Director 2008: Start with Editing

I just finished reading this book from the beginning, and I have some thoughts. This book has obvious advantages and disadvantages. The advantage is that the writing style is excellent and it doesn't look like a drama, which already defeats half of the novice writers of entertainment articles. Compared with the monotonous narratives on the market today about big things and small things that happen over time, at least the author really understands the professional knowledge of the industry of editing and even directing and actors. Of course, there are many shortcomings. Personally, I feel that the author rarely or has not read current entertainment novels for a long time. First of all, the pacing is not very good. Generally, readers who read entertainment articles prefer a faster pace. Generally, a movie will be completed within thirty chapters and has even sold out at the box office. The author's pace is a bit too slow in this regard. It took him only 100 chapters to complete a short film and then hold a school award ceremony. This is a bit strange... It is a bit difficult to accept an award for a work that is similar to a final assignment. Moreover, it is a bit too delayed to complete the shooting of two short films after catching up with the latest chapter. Secondly, most readers who read entertainment articles pursue the book for a sense of immersion. When the future stars and works in the article are mentioned, they look confused and don't know anything, which really makes people lack a sense of immersion. If you really want to be completely imaginative, you need to use more sophisticated writing, such as deepening the characterization of the protagonist and supporting characters so that readers can have a deeper understanding of the charm of the author's characters. For example, the character descriptions in the article are too scattered. For example, the protagonist's fat friend and Yundu, who doesn't even know if he is the heroine, are a little too under-described and a bit facial. , The only relatively successful description of the supporting character is (possibly) the chapter in which the heroine's best friend questions the protagonist as a scumbag, which successfully aroused my emotions and made me resent the role of the heroine's best friend. The author needs to work harder on this point, please come on. Most of the currently successful Chinese entertainment articles or entertainment articles have abandoned scenes of pretending to slap people in the face. This aspect needs to be greatly downplayed by the author. After watching it, I was deeply impressed that about 30 chapters have already described about five or six plots of pretending to slap people in the face or being inexplicably shocked. In addition, the most unacceptable poisonous point for me is that the ring that recognizes people and has a marrow-cleansing and quenching body similar to a fairy novel is a bit too dramatic, and the functions and roles of the subsequent rings are a bit too much. The ring that recognizes people, changes in size, materializes, and is used as a weapon is a bit too fantasy. In the end, I feel that the focus of this book is wrong. There are too many descriptions of professional knowledge in the article, which makes the novel a bit unbalanced. Of course, some readers may like to read such professional novels, so they need to balance this aspect. The rest are some of my personal suggestions. If you have time, the author can take a look at the current entertainment articles and understand the rhythm of the current mainstream and successful entertainment articles. After setting the outline clearly, the protagonist in the article is obviously a full-level account and does not need any other assistance. The golden finger can be appropriately downplayed later. Nowadays, there are very few novels with golden fingers from Rebirth Entertainment. In other words, even if there are golden fingers at the beginning, the description will be downplayed or not described at all in the middle and later stages. After all, novels need to distinguish priorities. In this regard, I suggest you read some of Sister Baoer's earlier novels. Overall, this novel is a well-written work by the author. It is a good novel that is uniquely described from the perspective of an editor and director. Any successful author makes progress little by little. I wish the author more efforts in the future and strive to become a god as soon as possible😁😁😁

