, which is a good entry point. The protagonist creation is pretty good. The supporting characters are not ooc. Disadvantages: It is strange that the protagonist runs away from the tpc at the beginning and then comes back. The second point is that it is certainly not difficult for the author to write foreshadowing in online articles, but it is difficult for readers to think that the foreshadowing is foreshadowing. The protagonist, this suspected "predecessor", involves the plot of "getting married and having children". No matter whether they are the same person or not, they have to face Hui's feelings. If it is the same person and time travels, it will seem to have no effect on the protagonist traveling back. At least as of Chapter 52, except for a necklace, it has no impact.

Why should we save those Japanese?

Have you ever been Ultraman? Just write some things randomly, taking it for granted.

The protagonist of the first week traveled through twenty years ago and also pirated Zero with Goldfinger. He came into contact with Miura Sage and met Megumi. Miura Sage's Death Awakens Kiri Elod's modifier, Miura modifies the human memory protagonist to replace him. The protagonist goes to school, gets married and has children, until the space crash three years ago. Three years later, Tiga revives and the protagonist travels back in time (Chapter 1) The question arises. The protagonist's precognitive dream was experienced by Yiwu, but Yiwu ended three years ago. How did he experience the monster? Three years ago there weren't many monsters around. The second question is that the protagonist Miura died after being intercepted in outer space. After his consciousness traveled 3 years, he became the protagonist Chu Sheng. The body of the pirated Zero was lost in outer space. Why did Tiga have a body again during his recovery period 3 years later?

It's quite interesting. It's one of the few descriptions of Reiko. She's really good-looking. I hope I'll pick it up later.

Now Ultraman Guga and Ultraman Tiga are going to join forces😋. Will there be a re-enactment of famous scenes like "please watch my transformation" for the protagonist in the future😋

(｡･ω･｡) How to deal with the alien components in the body?

Come on~

Have you ever been Ultraman? Just write it there, taking it for granted

Will he become a serious Ultraman later?

Why does it feel like some old monster has been reincarnated?

Come on, author, can you update 10 times a day?

There hasn't been an update for two days. I'm a eunuch if I don't know how to ask for leave.