Cultivation of Immortality: Begin to Become a God by Building a Business System

It's quite immersive, but the pace is slow, give it a try and see

This is the mortal version 2.0. Although I am still a mortal and have no spiritual roots, the entire world view has completely subverted my understanding. I am not a cow or a horse, but I feel like cows and horses are everywhere, hahahaha

Entering the world of immortality in the Internet era, and the dynasty in the farming period, these two are too strange to be put together. At present, I have seen a jade plate similar to personal dynamics. I don't know how the authors in the future will insert it. Isn't the secret realm all an electronic sea?

The young Luo Ming bears the deep hatred of his sister and father and bravely ventures into the world of immortality with his "waste spirit root". The emotions are well written, the conflict and motivation are just right, and it has a good mortal flow.

Writing a book is not easy, so stay with me!

It is recommended that the author scan the list and read other people's books. This writing method is too old and looks a bit tiring

The subject matter is quite new. I personally look forward to the description of the world of cultivating immortals in the new era. Unfortunately, the author doesn't write much about it. But the book is quite beautiful overall, so I give it a 5-star review.

I feel that the pace is too slow at the beginning. I personally prefer to go straight to the main plot, because I have read so many similar fairy tales where the male protagonist's family members are killed. In order to take revenge, he adds a waste spiritual root and slowly cultivates. Later, it is different from other immortal cultivators. It gives me the illusion of a modern immortal cultivator. I suggest that there be more character descriptions, so as to highlight personal characteristics. The good thing is that the author's imagination is good. It would be better if the plot pace is faster.