I don't know since when, every rebirth article must have a golden finger, and this book is no exception. But unlike ordinary entertainment protagonists whose gold fingers usually come with a built-in upgrade system, since the protagonist's skills before rebirth in this book are close to the top, the first gold finger assigned to the protagonist in the book is actually a ring, and it is a ring with self-exploration functions. Let's take a look at the functions of this ring. 1. The name of this ring is the Ring of Knowing People, so its biggest function is to provide the protagonist with everyone's life history. Needless to say, this function is still necessary because the protagonist has a previous life. The biggest shortcoming is that you don't know people well. With this feature, you will never be cheated again in your life. 2. This ring can be as big or small as you like. At the current peak, it almost broke the ceiling of the dormitory. When I saw this, I observed half a second of silence for the ceiling and one minute of silence for the classmates upstairs. When it was the smallest, it turned into a ring and put it on the protagonist's hand. The biggest use of this function at present is to facilitate trapping people, which is needed when identifying people and attacking. 3. This ring can help the owner reborn and has a beauty function. It's just that the process is more painful and a little bloody. Of course, in an era where appearance is justice, this pain is still bearable. However, there are many bugs in the book when describing this function. First of all, after the protagonist was reborn, the floor tiles in the dormitory were stained red, and he walked away without taking care of it. He was not afraid of being discovered. What's even more strange is that no one noticed. Secondly. After being reborn, the protagonist's appearance became almost unrecognizable, but none of his classmates or friends around him expressed surprise, which seemed unreasonable. 4. This ring can actually be used as a weapon. The current attack method is to encircle any part of the human body and then tighten it to increase damage. For example, roping the neck can suffocate people, roping the wrist can cause fractures, etc. Alas, it's all because the entertainment industry is too deep. Boys also need to protect themselves, which forced the author to assign such a high force value to the protagonist. But it's a bit outrageous for him to trap a person and then make him disappear. This hole has not been filled yet. I hope the author can explain it more reasonably. Okay, these are the functions of the Person-Knowing Ring that I have discovered so far. If there are other functions, readers are welcome to add them below.

It was named after an entertainment novel, but the editor didn't talk about movies, there was no movie, and he didn't talk about the editing methods of a movie from the inside out. Instead, he used various dramatic conflicts and used "editing" as a means of competition. It reminded me of that TV series about street dancing and fighting, "Don't Fight Anymore."

In rebirth domestic entertainment, most dreams are to make a lot of money and do a big business. The male protagonist of this book said at the beginning that he wanted to make his own stuff. This style suddenly became full, aiming at self-worth, jumping from Maslow's physiological needs, respect needs, to the most advanced "self-realization". It is a pity that the article introduces the huge black box system of Lin Nan in the dream as a cheat. Why do I say it's a pity? Because the article has a very high intention, which makes me feel that it is not conventional. The essence of rebirth writing is to resonate with the readers' deep regrets in the past, and to make up for the regrets on behalf of the readers in the world of the book. Therefore, the huge bug of rebirth is enough to have a chance to reverse the regret. The system's cheats, which constantly provide powerful props such as rings and glasses, will weaken the reader's sense of immersion and make them feel that they may not be able to possess these powerful weapons even if they are reborn. But in the dream, Lin Nan is the author's main line. It is impossible to remove it. The only option is to introduce conspiracy settings and break with the system, or to follow the Shuangwen route to speed up Lin Nan's rise. The author's promotion of scenes and stories in the article is very good. I look forward to more good articles from you.

The plot is so cliche! The protagonist wants to film a work! I found a girl I had "peeped" at twice before (what a coincidence). The girl's best friend thinks that this director is also lying to girls, and it is also a lie to say that he used old-fashioned machines to shoot! Later I saw the protagonist with another girl (the protagonist was editing to help others make money)! This best friend hit him with her schoolbag (this kind of thing should be beaten back directly, at most it's just a blow, otherwise the sentence will be more severe if you encounter a bad guy, beating him back is cost-effective)! The protagonist explained again and told her why he used an old-fashioned machine to shoot! That's all I've seen for now. So why don't this girl and her best friend go to the place where they borrow the equipment and ask the teacher? Go to their class and find out! Is it harder? Didn't you open your mouth?

