The Man with the Strongest Punch Just Wants to Lie Down

You can't write too many chapters if you only subtract without adding. After all, the setting environment is so messy, and the protagonist will have to take action sooner or later.

Female author? Why does it feel like a female channel? It's quite cool, especially the interaction with the female protagonist.

I think there is a problem. The source of the charm of the one-shot male Saitama teacher is that he is a hero driven by interest. Saitama teacher knows what a hero is. If I have to say, One-Hit Man is a group drama, One-Hit Man is just the character who is finally solved. Saitama became a hero not for the praise of others, nor for money. He became a hero simply because of his interest. He desecrates himself to protect the dignity of other heroes and bears the anger of others because of the meteorite's destruction. , He has no moral shackles, the trolley problem, is he not a hero if he only saves one person? Let's talk about the outstanding group portraits of One Punch Man. The undocumented knight knows that he cannot do something, but the courage to do it is a hero. King is obviously very weak and can face four dragon-level monsters alone. He is also a hero.

Your title is "The Strongest Man Just Wants to Lie Down", but you wrote it completely as a daily novel, but the hidden settings of the male and female protagonists are very unflattering, and the writing is not strong enough, and the daily flavor is very weak, like a TM account. It has the flavor of the ancient gangster male protagonist and the school beauty female protagonist from 15 years ago. I no longer like reading these. Either the author should strengthen his writing skills in the daily part to make up for the hidden poisonous points between lovers, or he should cut down the writing in the daily part. There is a saying that hiding something between lovers is the most nonsense. It is like lying under the guise of doing your best. And especially the reason why the male protagonist hides his love for the female protagonist is that he is afraid of being too emotionally drained. I can't figure it out. Just say that you are very powerful, but it comes at the cost of consuming emotions, and then let the female protagonist ask the best friend at the top of the association (from the male protagonist's perspective) if she has a more perfect potion. (The article mentioned that the mood stabilizing potion purchased with 10 points is useful, but it is ineffective because it can only suppress negative emotions) You are a bit forced to suppress your intelligence. Telling the heroine is not the same as telling the association. Even if the heroine is an ordinary person, as a future partner, she should not hide it. This is like getting married in the future. The man has a sexually transmitted disease or genetic disease, but there is no difference in not telling the woman. The same goes for the woman. It's like, the woman is the president of a company, but she doesn't tell the man, so she forces him to work at the bottom. It's okay now, the man has become a civil servant on his own, but what about before the plot started? How should I put it? These are some of my complaints about this book.

Just making a phone call, if you are not particularly trusting, it is really easy for people to have other ideas. It will reduce the relationship, so why not tell your girlfriend to avoid trouble in the future? Do you think that confessing your identity will make the other party feel inferior? Then it is better to have a good talk.

Crazy English Li Yang🙂 No malice, but the name is too coincidental

The author should take a look at the comment area and consider whether there is something wrong with the writing. Generally, if there are too few comment areas, the book will most likely be GG.

Another point is that the media of comics and novels are different. The daily funny plots in comics can become the seasoning to polish the plot and over-dramatize. It is too difficult to write daily stories well in novels, and there is also the suspicion of watershed. I hope it will be well written, I thought it was the plot structure of One Punch Man

Chapter 39 has been blocked for review, and the author doesn't feel like he has written anything too white... Please wait a moment for those who are following it, it will be released as soon as it is unblocked.

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