You can read the first three chapters, but in the end it's all about pretending to be a slap in the face, applying for equipment, pretending to be a slap in the face, making a short film, asking actors, the actors question, pretending to be a slap in the face, going to make movies for others to make money, then pretending to be a slap in the face, going to Internet cafes, pretending to be a slap in the face, I met a new female classmate, and then the actresses I worked with were all questioning me. The actress classmates were all questioning me, as if the male protagonist was a heinous person, and one of his classmates from the fucking school was just looking for you to act in a short film. I haven't watched it since. Either I'm pretending to be B or I'm on the way to pretending to be B. The key is to pretend I don't understand. The onlookers either questioned the protagonist's ability or character, and then there were various proofs from the protagonist. The protagonist really has no B character at all.

The first three chapters are pretty good. The scenes and techniques are all written out, and the characters are also unfolding. At first, I thought it was a bit nonsensical when I saw overhead entertainment. Isn't this a lack of sense of immersion? But if you think about it carefully, it doesn't hurt to be a beginner in entertainment industry writing. People who have no idea about the real entertainment industry can read it and get a feel for the author's original entertainment industry and works. At a glance, you can tell that the author has put a lot of thought into these works. It is obvious whether he is careful or not. Sometimes I regret that some works cannot be shown in reality, and I can only imagine these scenes in my mind. And it can be seen that the author's outline is very complete. The plot from beginning to end, as well as the foreshadowing should have been thought out from the beginning. It is quite complete, but there seems to be a problem with the detailed distribution. Some places are too detailed and look like a running account, and some places are too fast and are gone in one stroke. But does the author want to write too many things? It should have been a cool article. With the protagonist's super editing skills, he passed five levels and defeated six generals. From winning awards in school to showing off his skills as a blockbuster director after graduation, he won numerous awards and later influenced an industry. It's enough to become a generational legend. Just let everyone be happy if you and I are happy. Although those powers, artifacts, puzzles, and dreams can enrich the content, they will inevitably feel like a déjà vu. After reading the article, there are daily campus life, supernatural powers, decryption, and sharing of editing knowledge. Recently, there is also daily life on the set. It is both necessary and difficult to write well. I don't see what the author wants to write most. The campus fight at the beginning is a bit too long, and the characters are not particularly impressive. They are all tools of the plot... Oh no, there is one thing that impressed me deeply. The scenes where Wang Xiaoling appeared in chapters 18, 19, and 20 were so poisonous that he almost died from the poison. It was so disconnected! There's something wrong with the portrayal of this female supporting role, what's going on? She could be a sun-kissed best friend who makes the heroine feel extremely safe, but she ended up being like this? Or is this actually a villain? It's understandable to worry about the heroine, she can have a strong personality, but she can't be like a lunatic, hitting people indiscriminately? Is the male protagonist still smiling helplessly to disgust the readers? I read the latest chapter and I feel the same. The emotions of the supporting characters are too repetitive and one-sided. They are angry and humiliated at one time and happy and happy at the other. It is a bit uncomfortable to read. It should be that the conflict and emotional interaction are not very well written, but it looks pretty good when I am single-playing through various works on a daily basis. So in fact, this is not Huayuwen, nor is it a simple rebirth. Let's not call it Director 2008. Let's just call me a great director who traveled to another world. With a fantasy worldview and various racial conflicts, it will definitely be more interesting than it is now, and superpowers and artifacts will appear very harmonious. Compared with the current parallel time and space, most of them are the same but some are different, slightly the same, which is better... Although I realized later that this is also one of the foreshadowings... Then, some classics that are now well-known in the world can be photographed with alien faces, giving a little shock to the other world. Wouldn't it be wonderful? Generally speaking, you can read it when passing the time. The island battle royale and desert island survival mentioned in the preface are not there yet. I am looking forward to it. Come on, author.

Personally, I feel that it is very difficult to write well about entertainment. There are too many people writing about this subject, it takes a long time, and the routines are relatively fixed. The structure of the rest of the articles is very different. In terms of more details, writing about entertainment well will test the author's writing skills. He must handle the relationship between the characters and the interesting settings between the works, write appropriately, be coherent and not abrupt, and it is best to have some whimsical jokes to attract readers' interest and continue to read. I feel like the author didn't handle the plot very well. The transitions between plots were a little awkward, and there were few interesting points and they were not very coherent.

It seems there are no comments! I've been at work lately so updates have been a little slow, but I've updated 4,000 words since October 11th. If the data is good, you can stick to it. If not, I guess there will be fewer updates, because I have seven days off from work in the first half of the month, and even the rest time is as busy as a business trip. In addition, if you click in, even if you don't like it, I hope you can leave your own opinions in the comment area, either like or comment. The outline of this book was designed with a million words in mind, so it will definitely be written to the end. Even if the number of readers is bleak, it's okay. After all, we have experienced it, but every new book will always be better than the last one. It is really tiring to write a book at work, because of the special nature of the work, even taking a break is like a business trip to report, traveling around. But there is no way, writing is a hobby. After putting it aside for a while, I still want to come back and continue writing. The bleak data is disappointing for me. The important thing is that I like to share the plots I write with more people to see and comment on. Friends who come in, even if they don't vote, at least leave comments 🤭🤭🤭. I wish you a happy life, a prosperous business and good health.

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An elevated background? A double-edged sword, the author is great

It's pretty good. I read it in one sitting. Very nice!

Who would pay attention to a clip?

It currently has 710,000 words. Overall, this book is readable. Based on my memory, I will share my personal feelings for the reference of the author and other readers. The first chapter of the opening chapter is very good. The narrative is straightforward and the details of the scenes and all the characters are clear and three-dimensional. At first glance, it seems that it has been refined and has a successful start. Reading from all the following chapters, it seems that this is not the first book the author wrote. Some small details are captured very well. As I said before, some small story designs, such as the TV station negotiating the contract, have all the beginnings and transitions, and the emotions are in place. It shows that the author's current level is very good at seeing the big from the small. In the early stage, editing technology was used to drive the full text forward. The technical content occupied a large amount of space, but the effect was not good. First, apart from the good control in the first three chapters, some of the following chapters are filled with various industry terms and techniques from beginning to end. Without the aid of other content, it is easy to dissuade some readers. It gives people the impression that it is not about telling a story, but to explain the technology clearly and to put a layer of story over the technology. When the author describes these things, he always wants to write them clearly at once, but does not cut these things into segments by switching scenes, or recalling them, which will lead to updates on certain days and the whole day, which is not good. Second, in the early stages of editing technology, too much emphasis was placed on efficiency and speed. Comparing it to martial arts, it always looks like Dongfang Invincible, flying with his hands busy. I have overlooked that the male protagonist has a lot of theoretical talents, and I have not read the sense of immersion in the ingenuity and ingenuity of slowly cutting out an inconspicuous film while strolling in the garden. Thirdly, in the early stage, there was no detailed description of the emotional life of the characters. It was all about technical flow. At first, I thought it was because the author was not good at it. Later, I found that the writing in the latter part was okay. Maybe he wanted to change the style, but the result was not ideal. In terms of the setting of the whole book, the layout is a bit large. I feel that I can't write that huge feeling at the moment. I feel like I want to make everything reasonable, but the result is that it can't be carried out. And it can be seen that the author wrote according to his own outline. Affected by the setting, the male protagonist has different personalities in real life and dreams. In the dream world, and when using golden finger props, I felt a sense of fragmentation from my daily editing life. When it gets serious, it almost becomes two people. Although there is brain-computer data collection and uploading later, which can be understood from the side, it is not easy to read. The effect of multi-player time travel is not good, and it is not recommended. Because those who come first have a great butterfly effect on the world. As for the male protagonist, he deals with problems through his past life memories and experiences in the early stage. There will be conflicts, which are not obvious in the early stages. One month before the Chinese New Year, the update quality is poor. It should be affected by the author's real life. Since the Chinese New Year, the level has increased. The character's ability and the movie part are closely related to the theme and the writing is very good. It can be predicted that combined with the author's strength, if he writes a slow variety show in the future, it will definitely be brilliant. Xiao He has just revealed his talents, and I look forward to the author's continued progress.

I don't read much about the entertainment industry, so this is an attempt, so it's a completely new experience. First of all, the author's writing style is very smooth, without any sluggishness or lag. This is the basis for being able to read without abandoning the text. I don't know if the author has a background in related fields, or has spent time researching it. The technical aspects are very professional and detailed, but they are not too far away from ordinary readers, and the level is just right for readers to keep up with after careful thinking. Then there is the rhythm, which is generally quite slow. It can be seen that the author is not in a hurry, and the setting is gentle, which is a very restrained writing style. This way of writing is more disadvantageous and has higher requirements on readers. There are also some disadvantages. For example, the plot, compared to the smoothness of the writing, is relatively average. It reminds me of driving in a car on the country road when I was a child, bumping and bumping... In addition, the character creation is not very strong. It can be seen that the author of some supporting characters has put a lot of thought into it, trying to stand up as soon as they appear, but it is not too successful. Then there are some names that are really hard to describe, too casual, that is to say... Overall, it's okay, you can read it when you have time.

There are currently two props in this book, one is the Person-Recognizing Ring and the other is the Mirrorless. The precept of knowing people is to know the human heart, and the mirrorless one is to observe the world. This predictable and ultimate setting is quite awesome. The author may have intentionally weakened this connection. The author highlights the ring's physical aggressiveness, yin characteristics, and even the ability to destroy corpses and eliminate traces. It also has the function of reincarnating a pig's feet at one time; at the same time, it gives the glasses the yin characteristics of controlling gravity. To be honest, props strengthen the protagonist in the same way. The rebirth itself has strengthened the protagonist's own physique, and he can already fight against the enemies in his previous life; the rings and glasses both have the ability to covertly attack people, and the increase in force is too strong without any obvious difference in promoting the plot. According to the principle of Occam's razor, redundant elaboration needs to be eliminated to avoid causing readers' aesthetic fatigue. Of course, you can design a main plot to reflect the synergy of the two props and make the setting reasonable. From the fact that Lin Nan repeatedly emphasized the characteristics of the combination of treasures in the dream in the article, I tend to think that it may be a deliberate foreshadowing to show "observe the world and control the world; understand people's hearts and conquer people's hearts". The ring of identifying people is on Wang Aiguo's neck. Even the experts in ancient medical skills cannot detect it. Traditional Chinese medicine pays attention to looking, smelling, asking and feeling. It is necessary to observe whether the respiratory passages are restricted. It is a clear indication that the ring is invisible. On the other hand, in the dream, Lin Nan repeatedly emphasized that the person-knowing ring must not be seen, otherwise its functions would be blocked, such as unlimited flying. The ring around the neck obviously has an unlimited function that can be large or small. Therefore, there is a conflict here, and there must be explanation later to show that this is a hidden line, not a book-eating one. Setting cheats in the text usually gives clues to the protagonist becoming stronger, or gives the protagonist the rationality to change his life against the will of nature. It is not a cheat just for the sake of writing cheats. You should pay special attention to this point and don't ignore the basics. The difference between a layman and an expert is whether he can turn a patch into a highlight. Skilled craftsmen can turn jade flaws into brilliance in their works. It is said that Tang Bohu was good at turning mildew spots on fans into the composition of paintings. I believe he can turn decay into magic and create wonderful chapters in the future.

It's quite novel to enter the entertainment industry from the perspective of editing.

The angle is quite novel, I hope to write something new

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​: ​​ Lin Nan's golden finger design is pretty good, a bit ordinary, not amazingly powerful, but it just suits him and brings a lot of cool points. Generally speaking, this book is suitable for reading with your brain. It is not a mindless and enjoyable book, but it becomes more enjoyable as you read to the end. And what I didn't expect is that while reading this book, I actually learned a lot of knowledge. It was only after I read what the author wrote earlier that I realized that the author would continue to learn the director's techniques, the filming process, the editing method, the adjustment of acting skills, etc. Every day. Every time the protagonist makes a move, it is almost equivalent to the author's own re-creation. As a novice, I really learned a lot of unknown knowledge during the reading process. I am very grateful to the author, and I especially admire the author for his perseverance. He has been diligent in learning and writing, and has brought us such a good work.

My name is Lin Nan. I know that no one thinks highly of me, no matter how powerful I am, I am still "not doing my job properly". I struggled in that world for many years, and finally came to that moment. After all, I fell down at the moment before my dream was about to set sail. But I am lucky, I was reborn, and I traveled through time into the body of a little boy. Yes, just like me, his name is Lin Nan. Since fate has given me a chance, I will never let it go this time. Fortunately, people here understand me very well, and my parents also understand me very well. I feel very relieved. But the only thing that I didn't expect was that time travel actually told me early on that my choice has always been an unchanging logic, precisely because I met him, the former Lin Nan... I can see Lin Nan, and I can also see Lin Nan! Yes, I was and am, we can see each other. This may be difficult to understand! But it's like a dream. Crying, crying very sadly, so who am I? Who is Lin Nan now, before time travel? I didn't understand until the end. I... Just became data... ——Tang Yu Black Cat

As the saying goes, books that are exempt from the upper limit are not necessarily good books, but 90% of those that are exempt from the upper limit are bad books.

I recommend a good book with a niche setting "I Can Go to the Past and the Future". The first chapter is voiced by a female Loli author. It is a light novel with a male channel. The background is a passionate adventure in the fantasy future interspersed with daily love. It mainly uses the floating city in the interstellar era as the world view. There are nine ways to sublimate potions + three Ten sequential paths are the core timeline setting text, witty fighting + decisive killing, the plot is interlocking, there are many foreshadowings such as grass snakes and gray lines, the details are controlled, the setting party, there are no bloody routines and brainless plots, the overall is relaxed, interesting and semi-invincible. Brothers and sisters who are interested can come and take a look.

I got a Silver Alliance last month, so why is my author level still level one? No effect at all?

Those who write about entertainment are just making excuses. Haha, what are you writing about? Who can watch if you don't feel immersed?

I have read the latest chapter, please write down your feelings after reading it. Let's talk about the overall story first, the original background and characters, the story is relatively complete, and the character design of the protagonist is also passable. It is a good book to read during the book shortage period. Why is it said to be hay? Based on my personal feelings, let's talk about it from four aspects! First, plot design. The main theme of rebirth literature is the same as that of similar genres, which is to use the experience accumulated in the previous life. In this life, the young man becomes famous and gains greater achievements. This is no problem. There is a drawback! Goldfinger appeared too late. When I first watched it, I thought there were no cheats. Moreover, this cheat has a bit of a conspiracy atmosphere, and it seems to be a two-way advancement with the main plot. Personally, I prefer something more relaxed and everyday. There are also a few plots that are quite abrupt, and there are suspicions of deliberately creating conflicts. The author actually writes about daily life quite well, so there is no need to force a paragraph. Second, character design. The feeling given to me by the protagonist is that the emotional intelligence of the protagonist is still not high after rebirth (no derogatory meaning), and the IQ will not increase after rebirth. He is a live person, without that perfect and smooth facade. Although the protagonist is sometimes impulsive and a bit pushy, occasionally I felt a little awkward while reading, but it is not a big problem. Then there is the heroine. There is no doubt that she is a single heroine. She can enjoy a young love affair. As for the other characters, the description of the appearance of the heroine's best friend almost dissuaded me. She is an impulsive, brainless and very stereotyped image. The male protagonist's roommates are almost the same as the background. Characters from various crews appear interspersed. The memory is not deep, and I can't remember it after watching it briefly. Third, rhythm advancement. It's too fast. I don't know if it's the finishing touches. The pace seems to be much faster. When filming movies and TV series, winning awards, a lot of details are missing. Including the protagonist's contact with famous actors, stars and other well-known figures in the previous life, the details were not written, and it felt very dry. I just kept reading. Fourth, the overall feeling. It is purely original, the script is original, and the characters are original, which results in a weak sense of substitution and a lack of excitement. There should be a branch line after Lin Nan's rebirth to fight against Wang Jianzhi, who suppressed him in his previous life, but the details are unclear, and it feels like this branch line has been abandoned. In the dream, Lin Nan has a bit of a conspiracy theory, and plug-ins are very hot, and the protagonist can't avoid people when using plug-ins, and Kuku is the output. To outsiders, he seems very awesome, saying that he has strong field control ability, but these things are not scrutinized, that is, the protagonist meets all good people and no one cares about them. Ahem, I wanted to praise it first. After all, I can still watch it. Why is it all said to be a flaw? The author definitely put more effort into creating original plots and characters than the same type of real-life background Chinese entertainment movies. It is basically coherent and has some excitement. The character design of the protagonist also has advantages and disadvantages and is relatively lively. If you get tired of watching too many realistic backgrounds, you can try it for a different taste.

I read Huayu in the square and opened this book. What can I say? It's a bit strange to use an imaginary background when writing entertainment articles, and it naturally lacks a level of immersion. For example, the female character you mentioned, you said she was very beautiful, and then I could only say, oh, she is beautiful, but this is an entertainment article. Picking up real-life female stars is a great pleasure in this type of article. As the protagonist, I picked up Liu Yifei, Da Mi Mi, Dilraba, etc. Wait, it's nice to think about it. Although it avoids censorship and reports from crazy fans, it lacks this sense of satisfaction. I don't know if it is worth the loss. Or maybe the author uses homophonic words to make us know that it is this star at the same time, but it doesn't feel like this. As for the rest of the writing, I always feel a sense of alienation for no reason, but if it's a professional content, at least it feels like it can fool me, hahaha

After keeping it for a while, I happened to catch up on the latest chapter when I had time after the new year. In terms of the amount of updates, the author has done a good job. Rain or shine, two chapters a day can be said to be a large volume. This is also the main thing that attracts me. After all, there are few authors who write entertainment articles nowadays who update them so steadily. Now to summarize my feelings about reading novels recently, I can see that the author is an author who is good at listening to readers' feelings. After I said last time that the pacing was too slow, the pace of the novel has been significantly accelerated, and the inexplicable pretense and slap-in-the-face plots that were present every few chapters have been reduced. At the same time, the scenes of the artifact ring that are particularly interesting have been reduced. I give this a big thumbs up. The plug-in is really uncomfortable to watch, and it finally has a heroine role. Haha, it feels weird that the entertainment story is not complete and the heroine's role is not complete. Now is the time for shortcomings, and clichés are still unavoidable. This kind of completely imaginary Huayuwen has to rack its brains to think about what kind of movie it is every time it sees a new work. It feels like an exam. Haha, this feeling has discouraged many readers. In the future, if you write a new book or it is an entertainment novel, you can try a normal, non-fictional Chinese entertainment novel. You can try to make an outline with a timeline, and serve as the flesh and bones of the story at every hour. I believe that with your current writing style, you can write a novel with good results. Of course, you must continue to work hard to read some good books to enrich yourself. After all, basically every successful author has this experience, but it can be seen that I am a person who is good at listening to readers' opinions. This is already on the way, please continue to work hard!

Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you

What the hell is Wanguo School of Visual Arts? Can't find any. Only then did I realize that saying that the theater next door to Nortel was a Chinese drama was a lie. They had lied to me for several years. Recently, it was only 15 kilometers away.